The Strange Records of the Spirit Tribe

Well, please forgive me, I need to write in more detail. At least within 10 chapters. What is going to happen, and what kind of background can be written completely.

The writing style is still a bit immature. Details details details! Details are everything. These two chapters only introduce the background of the story and the identity of the male protagonist. Do you understand the golden chapter three? The character of the protagonist must be highlighted to make readers want to read on.

How to put it this way, it's not the type of book I like or am good at, so it's a bit difficult for me to evaluate it, so I won't comment at all and just give suggestions. I would like to give you two suggestions, based on a rough look from an ordinary person's perspective. One is: If you don't know how to choose chapter names, let's not choose them first. Let's learn from others first. Otherwise, readers will be dissuaded from the beginning, because it seems that there is not much interest in it because it reveals a new feeling. I won't talk about the issue of writing. After all, they are all newbies and they all need to grow up. Just reading the plot makes me feel a little confused. Of course, maybe there is a reason why I don't like this type of book. You can be more logical and refer to the logical thinking of the great masters in this type of book. I don't expect to adopt it, after all, I'm just a newbie.

Also, my typing is really slow. I have a lot of thoughts in my mind, but only a few words have been written.

Thanks to the brother named Taier. Well, I'm not high enough to reply to you publicly.