Shennong Daojun

What's going on with bro, driving high and moving low? Are you here to deceive readers? First of all, the selection of materials is good, and the introduction is also good. I fell in love with it at first glance. The 20 or so chapters at the beginning were very well written, with no plot points and no deep plots. Later on, I even made a separate outline for each chapter. At that time, I felt that I could read the book for a long time, and it was stable! Then! When it comes to capturing Lingxiu in the mountains, the problem becomes apparent. The author obviously starts high and low and writes less and less attentively. The writing style and the handling of the characters and plots are seriously inconsistent with the level at the beginning. It feels like the author has not saved the manuscript and is rushing every day. It also seems that the beginning of the writing is exquisite, the process is abstract, and the ending is forcibly sublimated (of course, the book has not yet reached the end). Let's give an example: It's the end of an event. It's OK to write more than 30 chapters, but it's ** if it's more than 80 chapters. What does it mean-oh my god, who is that person? The harvest was so great. Isn't Lao Shen well-known? Even if he is not well-known, how can it be seen that he has gained so much? Didn't Lao Shen's gains go from level seven to top level? I don't know who he is and how do you know that he was a seventh-level person before? There is a complete contradiction here. This point can be said to have initially triggered my desire to complain about this novel. The dancer's random thoughts and wishful thinking in the back are also a big drawback. She has lost her memory! Nnd The more I think about it, the more regretful it becomes that it was so good at the beginning but then it got messed up and I am now starved of books again. Were the grades for this book revised? I thought I had found the one in the book so I could enjoy it, but in the end I was asking for trouble. Damn you, the author, for using the beginning and the subject matter to arouse my interest and then killing it with your own hands. Do you also want to see me? I'll go to bed at eight in the morning! That's it everyone, this is really unpalatable, I don't recommend eating it often. Tmd, Your Excellency is also here to wish you never die.

Overall, above average. Taking the reincarnation of Emperor Shennong as the protagonist, it integrates elements of traditional Chinese medicine and the system of cultivating immortals, which has certain novelties. The story has a fast pace, the plots are interlocking, and it has a certain degree of readability. The protagonist has a distinct personality, the supporting characters are also flesh-and-blood, and the character creation is relatively successful. The author's writing style is smooth and the description is delicate, creating a better reading experience. However, the novel's plot development is relatively routine and lacks a sense of surprise. The novel's setting of the world of cultivating immortals is relatively rough, and the construction of the world view is not perfect enough. The pace in the early stage is fast, but the pace in the later stage is slow, which affects the overall look and feel. There are some poisonous points in the novel, such as the protagonist's cheating too quickly, improper handling of emotional lines, etc., Which may arouse resentment among some readers. Overall rating: If you like novels about cultivating immortals and can accept routine plots, then "Shen Nong Taojun" can be used as a recreational read. However, if you are looking for novel settings and a rigorous worldview, this book may not meet your needs. Rating: 7.5/10

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The beginning is good, starting from getting the kitten, starting from the description of the female plot and the description of the cat. The further I look at it, the more disappointed I feel, and the plot becomes more and more unsatisfactory. When it comes to the content of the cat, I feel like throwing it away after using it. For the female characters, I feel that I am too lazy to even deal with it, which shows that I don't even have basic respect! 😋 For example, Lin Baiwei used the robe to feel the protagonist, and casually threw it aside... The kitten always shows a kind of dependence and trust on the protagonist, including finding treasures for the protagonist. The protagonist becomes more and more perfunctory with the kitten. In the end, he is too lazy to deal with the kitten and just cheats! In the end, he just plans to give the kitten away. The author himself is too lazy to write the plot of the kitten later! He plans to end the plot of the kitten by giving the kitten to a friend😓 The quality of the summary gets worse as it goes on. At first glance, it seems that we are constantly rushing to catch up on the plot😋

Go high and low, it was the best before it was released. After it was released, the plot was tacky and repetitive. The writing style of the beast-control plot shows that the quality of the book continues to decline. Now it is a bit reluctant. There are too many betting plots, which seriously affects the viewing experience. I have always supported the genuine version, but Chapter 244 poisoned me, and the true level of this book was exposed at once.

The book is well written, and the setting is OK, but some common sense is inappropriate, such as an army, a general of third rank, and a soldier of fifth rank and sixth rank. Some people are officials of fifth and sixth grades, while county-level officials are still ninth-grade officers. But if you ask someone of fifth or sixth grade to be a top soldier, a top soldier is a consumable. No matter how elite the soldier is, no one would be willing to serve as a soldier. Another one is a government, with the combined strength of each army being close to one million. This is an exaggeration. In ancient times, a country as big as China never had the strength to raise one million soldiers. One hundred thousand is enough. Only with the improvement of productivity in modern society can we only have a few million soldiers. This is a productivity limit.

The setting of the Sinong profession is very novel, and overall it feels like a super mechanic. But after arriving in the universe, things fell apart a bit. Originally, the protagonist relied on his rebirth to unify the theories of the three schools, and he was considered to be the pinnacle of agriculture, extremely awesome. But in the universe, does Sinong still have theoretical differences? The protagonist's unified theory behavior is equivalent to "becoming the king of elementary school", and he has lost all his strength. The dynasty is so powerful in the Xuanhuang world, and its background is endless. However, the profession of emperor cannot retain people in the universe, and its lifespan is still short. It is the strong ones who take the initiative to stay and dedicate themselves. I don't understand the use of this setting.

It's very boring to see the latest 500 chapters. It can be said that this is also the failure of Cheng Ye's innovation in various professions. Cultivation is fundamentally about understanding, applying, and even controlling the world along the path of art, Dharma, and Tao, controlling the various Tao, life, death, reincarnation, and derivation of the world. As a result, by Chapter 500, he was already a demigod, and he still learned a farming technique there. He learned it in more than ten years. There were several demigods there next to him. It was amazing and shocking. I remember that the previous state of demigods was called the Samsara Emperor. What about reincarnation? How did you reincarnate without understanding or even mastering the law of reincarnation? When I first started writing, it was no problem for me to write like "it rains a little bit to kill some insects," but now that I have become a god, what the hell is this, a chicken chop that I am cultivating? Originally, I poked mushrooms with needles and played with the laws of life, thinking that you were going to evolve. Unexpectedly, I turned around and found myself here in Makabaka, learning magic from others and farming for decades. The whole book is focused on the category of "techniques". Learn one on the left, another on the right, practice it again, and then be shocked. Occasionally there is a little bit of "Dharma" or "Tao" It is basically not covered. Whether it is the various gods in the East or the conceptual gods in the West, they all have to master the essence and laws of the world. They are all here as demigods every day. Today they learn to rub mud, and tomorrow they learn to make clay figures, and then change the map to continue learning to rub mud. If they do not grasp the transformation of the world's materials and the essence of life cycle, will they become demigods just by rubbing mud every day?

What have you written recently? I know that a good novel uses supporting characters to set off the strength of the protagonist, but do you think it is successful? With a prophet, you end up being shocked by everything. No matter when, your friends are always more talented than you and have the most resources. In the end, they have the lowest level. Their spells are not as high as others. Otherwise, it will be completely unfinished or the book will be sold to others? Why should Zhao Xing be the protagonist? Before Liu Tianning came out of the Xuanhuang Realm, he was defeated by the protagonist, and the protagonist became the great farmer. Now after ascending, the gap has been narrowed back, right? If you have a prophet, you still need to ask him for advice. The teachers in the Novice Village are more talented than the protagonist, right? And that Ji Si, he is the most defiant. Liu Tianning at least has apprenticeships. He relies purely on talent and has no resources. He has created some unparalleled skills. In terms of current talent, the protagonist is not qualified to be a dog for him. I have never seen a novel where the protagonist is supposed to be the strongest. There are so many people in the novice village who can beat the protagonist. I looked at the front page and saw how well it was written. It gives me the feeling that in the past few years it is only worse than the beginning of Mysterious Resurrection. Now it is not just a normal cultivation of immortality, but now it is worthy of being included in the first 20 points of the starting point monthly pass. You have to spend money to buy it. Also, you haven't said anything about whether to update or not. What does the fan group do? What does the administrator do? I can't write a novel, and I can't write a leave request. You claimed to update 10,000 words a day, but we've let you go.

The setting background is really good. It was really good before the first 200 chapters, but then the setting started to get confusing. The character of the protagonist began to fall apart, and he had to be someone else's nanny when he was in a crisis. As long as there is some kindness to the protagonist, the protagonist will be eager to give it to the other person, and the protagonist has to work hard to upgrade the treasures of the same grade. When it comes to the supporting characters, they can upgrade casually😕The plot is also starting to get boring. I suspect that in the end, the supporting characters can live forever even if they lie down. It's true that the supporting character has reborn as a parent... (I don't believe in casual subscriptions to later articles. I didn't think it was worth it at all when I first read about similar themes.)