
Become a Saint at the Beginning and Create an Invincible Supreme List
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[This book is free forever, no money required! ] Lin Yun traveled through the fantasy world and obtained a supreme palace. Start building a list. After completing the first mission, you will be directly promoted to the realm of saint! Then continue to create various lists. Fairy list... Mount list... Fairy weapon list... Powerful list... As each list became famous around the world, the whole world was shocked. In the midst of this, Lin Yun found himself going further and further on the road to invincibility.
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Official(30)Scraped 2mo ago
I am the God of the system, now reply 666, I want the system! You will get the system, and from then on, beauties, handsome guys, money, sports cars, and everything you want will follow. What are you waiting for? Reply quickly! First come first served, the first batch is limited to 999 lucky people!
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As a saint, wouldn't it be enough to wake him up if he faints? What extra drama? I feel a little dizzy.
Protagonist Our Lady
The protagonist is a bit of a saint. Someone comes to attack him. Instead of killing him, he keeps him as a watchdog and gives him emperor-level skills. Even though he is a watchdog, this is not enough. This is the behavior of a saint. Moreover, the protagonist in the back is not as good as the supporting role, and there are three women in the supporting role.
Another online article written to follow the trend
a thousand years
To become a saint, you should first become a physique. No wonder you are so angry. It would be great if you could just write a reward for the saint's cultivation.
Personally, I would like to give some advice to the author.
I don't know if you, the author, have noticed that most of the lists are meaningless. You will also feel visual fatigue when reading them, and you will have no sense of expectation to continue reading. In addition, you made the protagonist too immature. This kind of protagonist can be made into a supreme power. Although the slaves are somewhat lowered, it is not impossible to get them, but why can't they go to the strongest men who have fallen from various eras, directly use their magical powers to subdue the heroic spirits and erase their memories, and guard their hometown or guard the gate, won't their strength come up? The main reason for visual fatigue is that the author has not completely constructed the world, and the readers cannot force their minds to figure it out. Moreover, the space for the protagonist to display is too small, and I do not feel that the protagonist is brilliant at all, and the sense of substitution is not very strong. Another point is that you can completely develop the list. The cross-border competition is too low, so we need to start a cross-era competition. Bring out some ancient families, sleeping forces, hidden forces, some absolute restricted areas, mysterious ancient stars... In this way, the protagonist will have more room to display, and we readers will have more expectations. I can't help but sigh that the protagonist's pretentious world is really big. There are many geniuses across the ages. Who is Long Aotian and who is Ye Liangchen? Is it An Lan who holds the original imperial city with one hand, or is it my son Wang Teng who has the qualifications to be an emperor? Think about it for yourself, from various eras, modern times, ancient times, ancient times, ancient times... Aren't the various cross-era geniuses competing for hegemony more interesting? Isn't it more exciting? Isn't it exciting enough? Isn't it exciting enough to just pull up to the remote foreign land? Isn't it exciting enough? It's even more exciting if you think about it yourself... Furthermore, the author pattern is not limited to the list. You can also create an ancient road for hegemony, and cross-era geniuses compete for hegemony. You can create a list of gods to confer emperors, kings, and lords... To achieve a truly high position and a real supreme boss. Don't lower the protagonist's authority. Open up the pattern and have unlimited imagination. Add these together, and the rhythm should be fast at first. The big world that makes readers look forward to it will unfold, personal words. It's just a suggestion, without any provocation or slander. Creation is not easy, keep working hard.
Not very pretty!
Reason: The main reason is that the author describes too little about life in the Supreme Palace, the protagonist has no sense of existence at all, and apart from giving away magic weapons, exercises, etc., It is just a list, which is too bland!
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Why is the demonic cultivator stronger? Why is the demonic cultivator stronger again?
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Official(30)Scraped 2mo ago
I am the God of the system, now reply 666, I want the system! You will get the system, and from then on, beauties, handsome guys, money, sports cars, and everything you want will follow. What are you waiting for? Reply quickly! First come first served, the first batch is limited to 999 lucky people!
generally
As a saint, wouldn't it be enough to wake him up if he faints? What extra drama? I feel a little dizzy.
Protagonist Our Lady
The protagonist is a bit of a saint. Someone comes to attack him. Instead of killing him, he keeps him as a watchdog and gives him emperor-level skills. Even though he is a watchdog, this is not enough. This is the behavior of a saint. Moreover, the protagonist in the back is not as good as the supporting role, and there are three women in the supporting role.
Another online article written to follow the trend
a thousand years
To become a saint, you should first become a physique. No wonder you are so angry. It would be great if you could just write a reward for the saint's cultivation.
Personally, I would like to give some advice to the author.
I don't know if you, the author, have noticed that most of the lists are meaningless. You will also feel visual fatigue when reading them, and you will have no sense of expectation to continue reading. In addition, you made the protagonist too immature. This kind of protagonist can be made into a supreme power. Although the slaves are somewhat lowered, it is not impossible to get them, but why can't they go to the strongest men who have fallen from various eras, directly use their magical powers to subdue the heroic spirits and erase their memories, and guard their hometown or guard the gate, won't their strength come up? The main reason for visual fatigue is that the author has not completely constructed the world, and the readers cannot force their minds to figure it out. Moreover, the space for the protagonist to display is too small, and I do not feel that the protagonist is brilliant at all, and the sense of substitution is not very strong. Another point is that you can completely develop the list. The cross-border competition is too low, so we need to start a cross-era competition. Bring out some ancient families, sleeping forces, hidden forces, some absolute restricted areas, mysterious ancient stars... In this way, the protagonist will have more room to display, and we readers will have more expectations. I can't help but sigh that the protagonist's pretentious world is really big. There are many geniuses across the ages. Who is Long Aotian and who is Ye Liangchen? Is it An Lan who holds the original imperial city with one hand, or is it my son Wang Teng who has the qualifications to be an emperor? Think about it for yourself, from various eras, modern times, ancient times, ancient times, ancient times... Aren't the various cross-era geniuses competing for hegemony more interesting? Isn't it more exciting? Isn't it exciting enough? Isn't it exciting enough to just pull up to the remote foreign land? Isn't it exciting enough? It's even more exciting if you think about it yourself... Furthermore, the author pattern is not limited to the list. You can also create an ancient road for hegemony, and cross-era geniuses compete for hegemony. You can create a list of gods to confer emperors, kings, and lords... To achieve a truly high position and a real supreme boss. Don't lower the protagonist's authority. Open up the pattern and have unlimited imagination. Add these together, and the rhythm should be fast at first. The big world that makes readers look forward to it will unfold, personal words. It's just a suggestion, without any provocation or slander. Creation is not easy, keep working hard.
Not very pretty!
Reason: The main reason is that the author describes too little about life in the Supreme Palace, the protagonist has no sense of existence at all, and apart from giving away magic weapons, exercises, etc., It is just a list, which is too bland!
Top, top, top! !
More updates! ! First time seeing this type of book! ! ! Good looking! !
Why is the demonic cultivator stronger? Why is the demonic cultivator stronger again?











