The Power of Konoha's Fist

You may have misunderstandings about Saitama's power You said it yourself, Saitama's experience card reaches 66%, which is equal to the Eight Gates Kaihuang. I think one percent is enough.

I checked repeatedly but could not find where the setting of Three Holy Lands and One Holy Mountain came from, and the dog-licking protagonist was licking the monkey's cold farts crazily throughout the whole process. Teacher Saitama's setting is to break through the limiter without an upper limit. The next second he can punch himself the previous second, as long as he is willing to become infinitely stronger. When a certain time comes, this kind of psychic beast will be a complete burden. Can't it be developed in a wretched way? It has to be a dog.

Let's talk about the place we just traveled through. Let's not talk about whether your little arms and legs can outrun Jiulama's fox. Let's talk about you. Would you go out of your way to find a stone to hit an ant? He actually used the tailed beast jade to smash it, and it happened to be aimed at the unlucky child of the protagonist? Can I say that the author is exaggerating? Okay, let's not talk about this, let's talk about the protagonist's unreasonable "card drawing" luck. He has drawn so many times but never drawn a permanent card. However, the night before he entered the Ninja School, he drew a permanent card directly? It's still a top-notch card... Emmm, it's awesome, we're convinced. Well, I just want to say that the author is too deliberate every time he lets the protagonist get a card. For example, the card has already been drawn, and it is only mentioned in passing when it is used. Otherwise, if you draw a card, it will be the beginning of a plot. Well, there is no sense of expectation at all. If there are too many situations, it will become boring.

Dear author, what you wrote at the beginning was easily misunderstood, leading to dismissal. If the function of Mr. Saitama's character card could be explained clearly at the beginning of the article, the book might become more popular. Come on! Don't be a eunuch

To be honest, it's fun to write about Naruto, as long as it's good-looking, but it has to be about the love affair with the little Japanese, the life-and-death friendship, and the real strength to persuade him to quit.

If this system can actually draw characters, then you can consider drawing some strange weapons.

Compared with other system books, this book does not describe the system so much. It mainly describes the growth of the protagonist, which is good. It does not make people feel that the protagonist is being led by the system. The writing style is also good, because I am listening to the book, so the details are described very well, and the previous text does not follow the subsequent text. There is no abrupt performance. However, I would like to remind the author that if he only writes about the world of Naruto, the audience is still a bit small. I don't know how the results are at the starting point, but it can be seen here that it is a bit miserable. If I were not looking for One Punch Man novels, I would not be able to find your novel. I hope that the author will have a good recommendation position when it is published in the future. I suggest that the author can do some time travel, or anti-travel, or can lead a group to travel through time and get copies. Marvel is good, and it has become very popular recently. Recommendation votes are given.

Repeated chapters, typos, introduction and content... Emmmm... Speechless =_=

I'm off topic, the title is One Punch of Konoha, One Punch is the theme, you have to focus on One Punch, alas!

Someone gave me money, so I have to give a good review😁