I Am Cultivating Immortality in the World of Mixed Martial Arts
by Sheng Guo
About This Novel
Someday. A young man who looked like a grown-up appeared in a Taoist temple. He looked at the backs of the famous Taoist priests in the surrounding counties and said, neither humble nor arrogant: "My name is Qiao Feng. My father, Qiao Sanhuai, comes from a neighboring town. I beg the Taoist priest to accept me as his disciple!" The moment he heard the sound, Lin Dong, the Taoist priest in Qingfeng Temple, was stunned, and his worldview was shattered on the spot.
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Official(48)Scraped 12d ago
Too much thinking and too much nonsense are extremely toxic.
If you think too much, there will be a lot of nonsense. 80% Of the picture is about whether water numbers are really good or not. It's really bad. Or write the plot well, but if you are lucky, the plot cannot advance the fantasy. There are quite a lot of them. Old bookworms can just leave. Of course, newbies can watch it without thinking.
It's hard to judge the cultivation level. Suddenly two years have passed, and there is no mention of how high the cultivation level is in several chapters. He was thinking too much, and the thoughts in his brain almost took up a whole page. More than half of this book was basically the thoughts in his brain. I suddenly wanted to know what he wanted to do? Just to make up the numbers, I'm either talking about this exercise or that exercise, and then I'm thinking about something in my brain. Can't I think less about it? Just say something simple and easy to understand. I have to say so much and think so much. I'm reading novels, not reading the thoughts in his brain. And has he broken through the foundation building? You could tell me, did you skip that part again? How did he leave? Where did the breakthrough occur? How long did it take? Shouldn't he not be disturbed when he breaks through? Isn't he not yet inediate? Then the gods are asking for children or something, what's the situation? Also, can one exercise have traces of other exercises? Is it adapted from that exercise? Isn't that a deduction? By merging other techniques into one, wouldn't what he obtain just be the techniques to deduce knowledge points and plot points? If that's the case, isn't the Five Elements Exercise deduced in the same way? What kind of shadow is this? Moreover, there seems to be no other shadow of the Five Elements Gongfa. It is all deduced. Why is there no Five Elements Gongfa? Long Xiang Bo Ruo Gong, aren't the Five Elements Kung Fu added from eleven to thirteen? Why didn't Qiao Feng see it? But others can tell, just because they are cultivators There was also the part where he was possessed by a demon. He didn't see it when he faced tens of thousands of troops. Why did he see it when he faced Li Qiu Shui? And was he possessed by a demon? He obviously entered the Tao through killing, and didn't his body rely on instinct? His consciousness is in the spiritual platform, and he can't get out. How can he control his body? You dug this hole, please explain it. When practicing Five Elements Kung Fu, does it need to be touched before it can be inhaled into the body? Shouldn't it be that one should feel the aura of heaven and earth and then inhale it into the body? Of course, it may be different. The second level of Qi Refining is first-class, but above the second level of Qi Refining, the realm of foundation building is obviously not matched, and the space of the martial arts world is very weak. Even the comprehensive martial arts world is still a martial arts world. Martial arts will always be martial arts and will never reach the level of immortals. Therefore, when the strength reaches a certain level, it will be suppressed by heaven and earth, reaching the peak that that world can bear. At most, the golden elixir realm, which is the martial arts golden elixir, and the realm of heaven and man, can break the void. But for the realm you wrote about, the second level of Qi Refining is top-notch. Then the foundation-building realm is equivalent to the realm of heaven and man. After all, after the foundation-building realm, there is the golden elixir realm, which is also equivalent to the martial arts golden elixir. If a world wants to advance, first of all, the people in that world must be very strong. If you want to become stronger, you must practice. When the realm reaches a certain level, it will feed back to the world. Therefore, there is no inability to practice immortal magic. After all, only in this way can the world advance. Of course, practicing martial arts can also advance the world, but there must be follow-up techniques. The world of martial arts There is no cultivation of immortality. If cultivation of immortality appears, it will be of great help to the advancement of the world and will advance the world quickly. The need for promotion is to open the door and teach all living beings to cultivate immortality. Of course, novels are different and each novel is different, but there is a saying that is right. If the world wants to advance, the people in the world must first become stronger. Only by becoming stronger can the world advance. Also, it is impossible for Qiao Feng to leave his master and run away alone. He is very affectionate and righteous, and even if he leaves, he will only watch from a distance. With his carefulness, it is impossible for him not to notice the changes in his master, so he ran away directly, ran directly back to the Beggar Clan, and then ignored everything, without asking anything. After that, we don't know how you left, how you broke through and found Duan Yu Duan Yu, a serious young man, full of blood, didn't react at all when he saw a beautiful girl without clothes. He just glanced at it. I doubted that he lacked something. Moreover, there is no master who cannot marry a disciple without marrying him. A disciple is considered half a son, so there is something wrong with Duan Yu's thinking. Moreover, the world of martial arts cannot support a person to cultivate to a higher realm. After all, to cultivate to a higher realm, a huge amount of energy is needed. Of course, if the world advances, this is not a problem, but first, there must be the skills to cultivate to the golden elixir of martial arts, including the realm of gods. If not, it can only be taught to those who cultivate immortals, or leave this world and change to a world with immortal cultivators. After all, cultivating immortals in the world of martial arts cannot last very long. How difficult is it to advance in the world? Once you fail, you will be wiped out. And do you need to kill people in the plot to get this causal point? When people die, the cause and effect will disappear. Will killing them produce cause and effect? The key is that they are all dead, and contact with them also has cause and effect. Canceling them, teaching skills also has cause and effect, so can it only be obtained by killing people?
The idea is good, but the author's writing style is not good
The subject matter really attracted me, but after reading it, there was a lot of nonsense at first. The protagonist in the first chapter thought this was a historical world, and then the whole article was about how to survive in this historical world. Then the second chapter directly said that this is not history, but martial arts, and then started to talk about how to live in this martial arts world. So the question is, let's not talk about a lot of nonsense you are thinking there, but what is the meaning of your existence in the first chapter?
It had been three years. Lin Dong originally thought that he, a Taoist priest, was living a mediocre life, and he thought he would continue to live like this. Year after year, but without seeing each other, Qiao Feng actually came over and wanted to worship him as his teacher. Now Lin Dong...
Qiao Feng's strength
In Jin Yong's original work, Qiao Feng's talent is almost inferior to Wang Yuyan's peerless genius. He has practiced for so many years, but he should be just the same as in the original work. Are you kidding me? At worst, it should be as strong as when he helped Yelu Hongji put down the rebellion. What do you think?
Originally I was reading about cultivating immortality in the world of mixed martial arts, but I didn't expect that it was about learning martial arts.
The plot is a bit boring, and the main character has a bit of a virgin plot, and he doesn't show that he is a fairy with a celestial spirit.
Is this called writing a novel?
This is just writing down my fantasies, and it's natural to write down
I read more than a dozen chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. The writing of this pig's foot is a bit disgusting, so I slipped away.
Pig's feet are in charge of other people's emotional affairs,
The setting is too poor, the balance is not good, it is too rubbish. I feel that the protagonist and supporting characters have no IQ.
The writing is too exaggerated and boring to watch.
What the hell are you writing? The emperor kills at will, but the officials are not as good as little bandits and cannot understand
There is no logic at all. How can the royal family become emperor if they don't have experts?
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Official(48)Scraped 12d ago
Too much thinking and too much nonsense are extremely toxic.
If you think too much, there will be a lot of nonsense. 80% Of the picture is about whether water numbers are really good or not. It's really bad. Or write the plot well, but if you are lucky, the plot cannot advance the fantasy. There are quite a lot of them. Old bookworms can just leave. Of course, newbies can watch it without thinking.
It's hard to judge the cultivation level. Suddenly two years have passed, and there is no mention of how high the cultivation level is in several chapters. He was thinking too much, and the thoughts in his brain almost took up a whole page. More than half of this book was basically the thoughts in his brain. I suddenly wanted to know what he wanted to do? Just to make up the numbers, I'm either talking about this exercise or that exercise, and then I'm thinking about something in my brain. Can't I think less about it? Just say something simple and easy to understand. I have to say so much and think so much. I'm reading novels, not reading the thoughts in his brain. And has he broken through the foundation building? You could tell me, did you skip that part again? How did he leave? Where did the breakthrough occur? How long did it take? Shouldn't he not be disturbed when he breaks through? Isn't he not yet inediate? Then the gods are asking for children or something, what's the situation? Also, can one exercise have traces of other exercises? Is it adapted from that exercise? Isn't that a deduction? By merging other techniques into one, wouldn't what he obtain just be the techniques to deduce knowledge points and plot points? If that's the case, isn't the Five Elements Exercise deduced in the same way? What kind of shadow is this? Moreover, there seems to be no other shadow of the Five Elements Gongfa. It is all deduced. Why is there no Five Elements Gongfa? Long Xiang Bo Ruo Gong, aren't the Five Elements Kung Fu added from eleven to thirteen? Why didn't Qiao Feng see it? But others can tell, just because they are cultivators There was also the part where he was possessed by a demon. He didn't see it when he faced tens of thousands of troops. Why did he see it when he faced Li Qiu Shui? And was he possessed by a demon? He obviously entered the Tao through killing, and didn't his body rely on instinct? His consciousness is in the spiritual platform, and he can't get out. How can he control his body? You dug this hole, please explain it. When practicing Five Elements Kung Fu, does it need to be touched before it can be inhaled into the body? Shouldn't it be that one should feel the aura of heaven and earth and then inhale it into the body? Of course, it may be different. The second level of Qi Refining is first-class, but above the second level of Qi Refining, the realm of foundation building is obviously not matched, and the space of the martial arts world is very weak. Even the comprehensive martial arts world is still a martial arts world. Martial arts will always be martial arts and will never reach the level of immortals. Therefore, when the strength reaches a certain level, it will be suppressed by heaven and earth, reaching the peak that that world can bear. At most, the golden elixir realm, which is the martial arts golden elixir, and the realm of heaven and man, can break the void. But for the realm you wrote about, the second level of Qi Refining is top-notch. Then the foundation-building realm is equivalent to the realm of heaven and man. After all, after the foundation-building realm, there is the golden elixir realm, which is also equivalent to the martial arts golden elixir. If a world wants to advance, first of all, the people in that world must be very strong. If you want to become stronger, you must practice. When the realm reaches a certain level, it will feed back to the world. Therefore, there is no inability to practice immortal magic. After all, only in this way can the world advance. Of course, practicing martial arts can also advance the world, but there must be follow-up techniques. The world of martial arts There is no cultivation of immortality. If cultivation of immortality appears, it will be of great help to the advancement of the world and will advance the world quickly. The need for promotion is to open the door and teach all living beings to cultivate immortality. Of course, novels are different and each novel is different, but there is a saying that is right. If the world wants to advance, the people in the world must first become stronger. Only by becoming stronger can the world advance. Also, it is impossible for Qiao Feng to leave his master and run away alone. He is very affectionate and righteous, and even if he leaves, he will only watch from a distance. With his carefulness, it is impossible for him not to notice the changes in his master, so he ran away directly, ran directly back to the Beggar Clan, and then ignored everything, without asking anything. After that, we don't know how you left, how you broke through and found Duan Yu Duan Yu, a serious young man, full of blood, didn't react at all when he saw a beautiful girl without clothes. He just glanced at it. I doubted that he lacked something. Moreover, there is no master who cannot marry a disciple without marrying him. A disciple is considered half a son, so there is something wrong with Duan Yu's thinking. Moreover, the world of martial arts cannot support a person to cultivate to a higher realm. After all, to cultivate to a higher realm, a huge amount of energy is needed. Of course, if the world advances, this is not a problem, but first, there must be the skills to cultivate to the golden elixir of martial arts, including the realm of gods. If not, it can only be taught to those who cultivate immortals, or leave this world and change to a world with immortal cultivators. After all, cultivating immortals in the world of martial arts cannot last very long. How difficult is it to advance in the world? Once you fail, you will be wiped out. And do you need to kill people in the plot to get this causal point? When people die, the cause and effect will disappear. Will killing them produce cause and effect? The key is that they are all dead, and contact with them also has cause and effect. Canceling them, teaching skills also has cause and effect, so can it only be obtained by killing people?
The idea is good, but the author's writing style is not good
The subject matter really attracted me, but after reading it, there was a lot of nonsense at first. The protagonist in the first chapter thought this was a historical world, and then the whole article was about how to survive in this historical world. Then the second chapter directly said that this is not history, but martial arts, and then started to talk about how to live in this martial arts world. So the question is, let's not talk about a lot of nonsense you are thinking there, but what is the meaning of your existence in the first chapter?
It had been three years. Lin Dong originally thought that he, a Taoist priest, was living a mediocre life, and he thought he would continue to live like this. Year after year, but without seeing each other, Qiao Feng actually came over and wanted to worship him as his teacher. Now Lin Dong...
Qiao Feng's strength
In Jin Yong's original work, Qiao Feng's talent is almost inferior to Wang Yuyan's peerless genius. He has practiced for so many years, but he should be just the same as in the original work. Are you kidding me? At worst, it should be as strong as when he helped Yelu Hongji put down the rebellion. What do you think?
Originally I was reading about cultivating immortality in the world of mixed martial arts, but I didn't expect that it was about learning martial arts.
The plot is a bit boring, and the main character has a bit of a virgin plot, and he doesn't show that he is a fairy with a celestial spirit.
Is this called writing a novel?
This is just writing down my fantasies, and it's natural to write down
I read more than a dozen chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. The writing of this pig's foot is a bit disgusting, so I slipped away.
Pig's feet are in charge of other people's emotional affairs,
The setting is too poor, the balance is not good, it is too rubbish. I feel that the protagonist and supporting characters have no IQ.
The writing is too exaggerated and boring to watch.
What the hell are you writing? The emperor kills at will, but the officials are not as good as little bandits and cannot understand
There is no logic at all. How can the royal family become emperor if they don't have experts?
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