
Aphasia at Hogwarts
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The good news is that after being reborn in the magical world of Hogwarts and receiving the admission notice, Dumbledore is definitely as talented as the four founders. The bad news is that he is aphasic and cannot recite spells.
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Official(9)Scraped 4d ago
The magic reform is beyond recognition. Although he has his own ideas, there are many shortcomings and many unreasonableness. The most intelligent and powerful white magician in the contemporary era is tricked by the memory of a 16-year-old student. The game is full of mistakes. Just using a group of students as bait is completely inconsistent with Dumbledore's character. Using one or two can be said to be for righteousness. Using a group of students who cannot express their wishes as bait is the method of a black magician. Deliberately strengthening Slytherin. If Slytherin is really so powerful, then why do the other three deans do? He can build a college by himself, especially since Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw have completely become soy sauce. The most interesting thing is that Slytherin, who was so powerful, was wiped out within a minute of his appearance, leaving him speechless. Magical changes are possible, but you have to be logical. Originally, your subject matter was okay, but after you changed it like this, it became more and more boring.
The writing is quite awkward.
The protagonist talks about not wanting to steal the limelight from the trio and confronts Voldemort head-on. On the one hand, they do not exclude the trio, and can even be said to be actively contacting them. With only the fire spell, he took the initiative to fight Voldemort without any intention of escaping, and even thought he could win. While saying that he would not place all his hopes on Dumbledore. On the other hand, I think it's okay to have a professor as the finale. The protagonist's ability is to see magic circuits and ten times the magic power. But I didn't feel it was a problem at all. It took almost a few months to learn the fire spell. With the supply of ten times the magic power, it couldn't hurt Voldemort's remaining soul at all. Although this is a normal situation, where exactly is the protagonist's hook? And ten times more magic. Does the author really understand ten times that? If you change it to double, I feel there is no difference. The performance is so bad. Various descriptions of this ten-fold result completely fail to reflect the difference in strength from the trio. The protagonist is set to be mute. It doesn't matter if the spell progresses slowly. Having a good relationship with Hagrid doesn't mean he doesn't have money, and he doesn't prepare any self-defense items. The protagonist always looks for centaurs and Snape to be the Riddler. Isn't the protagonist himself no better? Even if I didn't remember all the plots of Harry Potter, didn't I say I remembered the first three, but in the end, I kept Hermione as a bystander the whole time. Didn't you say that they are good friends? What's so good about it? Always act as narrator with the idea that they will learn the truth later. This is the biggest Riddler. There may be a lot of foreshadowing or it may be exciting later on, but I just can't watch it anymore. It feels like the protagonist has absolutely no motivation or purpose. I have no desire to become stronger, nor do I want to protect anything. Completely follows the plot line. Be where you are when you are supposed to be. Trigger this part of the story like a puppet, and then move on to the next part.
There are fewer and fewer hp novels that I can read. I hope everyone won't be so arrogant~
I think it's totally fine for the protagonist to be mute. You can talk by studying alchemy or something. At present, the direction of the protagonist is very difficult to write. I also understand that the author was so criticized that he didn't want to write. I still want to watch it~ But I feel like I want to have two heroines? 🤣 Come back soon! !
This is a branch book that extends from the main line of Harry Potter. It is about the wizarding world rather than Harry Potter.
Okay, I have the idea to read it. Why are the reviews so bad? This book has its own ideas and theories. It is not the same. It is very good. Keep it up.
Three chapters have been updated in half a month, and two chapters are leave requests. You must be unfinished.
Although it has been changed a lot, it is still very good.
Isn't this true? Squib?
I can't recite mantras and I can't meditate. What else is there for?
Why no reviews? This book makes sense
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Official(9)Scraped 4d ago
The magic reform is beyond recognition. Although he has his own ideas, there are many shortcomings and many unreasonableness. The most intelligent and powerful white magician in the contemporary era is tricked by the memory of a 16-year-old student. The game is full of mistakes. Just using a group of students as bait is completely inconsistent with Dumbledore's character. Using one or two can be said to be for righteousness. Using a group of students who cannot express their wishes as bait is the method of a black magician. Deliberately strengthening Slytherin. If Slytherin is really so powerful, then why do the other three deans do? He can build a college by himself, especially since Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw have completely become soy sauce. The most interesting thing is that Slytherin, who was so powerful, was wiped out within a minute of his appearance, leaving him speechless. Magical changes are possible, but you have to be logical. Originally, your subject matter was okay, but after you changed it like this, it became more and more boring.
The writing is quite awkward.
The protagonist talks about not wanting to steal the limelight from the trio and confronts Voldemort head-on. On the one hand, they do not exclude the trio, and can even be said to be actively contacting them. With only the fire spell, he took the initiative to fight Voldemort without any intention of escaping, and even thought he could win. While saying that he would not place all his hopes on Dumbledore. On the other hand, I think it's okay to have a professor as the finale. The protagonist's ability is to see magic circuits and ten times the magic power. But I didn't feel it was a problem at all. It took almost a few months to learn the fire spell. With the supply of ten times the magic power, it couldn't hurt Voldemort's remaining soul at all. Although this is a normal situation, where exactly is the protagonist's hook? And ten times more magic. Does the author really understand ten times that? If you change it to double, I feel there is no difference. The performance is so bad. Various descriptions of this ten-fold result completely fail to reflect the difference in strength from the trio. The protagonist is set to be mute. It doesn't matter if the spell progresses slowly. Having a good relationship with Hagrid doesn't mean he doesn't have money, and he doesn't prepare any self-defense items. The protagonist always looks for centaurs and Snape to be the Riddler. Isn't the protagonist himself no better? Even if I didn't remember all the plots of Harry Potter, didn't I say I remembered the first three, but in the end, I kept Hermione as a bystander the whole time. Didn't you say that they are good friends? What's so good about it? Always act as narrator with the idea that they will learn the truth later. This is the biggest Riddler. There may be a lot of foreshadowing or it may be exciting later on, but I just can't watch it anymore. It feels like the protagonist has absolutely no motivation or purpose. I have no desire to become stronger, nor do I want to protect anything. Completely follows the plot line. Be where you are when you are supposed to be. Trigger this part of the story like a puppet, and then move on to the next part.
There are fewer and fewer hp novels that I can read. I hope everyone won't be so arrogant~
I think it's totally fine for the protagonist to be mute. You can talk by studying alchemy or something. At present, the direction of the protagonist is very difficult to write. I also understand that the author was so criticized that he didn't want to write. I still want to watch it~ But I feel like I want to have two heroines? 🤣 Come back soon! !
This is a branch book that extends from the main line of Harry Potter. It is about the wizarding world rather than Harry Potter.
Okay, I have the idea to read it. Why are the reviews so bad? This book has its own ideas and theories. It is not the same. It is very good. Keep it up.
Three chapters have been updated in half a month, and two chapters are leave requests. You must be unfinished.
Although it has been changed a lot, it is still very good.
Isn't this true? Squib?
I can't recite mantras and I can't meditate. What else is there for?
Why no reviews? This book makes sense









