Zhu Xian: the Innate Human Race, Starting from Dazhu Peak

1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is just a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of great emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains? ---------- Data analysis ----------- A Mortal's Story of Immortality: Crowdfunding 40.25 Million yuan Immortal Rebellion: Crowdfunding 700,000 yuan -------- I am cultivating immortality through science for mortals: 7.6 Points No system 3 fanaticism, 7 obsession, 421 support ---------- Doupo: The strongest in the whole map, I will always be above you: 8.8 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 7 support --------- Fight Po: Yang Emperor: 7.8 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 1 obsession, 173 support --------- The most skillful pirate hunter: 8.0 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 3 support, --------- Pirate Talent System: 9.1 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 2 support ----------- The world of Naruto through the eyes of reincarnation: 8.6 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 3 obsession, 500+ support ------------- Naruto: 9.0 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 5 support -------- .... Many... Many... You can count them yourself... ---------- Facts have proved that those who like to read mindless novels and system novels are poor. Such people have no ability, do not work hard, are lazy, poor, always fantasize about getting help from noble people, and rely on others and the system. You have no profit value at all, you have no brains, and you have no ability. Why should the noble people (system) help you, just because you are handsome? ----------- 0 Recommendation votes, 0 monthly votes, 0 support, 0 support, these poor Bs always like to scold the author as disgusting, which reminds me of a sentence: A person with solid food and clothing knows etiquette, and a person with enough food and clothing knows honor and disgrace.

The protagonist comes through. Zhang Xiaofan doesn't have those resources, and he doesn't have any talent. He's just a piece of shit😦. The protagonist keeps licking Zhang Xiaofan and acting as his nanny. What is he doing?

The writing and description techniques are too poor and rough, just blindly repeating, what kind of shock can surpass so and so, this boring description is read back and forth, it is either this shock or that shock, the protagonist's character is not good, he does not have that kind of firm belief, and he does not have a domineering and decisive character. He is just a puppet of the system, except at the beginning. There is some planning in becoming a disciple of Qingyun Sect, but in the end, I basically rely on the system. I don't see any planning and wisdom. It is just a running account. I have enough talent but my character and hard work are not up to standard. I have a sense of just waiting to die. I am just a loser with no characteristics. Without the system, I am not the material to cultivate immortality. This rating is too high.

The quality of QQ reading books is getting worse and worse.

When writing fan fiction, the author must also respect the original work. Several errors and omissions have been discovered so far 1. At this point in time, there are no storage bags in Zhu Xian. Storage bags only appeared in Zhu Xian II written by Xiao Ding. 2. There is no concept of spiritual stones in Zhu Xian. Betting on spiritual stones is a mistake. 3. Zhang Xiaofan met Baguio for the first time in Shanhaiyuan in Heyang City. 4. Experience the Wanbat Ancient Cave, not only Qingyun Gate, but also Tianyin Temple and Fenxiang Valley 5. Dripping Blood Cave, Baguio and Zhang Xiaofan escaped from the black water snake and broke a tree before finding the cave entrance on the cliff. You found it so casually, I'm really speechless.

It's not good to open high and go low. Why are the ratings so high? Someone helps you score points.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, do it with more girls or just one girl?

The changes to the original work are too big, I hope the author can respect the original work

How did this get a score of 9?

Who is messing with the score? I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter😱. Thinking of such a high score, I read a few more chapters and couldn't stand it anymore.