Douluo Peerless Sun and Moon Tang Sect

This is not about women at all. There are very few people who write about Sun and Moon but not about Shrek, but you can't completely ignore the female protagonists such as Wang Dong. What are you writing about? There is not a single woman in the dozens of pictures, not even Sun Moon Orange or Meng Hongchen. The reason why you come to see a fanfic is to see the female protagonist. Who wants to watch your fighting scenes with men all the time, making soul guides all the time, dancing all the time, and there are no descriptions of women. I wrote about Tang Ya at the beginning, but then it disappeared. It was all about fighting, making soul tools, and upgrading. Don't believe it, the reviews must have asked about the female protagonist. Usually people who ask this kind of question are either because there are too many female characters, or there is no description of a female character in dozens of chapters.

It is a rare masterpiece of peerless fan fiction. The content and plot are arranged very smoothly, and the protagonist is also very fleshed out. The flaw is that it praises Huo Yuhao too much. You have to distinguish whether it is your Tang Qing's Tang Clan or Sangou's Tang Clan. How to deal with the relationship between the two? In addition, you still feel that a level 66 Soul Emperor of Ultimate Fire is fighting against level 40 Huo Yuhao. If there is a problem, the performance of the combat power is too weak. A king in the world has blown it up. If his mental power and will are up to standard, he can be smashed on the head casually. Ice Emperor, Tianmeng, Electrolux, Snow Emperor, none of these opportunities have been cut off. The Ice and Fire Eyes can't just be left to Huo Yuhao to supplement Shrek, right? Then what's the use of having so many foresights? It would be too weak if you have the advantage of the plot but can't get the maximum benefit.

It's great, but I'll give you the final summary and five stars after you finish. However, I also suggest that the author should not forget the emotional line and push it appropriately.

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Normal stream, the protagonist is a replica of Tang Wulin, but the Fire Dragon King→_→

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1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is just a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of great emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?

The content is fluent, the plot is exciting, and there is nothing unreasonable.

Come on, the author is good, but a little lacking. And I want to know if the protagonist becomes a dragon god or a fire god

Why don't you write about the civilian population? The civilian stream is quite nice.