Forbidden Land Exploration: My Organs Have Great Ideas

If you could only choose three, which three would you choose? 1: IQ increased by 100% 2: The art of rejuvenation 3: Can become invisible at will, pass through walls, immerse in soil, fly, divine teleportation, travel through doors, divine healing, divine telekinesis, divine spiritual sealing, divine genetic sealing 4: You won't get sick, and your body will be fully strengthened once and for all. 5: You can completely and unlimitedly reshape your body at will 6: Five supernatural powers, the language of all things 7: God-level reincarnation magical power {keep memory and choose reincarnation} 8: God-level disguise, god-level hacking technology, god-level psychology, god-level Cui Mian technique 9: Chaos level world bead 10: Predict the next seven days 11: God-level danger perception, God-level eyesight 12: Immortality and eternal life 13: Infinite Devouring Evolution of God-level Magical Powers 14: Infinite clones of god-level supernatural powers 15: Reply 66 and like it to get the above abilities 0 Waiting for a big boss to reply...

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First of all, the subject matter of this book is really good, which made me, an old bookworm, shine. Moreover, the relatively silent character of the male protagonist is also very lovable. If I can persist in writing it, it will probably be a good book. But there are also many shortcomings: Regarding the barrage issue, it's okay for the protagonist to be less talkative and use barrage as an alternative explanation and to advance the plot. However, those barrage emmmmm are a bit brainless and make people uncomfortable. I suggest changing it to less, not necessarily all to criticize the protagonist. I think barrage under normal circumstances is not so brainless... As for the plot, I think the highlight of this book lies in the protagonist's angry organ and the forbidden area. The focus can be to describe the forbidden area more and add some forbidden area creatures (of course, if the author has his own arrangements, just write according to his own arrangement). As for the character issue, the protagonist is fine, but I think the supporting characters should be smarter, otherwise the opposite role will be boring. I can directly guess the plot🤐.

Overall, this book is quite good. After all, I am an older bookworm. I just hope it doesn't collapse in the later stage, because once the exploration of this restricted area is over, it probably won't be that easy to write about. There is also no explanation of whether the protagonist's sister is being protected or kidnapped? This should be considered a trap. Because of the ability shown by the protagonist, the country will either protect it, or other people will intercept it, or something like that.

I have written 69 chapters of "The Tomb of the King," but I feel like I haven't even written half of it. It's like going underwater to hundreds of forbidden places around the world, one chapter at a time, and you won't be able to finish it without 2,000 chapters. Also, the protagonist's ability must be in danger before he can improve his strength. This is outrageous. If Weiwei wants to kill you, who will give you time to improve your strength?

Generally speaking, the writing is pretty good. If it can be improved in the future, I might be on the list of gods😸The pig head saves my life.

I think the story of this forbidden area is very well written. Many places are unexpected. The design is also quite clever and attractive. The author's writing style is good. There is still one thing, I believe I know it myself. I feel that in today's society, even for the sake of superficial etiquette and dignity, countries should not say too much hatred for a certain country or particularly unpleasant words. This aspect did seem a bit annoying, but at the time it was also because the setting of the book was very attractive, so I continued reading. The latter part didn't disappoint me either, and the barrage became much more peaceful, although the previous one may not be easy to change. But, it doesn't matter, I'm still looking forward to the next story. Come on! ! The last sentence, woo woo, let me accuse you. When I read it, it was the end of the semester and I was still preparing for the exam, but I couldn't stop. I couldn't help but read this novel. Fortunately, I had to finish it more, so it wouldn't affect my speed of drawing out the sword. But I am about to finish the exam. The author of the summer vacation must also work hard, ah ho ho ho.

There is a lot of main content, the barrage takes up too much space and affects viewing, and it also describes the strangeness of the forbidden area, etc. It could also use some decryption. It's best not to comment on the barrage, and replace it with a discussion at a research institution. Don't make those scholars encounter bizarre things, which are all kinds of low-IQ arguments. To be reasonable, many scholars are more receptive to new things than ordinary people. Don't make scholars from various countries worse than netizens. After all, the setting is a research institute jointly run by elites from various countries. How can they be worse than keyboard warriors? There are a lot of bad things, but if you can change it later, it can still become a good book. You can still change it now while there is not much in it. If you change it after hundreds of thousands of words, it will be too late.

Get some rest early, I don't want the author to be the eighty-seventh person I've read who survived illness, hospitalization, and ascension! If the author doesn't update that day, I may go find you! After I found it, I beat myself up and went to the hospital for a few months to recover my health. Then I locked myself in a small dark room and coded!

It can be said that one chapter covers more than half of the figures, so don't talk too much to passers-by during the live broadcast.