Doupo: I, Fan Ling, Have a Great Family and a Great Business
by The Plowman Forgets His Plowing
About This Novel
Black Corner Domain, Blood Sect! ! Fan Ling couldn't believe it. He had become Fan Ling. There was nothing wrong with that. He was Fan Ling, the young master of the Blood Sect. The remnants of the Pure Lotus Demon Fire were robbed, the seventh-grade elixir was robbed, and the Earth-level fighting skill of Three Thousand Thunderbolts was robbed. The unlucky guy was still alive. "Xiao Yan..." Fan Ling gritted his teeth. He also needs to practice fighting spirit early, otherwise how can he change his destiny against the will of heaven? I have a rich blood sect background, Jie Jie Jie, I, Fan Ling, have a great family and a great career. In addition, his soul power is stronger than others. "Xiao Yan, what are you comparing to me?" "I won't leave you a single piece of the strange fire remnant picture..." "Those confidantes of yours, hehehe..."
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Official(38)Scraped 1mo ago
Talent
Dou Zong in his early twenties? Or the Ancient Family? You haven't read the original work, have you? Xiao Yan only started Dou Zong when he was about 25 years old. What is it about? . . .
Nowadays, fan fiction is really messy. Any protagonist will have to practice Fen Jue. A person with a blood attribute will practice Fen Jue and swallow strange fire. It is really mindless.
It allows you to take over that person's soul, not to make you become that person
It feels like normal people can't stand it. You've lost all your humanity when you traveled through time, right? I think you weren't a good guy before you traveled through time, and you have to follow the main line. You won't be able to write without the original work, right? You also got all the combat power and the appearance of the characters wrong.
Many people are scolding.
To put it bluntly, the character setting is wrong. I have read a few books, one by Liu Xi and one with the protagonist named Lin Feng. They are very well written. Although he is also a swallower of strange fire, others have nothing to do with the protagonist. You see how good the results written by others are, why do you need to set it based on the villain in the original work? Also, those who started with the soul clan generally did not have very good results. It's so hard to write so many words. Writing novels is about making money. He's an unlikable protagonist and doesn't make any money. Read more comments. Write something that appeals to your readers, and you'll get more subscribers. Where Liu Xi is written, go and see how others have written it. Others also wrote about fanfiction, and the results were very good with more than 1.3 Million words.
Too many loopholes
I feel like I haven't read the original work and the low rating is indeed justified.
What kind of rubbish are you writing? Doesn't it use your brain?
The method of cultivation is a bit disgusting, just use people to practice directly. The reborn are basically human, and this was written disgustingly.
Danchen forgot to collect it. Who can refuse the little sheep?
Fen Jue gives 6 casually. It's really awesome. It's weird that he forcefully increases the protagonist's combat power so quickly. If there was such a good place, they would have unified it long ago.
Practice Burning Technique
To practice Fen Jue, you need to spread the skills, which means you have to practice again. Otherwise, why didn't Yao Lao practice it himself? The original book said that the protagonist should not practice that skill. Otherwise, why didn't Yao Lao just give Xiao Yan a local level skill first and then let him transfer to other skills? Because with that skill, he can't do double cultivation and can only do scattered attacks.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(38)Scraped 1mo ago
Talent
Dou Zong in his early twenties? Or the Ancient Family? You haven't read the original work, have you? Xiao Yan only started Dou Zong when he was about 25 years old. What is it about? . . .
Nowadays, fan fiction is really messy. Any protagonist will have to practice Fen Jue. A person with a blood attribute will practice Fen Jue and swallow strange fire. It is really mindless.
It allows you to take over that person's soul, not to make you become that person
It feels like normal people can't stand it. You've lost all your humanity when you traveled through time, right? I think you weren't a good guy before you traveled through time, and you have to follow the main line. You won't be able to write without the original work, right? You also got all the combat power and the appearance of the characters wrong.
Many people are scolding.
To put it bluntly, the character setting is wrong. I have read a few books, one by Liu Xi and one with the protagonist named Lin Feng. They are very well written. Although he is also a swallower of strange fire, others have nothing to do with the protagonist. You see how good the results written by others are, why do you need to set it based on the villain in the original work? Also, those who started with the soul clan generally did not have very good results. It's so hard to write so many words. Writing novels is about making money. He's an unlikable protagonist and doesn't make any money. Read more comments. Write something that appeals to your readers, and you'll get more subscribers. Where Liu Xi is written, go and see how others have written it. Others also wrote about fanfiction, and the results were very good with more than 1.3 Million words.
Too many loopholes
I feel like I haven't read the original work and the low rating is indeed justified.
What kind of rubbish are you writing? Doesn't it use your brain?
The method of cultivation is a bit disgusting, just use people to practice directly. The reborn are basically human, and this was written disgustingly.
Danchen forgot to collect it. Who can refuse the little sheep?
Fen Jue gives 6 casually. It's really awesome. It's weird that he forcefully increases the protagonist's combat power so quickly. If there was such a good place, they would have unified it long ago.
Practice Burning Technique
To practice Fen Jue, you need to spread the skills, which means you have to practice again. Otherwise, why didn't Yao Lao practice it himself? The original book said that the protagonist should not practice that skill. Otherwise, why didn't Yao Lao just give Xiao Yan a local level skill first and then let him transfer to other skills? Because with that skill, he can't do double cultivation and can only do scattered attacks.
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