Douluo: the Legend of the Human Emperor

Nowadays, Douluo fans are either in groups or in Wuhun Palace. There are too many and it's boring. Finally there is a third party. Come on 💪 Great author, five-star praise

Look, just don't write and send the Seven Treasures Immortal Grass. The Wall Grass Sect should be thrown into the long river of history.

It was okay at the beginning, but later on it was really a bit poisonous. Many unreasonable things had to be forced to write, such as the shadow killing Ma Qiu, and the level 89 killing Ma Qiu, who was also a Soul Douluo. As long as the soul skills were not activated, the opponent would not be able to find it. The opponent's level was lower than yours, not a defensive martial soul, and there were two soul saints and a bunch of soul kings assisting. That's it, no one dared to take action. Your (Assassin) Agile Attack type can't kill (Warrior) Power Attack type with force, but you can't make a sneak attack. You can use all your strength to make a sneak attack. If you can't kill him, at least you can seriously injure him! What's more, there are a bunch of subordinates assisting. There is also the 3,000-strong Azure Dragon Legion, one level 89 Soul Douluo, two level 79 Soul Saints, and the rest are all Soul Kings, and they are all top-level Azure Dragon Spirits. According to the author's description, the Eastern Mythical Azure Dragon should be equivalent to the strength of the original Golden Holy Dragon Spirit. Even if not, it should at least be as strong as the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Spirit. The combination technique launched jointly by the three thousand Azure Dragon Legion, transforming into an Azure Dragon, is comparable to Titled Douluo. In the original work, one of the Unparalleled Dragon Snakes was over sixty and the other was over eighty. He activated his soul fusion skills in two days and was comparable to a Titled Douluo; the Golden Iron Triangle, the Two Soul Saints and a Great Spirit Master, activated their soul fusion skills and was comparable to a Titled Douluo (although slightly weaker); Yang Wudi, who was level 89, defeated a Titled Douluo in the Spirit Hall. According to a rough equivalence relationship, wouldn't the Three Thousand Azure Dragon Legion be ≈ Yang Wudi ≈ Unparalleled Dragons and Snakes ≈ The Golden Iron Triangle. Many things are described in a noble and powerful way, but when compared with the outside world, they are found to be deficient. So why not write those things more conservatively from the beginning and not be so powerful. Alas, I have read several Douluo fanfics in the past few days, but I am still as unreadable as ever. Sure enough, Douluo fanfics are still unreadable, so I shouldn't have hope for the current Douluo fanfics.

How should I put it? Let's not talk about the writing first. The content of the dialogue is like honey smeared on the mouth. I feel that the content is a bit too fast. It's not that the protagonist ascends the throne at the age of 6. There is nothing wrong with this. The main reason is that the plot is too rushed. Anyone who rebels needs several years or even more than ten years to plan. Concubine Xiao's son died in front of her, and she rebelled. If we look at it from the perspective of ancient power struggles. Don't say that this is Douluo. He has a martial soul and can kill indiscriminately. Look at how Qian Renxue arranged the Tiandou Empire. She lurked around the prince since she was a child, killed several princes, and then poisoned Xue Ye. This must have been about twenty years. Also, the characterization is too straightforward. First of all, the content and dialogue are too weird (mouth covered with honey). ⚠️King Jiang: He is too trusting in his sworn brothers and has no control over his harem. Concubine Xiao led people to kill the eldest prince openly and failed, but she was not alert at all. There are all kinds of messy people in the harem, let alone the court. This is not a king. Maybe the people and the heads of some small families are better than him as a king. ⚠️Bai Yan: It just feels like the whole world knows his weakness, but he himself doesn't know that his weakness is his family. It is said that being with a king is like being with a tiger. Don't you know there is a saying that a person with high power shakes the master? As a Contra, I didn't expect that I didn't have any backup options. When I learned that something happened to my family, I could only roar incompetently. ⚠️Concubine Xiao: A rebel can have so many people echoing her and contacting so many military bosses. It can be seen that she is wise. It is pitiful that a wise woman can teach such a brainless son. ⚠️Li Guogong: The whole world knows that King Jiang will do something to him, and a prince has just died in the palace. It is a sensitive period and he has not received any news in the palace. He is too confident. As a master, he is not self-aware at all when a disaster is approaching. He has been killed by a large army and can't feel any fluctuations in his soul power? The opponent has a Soul Douluo and Two Soul Saints, and they have surrounded your home. Who gave you the confidence to beat them three times? You won't escape. I really like the setting of Dugu Bo in the original work. We all know that Dugu Bo has a grudge against Juhuaguan and ghosts, but why people only trouble Dugu Bo and not the granddaughter is because it is so troublesome to offend a high-level soul master. Moreover, Gui Ju Douluo has two levels of 95 and Dugu Bo has no way to defeat him at level 91. You, a Soul Douluo, are trapped to death by these 3, and you are quite speechless. Apart from him being a Contra, there is no Soul Saint or Soul Emperor in his family? Needless to say about the others, etc., It feels like the plot has been forcibly accelerated in order to let the protagonist ascend to the throne. Everything is so smooth, there are no twists and turns, it is just too reasonable, and then the whole thing is not reasonable at all. In addition, people with high-level cultivation cannot show any temperament of a superior person. They are like street gangsters. You scold me and I will scold you.

The Kingdom of Balak is written a little stronger. You must know that the Grand Marshal of the Tiandou Empire is just a Contra.

After reading the first 50 chapters, I feel that there are not many Douluo elements, it is all palace fighting, and it is very low-level. A street writer turns into a master of palace fighting. Although various operations can barely be justified, the logical chain is very fragile and has something to do with the writing ideas. Many characters and relationships are only mentioned when they play a major role, as if they appeared out of thin air and suddenly disappeared, which is very blunt, and Gong Dou has a full sense of leather. There are also no characters that appear in the original work at all (in the first 50 chapters), and the initial setting is very inconsistent with the world of Douluo. Although most of my friends who read the fanfic prefer the world view of the original work, they would not forcefully join the palace battle plot. It is better to say that Douluo itself is not suitable for palace battle. These 50 chapters seem like a lot, but apart from awakening and obtaining soul rings, they can completely break away from the Douluo world and have no impact on the palace battle plot, so I say this is a pure leather case.

The hang-up was too high, so I pressed hard, and I was given a level 89 Contra. He couldn't beat anyone lower than him head-on, and he couldn't assassinate him. He couldn't break through to level one in a few years. The contradiction is hard-written, and it is set that if the soul skill fluctuates, it will be discovered. The assassin has to use the soul skill to let others notice that there is a dirty hand.

Just give me a five-star review for you who doesn't follow Tang San and Wuhundian. The only thing left to say is, don't get carried away while writing. Since you are an emperor, you must have the temperament of an emperor. Don't act like a brainless brat.

As long as you don't supervise me, I will keep up with you. If you want a eunuch, I'll send you a blade

For Wuhundian, the more chaos outside, the better. Can't we wait until they finish fighting and then take action to reap the benefits? Still interfering and wading into troubled waters? I really don't know why you are so clueless now when you wrote so much detail before? Anyway, in the end, if we want to rule the continent, wouldn't it be nice to have one less competitor in advance? Still cooperate?