Start a Family and Start a Business in the Pirate World

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It's a bit like prose, with a very casual feel. You can read it if it's finished. The 100 chapters are about the protagonist retiring from the navy, picking up Robin's "corpse" and getting pregnant and giving birth to a child, saving Zefa, defeating the sand crocodile, teaming up with the sand to go to the sky island, and conquering the water.

It is a very industrial or academic novel. There is nothing particularly outstanding about it, and there is also nothing particularly flawed about it. For the author, only those who can write their own things will be rated as the best. It's barely visible, ranked in the middle. Most of the average ones are ranked in the middle. As for the middle and upper ones, they are beautiful but they have not written anything of their own and have no system of their own. The author believes that this book has the potential to enter the upper class, but it is only a potential. The master of the novel collection on the same track is Shen San. He has his own understanding of the Three Kingdoms and updates the version through God's will when there are bugs in the plot logic [that is, the spiritual energy is further revived and the rules of the world are changed]. But the problem is, whether it is Shensan, Xinsan or Three Kingdoms, after all, they are based on history, so they have their own understanding. When they write their own things, how should I say, they will be very thick and have the weight of history. The biggest problem with fan fiction is that the comics themselves have nothing to do with history and are just pure fictional worlds. Reading the Three Kingdoms thirty or fifty times will give you your own things and your own understanding, because the Romance of the Three Kingdoms may have many mistakes, but after all, it is based on real history. So at key nodes, even if something does not happen according to the development of the story itself, it will be forcibly corrected by the invisible hand, that is, the fate of God. And the key nodes modified by God's will can definitely withstand scrutiny. The problem is that pure comics don't do that. It's even different from short fairy tales and novels. For example, Snow White, because it is short, can have too many angles and too many interpretations. As for long-form comics, they are still created by a few people, they are still commercial, that is, they are not polished carefully, and they are still pure fictional stories. Well, even if you read it thirty or fifty times, you will only find more problems and bugs as you read, because the story itself is not based on what really happened. Therefore, it is difficult to rate fan fiction as high quality. In the author's opinion, the author is trying to write something of his own and become a butterfly out of his cocoon. The author writes about One Piece, but it is the One Piece that the author understands and is logically self-consistent. From the current point of view, the progress is gratifying and the progress is obvious. It is really full of vitality and everything is in full bloom. Therefore, I think this book has the potential to be excellent. But the author is very pessimistic about the probability of realizing the potential. Even if the author is not bad and the level of ability is sufficient, even so, in the end he will be limited by the original work and cannot write anything of his own. A very simple and clear logic. If you really have the ability [above 90 points], is it easier to draw on white paper by yourself or to smear on other people's works [around 80 points or even less than 80 points]? Just smear it on a white paper and you can write a top-notch work in 90 minutes. But to paint on other people's works, you may need a score of 95 or above. Therefore, fandom is a crutch for novice authors and a prison for experienced authors. The author says so much just for the following sentence, and it is impossible to say this sentence directly. It is difficult for readers to understand, so it is necessary to add a mental journey and a cause and effect. [The author may have the ability to try to write something original or even something without a system (the system is also a crutch, the system is just a kind of cheat). Writing that kind of originality may succeed or fail, but I think the current track is incompatible with the author's current skill level. The author thinks that the author's writing style is out of place and exaggerated in the fandom world, but at the very least it's smelly and awkward.

So be careful. Either choose the powerful fruit in the original work, which is the high-level natural type, the top superhuman type, and the fantasy beast species. If you want to write about original fruits, it is best to write about natural and fantasy beast species. It is difficult to describe the strength of the Superman system without the original work. This is also a point where many pirate fan fiction fails.

The first three pictures are unremarkable, but the later ones get better and better. The protagonists are the pirate version of Escanor, the sun god, who has a child with Robin, and Garp's disciple, a boy and a girl. This is the best thing I've seen in the past year

Although it's a little watery, the fluidity is good

I was very discouraged at the beginning. After all, getting engaged and married to a person with amnesia for no reason is too outrageous. For the sake of the previous book, I will wait and see with 3 stars and hope that it will look better in the future.

It's fun to watch and it suits my taste

I feel pretty good after watching it all the way. I can't stop watching it. Please update it soon.

The author's name is really useless. The first move was called Dust Slash, and later he established an organization called Umbrella Company. Let's just say, if you write a doomsday article, forget it. It is not suitable for high-level martial arts, spiritual recovery, and scientific and technological articles. But this is a pirate novel, shouldn't it be divided?