A Common Man Marches East Across the River with His Sword in Hand

Tell the truth! The first few dozen pictures were very well written. After they were put on the shelves, the author started to fill them in, especially after the mirror came out. Compared with the previous ones, they were not written by one person. Guess, this book will be a eunuch

I have been following this book until now, and I would like to make some suggestions. I don't know what the author's state is these days. Each chapter is better than the last, and now he has 4 chapters. Some of the content that was repeated before is repeatedly ignored, or it can be mentioned in one stroke, and half of the entire chapter is described in detail. You are updating once a day now, but you haven't updated it in the past few days. The content is short and weak, the plot is slow and slow, and it is updated from time to time. The protagonist is only at the eighth level now. Judging from the current plot, it is difficult to finish the book without 1000 chapters. Even if you update it every month in the future, it will take 3 years (the current two large chapters have more than 200 chapters and have just reached the eighth level). It feels uncomfortable to read it every day. Having said so much, I still hope that the author can adjust his status in the new year and stop being arrogant.

I originally thought the novel was pretty good. A slower plot is acceptable. Author, could you please change it so that you don't push too hard in front of monsters? It could kill you. If you can do it, try not to push too hard. After you finish, you can brag for a few chapters and it'll be fine.

I checked your Motosuri, and I stopped writing it after 56 chapters. You are so irresponsible, why are you writing a novel?

I heard that there is a high chance of dystocia. I was recommended by Yuantong

I feel better this way. The word "zhanjian" doesn't fit in with that of a common man. How nice it sounds to hold a knife! I hope the author can see me. Would you like to see the beautiful and cute young lady below?

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Actually, I just want to complain about the title of the book. It has nothing to do with "Every Man with a Sword" and "The Great River Goes East". The combination of them just makes me feel awkward and awkward.

Please post the synopsis of I Am Really Not a God and let us know what the follow-up will be like if that novel is not popular. I really like it.

No more eunuchs! ! ! , Come back and write!