Jiuxi

The writing is too verbose, which is not to say that the side reflections are not good, but it also needs to be divided into time. It is fine when the two sides are fighting wits and courage, but writing like this when tens of thousands of troops from both sides are fighting hand to hand is a complete test of the reader's IQ. During the first siege of Guangling City, Jing's army drove the people to attack the city. It was cruel, but isn't this normal? Is it justice to drive the people of your country to attack the city? Even Sun Tzu knew thousands of years ago that he had to rely on the enemy for food. This paragraph he wrote is so pretentious! What's even more funny is that the battlefield with tens of thousands of people is in a mess. The voice of an old woman who fell down in the middle can actually be heard on the city wall. This is a bit of a bloody plot in terms of artificiality. A touching short clip makes the sky thunder and touches the heart of a potato. Then the cavalry from both sides clashed, and everyone approached the opponent at high speed and prepared to kill people. As a result, your coach was thinking that the opponent was a woman, and we were underestimated. The author's writing style is good, but he places the book on female videos.

I don't know how to explain it, but I can only read it when I'm short of books. It's an imaginary ancient time where imperial power is paramount. Li Bingxue himself said that married people can only marry their husbands and raise children in a deep house. However, in the early books, the young people with some ability and brains are basically women, and they all have a crush on the protagonist. The author writes that the protagonist is deeply in love with Lin Xi, and at the same time, he writes so many outstanding women who will not marry except the protagonist, which makes me feel awkward. Does the author want to write a soft-hearted man?

I've been procrastinating a bit lately, and I personally think there's absolutely no need to write about Green Forest. Also asking the protagonist to go to the North in person is a sign of self-degradation. The book suddenly fell down

When I see Luo Jiujiu, I can't stand it anymore. I guess you're a soft-boiled guy. Martial arts are taught by women, comrades are female cavalry, espionage is handled by women, and the alien young master is also a woman. I guess the key figures in the back are still women. He's fighting a fucking war. On the one hand, the writing is very serious, but on the other hand, they are all female, and I can't stand it.

It's so witty. The protagonist's opponent is so awesome at the beginning, but he looks like a fool when he meets the protagonist.

One of the few high-quality fictional historical texts in recent years!

The main reason is that big scenes like war are too trivial and feel like they are forcibly supporting the protagonist.

This novel is well written, and the characters in it are all scheming and sophisticated. However, after reading many chapters, I feel that this novel always lacks the atmosphere of a normal person, and I can't find the joy of reading at all.

I feel that many times the plot is a bit watered down. For example, the failure of the early stage of the Third Northern Expedition has been clearly explained, and more than 10 chapters have been written in detail. Why should I read so many frustrating plots where I already know the outcome? Secondly, I felt that the writing of the climax was very bland, not exciting, and there was not enough suspense left to make it almost predictable.

The author writes seriously, without considering the circumstances at the time. If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, the Nine Clans would have been eliminated long ago.