Douluo Jueshi: Who Said That Heavy Pupils Must Be Controlled?

How should I put it, it feels like we readers are being treated as fools

The Chongtong Martial Spirit will be given a 700-year-old soul ring. Wouldn't it be better to wait and get Tianmeng? No matter how powerful the Chongtong pupil is, it is still a martial spirit. If you rest on your laurels, you will not last long.

This is the first time I saw someone spending 160 million gold soul coins to buy a soul-eating carving knife in a fan. Regardless of whether to buy it or not, is the Heavenly Soul Empire so rich? 160 Million with your eyes closed? ? ? Or is Shrek rich? Without even knowing what it was, a second-year student poured 80 million into it with just one mouthful? The author wrote so high that the audience was treated as a fool.

What the hell is Susan? Isn't he a double pupil?

Do you know the word "secret", do you know what "property" means, you can tell a passerby all about your soul skills, you can fall in love after being together for a month, you can tell all the secrets, Yi Lao is really in trouble, selling a knife for 100 million. The main character is written in such a bad way. He has no opinion and no secrets. What's wrong with having a little secret? Come out when others ask you to come out. How can you be respectful and grateful when the emperor asks you to get married? The writing is really not strong at all. You are purely a tool man. You have been trained to be a thug for others. If you want to charge a fee, you will give up immediately. What kind of writing can you do?

The problem with this book is not "poison", but "stupidity" - the conflict between setting and logic The first level of struggle: Should the college bear the blame? According to the original text, the main character Liu Yuan's six-year improvement in soul power was because his martial soul turned into a "bottomless pit" and swallowed up all his cultivation achievements, causing his body to be hollowed out. From the perspective of the academy, although Xuanzi's words were cold, they were not entirely unreasonable: they had given him six years of resources, medical treatment, and treasures, but what they saw was a ninth-level soul warrior who "had no improvement." In the case of unequal information (it is possible that the "devourment" mechanism has not been detected), giving up a person with zero potential is a rational choice under the rules. Therefore, this is not the kind of villain academy that deliberately suppresses the traditional "don't bully young people who are poor", but an objective reality with institutional indifference, but it does achieve "the most benevolent and righteous". The second level of fighting: How do the protagonist's "misery" and "competition" coexist? The problem lies here. Since the protagonist has been tortured by martial arts for six years, he should understand the cruelty of cultivation and the preciousness of opportunities better than anyone else. The result? 1. After awakening: Without understanding the changes in oneself and without thinking about how to consolidate the foundation, the first thing to do is to "sit down" at the outer edge of the Star Dou Forest like a clown for a few months to guard the Tianmeng Ice Silkworms. A person who has been deceived by fate for six years would place his hopes on such illusory luck? 2. When opportunity comes: After finally meeting Huo Yuhao, the son of luck, he actually gave up the possibility of having anything to do with the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm for a thousand-year spider. How would a person who had his soul power devoured for six years be so trivial about the quality of his soul ring? 3. When pouring out grievances: Turn around and complain to Huo Yuhao and his group that the academy "didn't give you preferential treatment and kicked you out." But the problem with the academy is that it cannot solve "Swallowing" and it is not intentional abuse. This complaint, coupled with his previous behavior of randomly choosing soul rings, seemed extremely ironic. Final conclusion: Purely idiotic writing, nothing to say.

Can I have a dream about the world of mortals, a white-haired lolita?

My dignified double pupil is just a gold level awakening, even the beggars version of double pupil must be gold level or above.

Author, who is the heroine? Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?

To be honest, I feel like the author's imagination is average, he has double pupils, even Susanoo, isn't it bad to have chaotic eyes?