Fierce Pawn

My idol is Fan Wenzhenggong Zhongyan, and then I accidentally discovered that the top student actually has Fan Wenzhenggong? ! I was immediately overjoyed. Then I chased and chased, and finally I finished chasing the top student. Then I read the previous books of Lao Gao in one go, and decided that it was you! ! ! Wish your new book a great success!

I like historical novels very much. I have read Zhang Baiye's Tang Dynasty, which has so many top emperors with charming soldiers and souls and becomes emperors, Qin officials in July and New Bo, and Spring and Autumn I am the King. I searched and found very few historical novels about the Spring and Autumn Period. I would like to ask if you have any intention in this regard? After all, there are too few novels about the Spring and Autumn Period.

Comrade Lao Gao finally started writing Zhan Hegemon. He was so excited that without saying a word, he gave out daily recommendation votes. But Lao Gao, can you write a few more chapters every day...

I think the protagonist can be really stupid sometimes. Unfortunately, the protagonist comes from a later generation. He always appoints a military general to serve as the local leader for a long time, and does not send spies. He always says that his daughter Guo Weiwei is like the daughter of the previous life. I feel disgusted when I read the chapters describing Guo Weiwei. The protagonist does not understand fairness and spoils his daughter too much.

The beginning is about Guiyuan. I searched on Baidu but could not find the year number. Later I saw that it was an imaginary historical text. I lost most of my interest in an instant because there were too many loopholes in the fictitious text. Everything was made up by my own imagination. However, this requires a lot of supporting evidence. This setting is in line with the development and changes of the situation. But this is simply impossible to do. As long as there is one unreasonable point, the entire dozens of chapters will be invalidated. Then the hostile forces will be replaced, and the last one will be "useless and scholar." Come on, the scholars of the Tang Dynasty are different from the scholars of the Song Dynasty. How can you read this kind of writing when there are loopholes all over the floor?

I was completely devastated. Duan Sanniang's writing was so ****, but the relic wooden sword left by the master to the protagonist was given to someone in just two or three sentences? It's so simple, why fight?

He is said to have a soul in his 30s, but he appears to be a young and ignorant boy. It was written that Han Xiaowu was beaten to a point where he was lame. The protagonist's performance was suddenly forcibly reduced, he was reckless and impulsive, and his lack of IQ did not make him look like a person in his 30s. The description of the master is also unclear, and his character traits are not clearly shown. I taught my third senior brother to sing, but the writing was also very twisted. Is it appropriate to sing a modern love song? Not thoughtful enough, not rigorous in thinking, not good enough in writing. Please give me more advice

The writing and plot of Lao Gao's novel are very good, but the layout is too small. The time traveler does not change society, technology, geographical pattern, and does not know how to start a voyage. The fifth company does not have at least common sense, such as currency, gunpowder, coke, etc. There are few things that everyone living in society understands, and Lao Gao's protagonist does not know any of them. It's like people from the Song Dynasty traveled through the Tang Dynasty, not even people from the Ming Dynasty. Failure! The strange thing is that the protagonist of Lao Gao is actually a military strategist, politician, and martial artist. Even if his IQ is not above the average level, he doesn't look like that. So the beginning should be written like this, a story about a man from the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms traveling through the middle of the Tang Dynasty, and the story of his struggle for world supremacy, so don't rely on a time-travel novel. Is a time-travel that has technology that does not surpass the Ming Dynasty called time-travel? This kind of time traveler may have never even seen an electric light! He must have grown up as a savage in the mountains.

Lao Gao, now that I have time to write a book, can you update it quickly? I can't wait. 😂So pretty.

Although the author emphasizes that it is not fantasy, many of the things written are fantasy. Historical writing has always required careful attention, and the readership it faces is also different from other novel types. If you look at the books that have been enshrined in the history section, you will understand that readers of historical texts often do not come to pursue a pleasant plot, but care more about things like the wheel of history, the righteousness of the family and the country, the trends of the times, and so on. In this case, a large number of things that do not conform to the common sense of reality will only lose the reader's sense of substitution and make the article appear nondescript.