Journey to the Wizarding World of Hogwarts

It's a bit confusing. Hogwarts is just Hogwarts. It has to show the power and mystery of our Greater China, create a family of immortal cultivators, and create a powerful and immortal ancestor as a backer. Why are you doing this? I don't understand!

It's best not to fall in love in the first grade of Hermione now. Wasn't Hermione crazy about the liar professor in the second grade? This could be written as a pig's foot and Hermione's emotional explosion (a little suggestion)

First of all, I am very grateful to the boss of "Qili River God" for his long review, letting me know that this book... Is still read... Damn it, I feel even more miserable. This book has finally reached 1 million words, which shows that the author still has a talent for nonsense... Although they all follow the original work, In the Water. Well, this is not the topic. The topic of this post is apology. To be honest, I completely forgot that happened. In fact, the first person to raise the question was a book friend named "Danran". He said that I created a family of cultivators, which made the whole book look a bit messy. To be honest, I was completely confused when I saw this book review. I didn't want to write anything related to cultivation. If I had the writing power, I would have written fantasy. In fact, I don't even want to write about cultivation. The weak author said that I can't even make up something like a power system. It wasn't until several book friends mentioned things like cultivation, higher gods, etc., That I had a bad feeling. After a suggestion from book friend "Ou Bu Zhan Lai Shi", I found out that when book friends talked about cultivating immortals, they referred to the profession of Taoist priests. It is probably because most of the Taoist articles and film and television works I read are related to martial arts, so in my impression, the Taoist profession has no other skills except drawing talismans, setting off thunder, and making waves. However, I have forgotten the biggest problem of Taoist priests - praying to gods. Taoist priest... He seems to... Also be able to cultivate immortality! ! ! How could I forget that there is such a terrifying existence as Emperor Zhenwu! Damn it, I have watched "Journey to the West" for so many years in vain! I obviously avoided all the magic, internal strength and other stuff, but in the end I chose a bad one among bad ones! Sure enough, there is a reason why I have failed the multiple-choice questions for so many years (Ｔ▽Ｔ). The author has already fainted in the toilet crying, hoping that Myrtle will not drive me away. I am a stupid author who is indeed a fake. I would like to apologize to all book friends for causing all kinds of discomfort to your reading. I am really sorry. This was my mistake. Of course, there is no solution. In fact, I mentioned it in "Volume 4, Chapter 75, Secrecy Law". Because I was worried that the power would run amok, I cut the setting of this book a bit low. Gods and the like have all disappeared and become the nourishment for the evolution of heaven and earth. This is a degenerated world, so the "invite gods" cannot actually invite gods, but it should be possible to gather a large amount of spiritual power. However, it is estimated that no book club will burst into tears after reading the fourth volume. Many Taoist priests' methods should be discounted, but I don't want to write about this at the moment. I will talk about it after I think about it. Once again, I would like to express my gratitude to all the book lovers. Thank you for your collection and subscription, which prevents me from being single-player all the time... No, in fact, it is now a stand-alone o(╥╥)o.

The setting of the novel in the Chinese magical world does not match the overall style of HP. Moreover, after the Pig's Knuckle Trio came online, I felt that the male protagonist's character design was becoming increasingly untenable. Moreover, the author does not like Ron_Ronald Weasley, and the characters of the Iron Triangle are very different from the original work. A little diss to the author, I feel like he is an LSP fan who has not read the novel carefully, only watched the movie, and "covets" Emma's beauty. Because Ron's highlight moments in the movie were all wiped out by the director, and he and Harry had so many shortcomings that they were the main ones holding him back. The last two movies were really "Hermione and her two stupid men". In fact, if you look closely at the original work, you will see that both Harry and Ron have a lot of shortcomings and have gotten into a lot of trouble. They all have their own advantages and highlight moments. Don't be biased against Ronald Weasley. If you don't like Ron, it's fair to look down on Harry. They are both equally good at each other, most of their shortcomings overlap, and Harry is the "savior" who makes mistakes and kills people who are not comparable to Ron. In particular, the author of this book should have given Hermione the "heroine", which was influenced by many aspects of the movie (1. Hermione's appearance in the movie exceeds the description in the original book too much, 2. The movie did not describe Hermione's shortcomings and mistakes in detail, and almost used it as Harry's "goldfinger"). The author deeply hates Ron and is quick to die. He feels that Hero is CP and Ron is not worthy. In fact, it's okay to dismantle CP, but Pride and Prejudice, the taste of HP has changed. To sum up, the previous paragraph is mid-level among HP fans. Later, the Chinese background came online, but the author didn't handle it well. The atmosphere of the story collapsed a bit, the style began to be "mixed" with fantasy, and the novel was just average. Later, the Iron Triangle appeared, the plot was consistent with the original story line, the characters were not established (it can be said that most of them were second-guessing), and the HP completely changed. I strongly discourage fans who like HP's original work and movie. Of course, it won't affect those who like the author's second novel. But I am a fan of J. K.'S original work. This novel is a dissuade for me.

Actually, I want to give it two stars... But it doesn't mean I can't watch it. First: the character shaping is too rigid To describe it in one sentence, the protagonist is dead and there is not much foreshadowing, so it is difficult to understand the nature of the protagonist. He will not be able to think independently, and readers will not have an intuitive view of the development of the plot. They all rely on the author's ideas, which highlights the multi-faceted nature of the protagonist and the existence of supporting characters. The feeling has dropped again and again. I prefer group portraits, but one thing I can do is that JK Rowling has prepared a world view and distinctive characters and environment images, and I can develop them according to their characters. But this is the second point I want to complain about, and a serious demerit point. Second: too confusing Hahahaha, it's too toxic, but since I'm a novice author, I won't complain about anything else. Chinese immortality is combined with Western swords and magic (manual vomiting blood). In Harry Potter, which has certain Cthulhu elements, you can cultivate immortality for me. 1. Strength is difficult to unify, and it is not a standard quantity. 2. Writing is too difficult to control. Swords and magic are inferior to Taoism. , The special effects are in the sky and below, and the level A used by a mob (elite) can catch up with the ultimate move of the Great Immortal. The description of this battle is unclear, and the upper gods on both sides have the supreme power. Watching the two forces fighting, will there be no conflict? Even if I could write it slowly, how many words would this earth and water contain and how many chapters would the plot be delayed? It may not be written clearly, but that is not the point. No matter how clearly it is written, it is not the main plot. You will not be able to write it at the end. The more you write, the more chaotic it becomes, until you get to the eunuch. There is no immortality, a ready-made world view, and an orphan protagonist. Whether it is popular or not depends on whether your protagonist is good at it. No one has said that your word count is poor. OK: bold enough. I like to write whatever I want and show my own thoughts in the work. I guess I also wrote down all my whims while watching Harry Potter. My imagination is okay, but I will consider the plot development next time. Having a world view that is too big is not a good thing, and the gap between the two world views is too big, which is also the difference between Chinese and Western cultures. It is a bit difficult for you to write them together, but I am not looking down on you. After all, Harry Potter is too familiar. Think about it, Avada Kedavra can kill Tathagata Buddha in seconds, haha, I am a little excited thinking about it. Come on, I support you. People who work hard will always succeed. Support the stars of tomorrow. Next time, buddy, I will look forward to your thoughts on cultivating immortality in the apocalypse. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.)

What I wrote before was okay, but when it came to Flower Country and Decca, it really got worse and worse. If you write a Western fantasy novel about Harry's world view, I can understand it, and bring in druids and the like. But when it comes to Chinese immortality, I really can't understand it. When writing Western fantasy novels like Harry, don't include Eastern content. They are not a system.

Ron here is really annoying, so annoying. Hermione sticks to Harry all day long. I don't know what the role of the protagonist is at all. We know how to help them solve problems in one day, and I don't see how much strength has been improved. I don't study the link skill for a day, and I don't see its use.

Highly recommend this book. The reason why I came across this book was very strange. I was searching for Conan fan fiction, and when I scrolled down, I saw this book, and I clicked on it. Many fan fictions are mostly YY works, which are typical refreshing articles that satisfy readers' complicated thoughts after watching original works and movies. But few can be expanded and written. Although this book is not very comfortable to read, it does retain people. Only with depth can people be retained. The book expands nicely. I think it's pretty good. In addition, every good literary work has a well-created villain, but this one doesn't seem to have one. A lot of nonsense, but highly recommended. Can't there be a carriage return?

In the middle and back, the protagonist's figure becomes increasingly faint, and he has no idea what he is doing (it's just soy sauce). Moreover, the author is still writing about other things, and only a few hundred words can make it clear in one chapter (sometimes the content of several chapters can be written clearly in one or two chapters, but it takes several chapters). I really don't know what to show the readers.

The plot is bland and the strength is unclear (I feel very weak, but just a little stronger than the average little wizard), I don't want to make progress, and I can't figure out what the pig's feet are doing!