One Punch Man: the Revealer

I said I wanted to reveal the secret, but why is it the protagonist who always gets the credit? Saitama-sensei's presence is so low...

The male protagonist is too disgusting, like Green Tea Man. The author should consider changing the male protagonist and changing the plot. The original version looked good, but then the male protagonist kept saying this and that and it became more and more disgusting. Like Green Tea and the author, take a look at your comments. How many people scolded you?

Don't blindly repeat certain things. Just like what you wrote, the staff said to the protagonist that it was time to thank Saitama and the protagonist. The protagonist said that he didn't need to take me with him. It was Saitama's business. After reading Chapter 30, he repeated it several times. If you write like this, it is easy for others to think that the people here are brainless. Keep reminding them.

Who is the heroine: Fubuki, Tatsumaki or Saitama?

Although the three golden balls appear too much, it is not a poisonous point, but it is a bit boring to watch. The description of the battle scenes does not need to be much, and the daily life can also be dull, but can you describe the protagonist's improvement in strength every time? Just write about absorbing the light group, sucking the fart, not mentioning what is sucked, and not mentioning whether it is useful. The more you read, the less interesting it is. It is better to just write about invincibility. The upgrade flow must be clear about upgrades.

Didn't you kill a lizard man? The lizard man's skills haven't been developed yet.

If you don't like the protagonist and Saitama being together, don't read it. For book lovers who like pure and refreshing writing, don't read it For book lovers who like semi-invincible and refreshing novels, you can read this For book lovers who like casual novels... Don't read this, this book doesn't look like a casual novel. Now that I see it, I still don't understand what the protagonist is going to do. If it's a cool novel and he goes out to hang out, how can he flirt with girls under Saitama? Flirting tornado? There is nothing else to do but goof around.

I really like watching it. This is the best book I've ever read.

It's okay, mainly because the article is too routine. It looks like the number of words in water, without any ups and downs. There are no engaging descriptions of battles. Even Boros's fight is brushed aside, and the writing is light on emotion. So the author should work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

Chapter 300, the score of 9.2 Is already very good. As for the water content, I will add more after reading it.