Douluo Peerless Tiger Roars and Dragon Roars

Phoenix's novel is okay, but other authors' second creation is Zhenla. The novels written by those people are casually the third ring of ten thousand years and the fourth ring of ten thousand years. If you don't absorb anything, you can just exercise your body and get the fourth ring of ten thousand years. It's written in a mess. If you can do it by exercising your body, then the Elephant Armor Sect doesn't have the fourth ring of ten thousand years. The Phoenix's writing is reasonable. Why can you achieve the third and fourth ring of ten thousand years? Oh, it absorbs soul bones and fairy grass. Is there a reason? Really, it's really disgusting to read secondhand novels by other authors.

First, don't write stallion stories. The plots of your first few books (except the last one, because I didn't read much of it) were pretty good, but the emotional scenes were really poorly written. Most of the time, the heroine fell in love with the protagonist out of nowhere, and there was no middle process. Especially your early "Soul Breaker" disgusted me, so there were fewer female protagonists. I'm not demanding single female protagonists, but I tried my best to have as few female protagonists as possible. Second, stick to your original outline. Maybe it's a bit redundant to say this, but I still have to say it: just read some comments, but don't write exactly what they say, otherwise no one will like it in the end. At the same time, I also advise those who like to read books and like to arrange male and female protagonists and key stories. If you have the ability, just write it yourself. If you don't have the ability, just read it honestly. You can make comments, but don't deliberately give low scores to disgust people.

Who are the heroines? I think the human Ye Guyi + Meng Hongchen, the soul beast Snow Emperor + the auspicious beast

Let's not mention that you didn't like soul guides before. I forgot to mention that a thousand-dan man who forged meow suddenly appeared, and he was all armored. If you want to write like this, why should you write Dou 2? Can't you just write 3? Now I'm back to hearing about the development of aircraft. Is it really just a matter of inspiration? Let's not talk about how much time and resources it takes. Let's just say that you can manufacture various minerals as soon as you learn them. There are no preconditions at all and what's the use of such a thing? The spaceships are out in Douluo Dalu City, and the most powerful cannons and laser weapons are reaching the sky. They can kill a third-level god who has been promoted to a second-level god. Even the first-level god cannot be threatened. There is no way to do it. What is the use of development under such circumstances? If I really let you develop to the sky, what can you do?

I haven't read the Phoenix one, but I've read all the others. This one really doesn't work.

The whole Douluo Second Crossing, only your novel can be read, the other ones are too disgusting, why not just Douluo, and also mix in some other anime stuff here and there, otherwise, the upgrade will be messy. Well, come on and update.

I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.

During the Peerless Tang Sect period, weren't the Soul Beasts of the Sunset Forest extinct? , Sunset Forest has become a forest full of poisonous obstacles😌😌

Author, have you forgotten the power of technology? The protagonist came from Blue Star. He should know the power of technology. Why did he travel to Douluo and feel that the soul guide is very useless? Although practicing martial arts is important, which soul guide is useless? Author, you can add the power of Blue Star's technology to Douluo, such as: aircraft, mechas, cars, etc.

Have you ever thought about where the protagonist's soul bone comes from? Trunk bone: Zihuang Tianshuanglong Left arm bone: Blond lion mastiff Right arm bone: Ultimate Golden White Tiger Right leg bone: Thunder Hell Vine Left leg bone: Dark Demon Tiger Head: Silver Dragon Do you have any other good ideas?