I Open a Hotel in the Horror World

As a 9-year-old bookworm, I just want to say that this book borrows the framework of the story "Mysterious Resurrection" which is quite attractive. However, the author's handling of the story logic is relatively poor, resulting in many plots being inappropriate. It is actually a suspenseful horror novel as the background. Don't make the protagonist so useless and engage in so much pornography. The early stage is okay, but the rest depends entirely on the protagonist. I can't live without a face, but I really can't survive 30 chapters if I'm not handsome. As a new author, my writing skills still need to be improved. The character description is not detailed enough. I often need to make up my own mind, which is easy to fool people. I smoothed out the story line and buried more foreshadowing. From one stroke to the end, it was written in white text. I didn't have any fear in reading the whole text. I almost fell asleep while reading it. Summary: Shuhuang brothers can read it. If there is no Shuhuang, forget it. The author should work harder! Looking forward to better works

But the author is not very good at handling some things. I feel that the ghosts in the hotel are all kind-hearted. You can add that all the ghost waiters in the hotel need to be kind, which will be better. Also, the female ghost in red and the female ghost in white are written in this way. You said that there is no heroine. I didn't expect it. It feels better to have a heroine.

It's very nice. The author should go code it.

I hope the author will update more🙃. Hope to show up more! Serious! Plot 🙃

The sketches are already out, and the full version will probably be finished in early May.

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It may be a little different from what you imagined, but I personally like it quite a bit

Can you make it shorter?

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