
Hp Approaches the Magical World
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[Magic modification + daily life, please enter with caution] Explore the essence of magic, pursue the origin of the world, and let us approach the magical world together.
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Official(22)Scraped 23d ago
Dumbledore and Grindelwald's wedding vows
Grindelwald: Someone once asked me if I would choose my original path again if I had a choice. My answer at that time was no, I would rather be an ordinary wizard. But then someone asked me this question again, and that time, I answered yes. Because if I had not chosen that path, I would not have met you, fallen in love with you, or stood here begging you to let me continue to love you. I give this ring to you as a symbol of love and fidelity, and when I put it on your finger, I commit to you my whole heart and soul, and I ask you to wear this ring, which bears witness to the vows we have made today, on our wedding day. Dumbledore: Gellert, when I look into your eyes, what I see is my soulmate, a person who seems destined to bring two lives together. You are the most handsome, loyal and honest person I have ever met. I will I will give myself and my whole heart to you. You will accompany me with your love, humor and endless patience. You will unconditionally accept the real me and bring me warmth and security. In this life, I will be by your side as your partner. Albus, I am sure, it is us who are sure, thinking of you, no matter what happens, I will be by your side. Today, on our wedding, I promise you, I promise to be your partner in life. Helga's Marriage Speech: Then I will be honored to announce that according to the glory of the deep sea, in the name of the founder of Hogwarts and the living gods, I send you my blessings. The two of you have become a couple, sealed with a kiss.
The settings are all buggy. I suspect that the second, third, and fourth settings are the original works.
About Lao Deng knowing the prophecy, this is obviously a very important plot. Seven books revolve around this prophecy. The fifth book is about fighting for the prophecy, and the sixth book reveals the prophecy and Voldemort's weaknesses. Such an important plot can be forgotten. The protagonist's setting is an in-depth study of the HP world. Is he studying other people's two-set, three-set, and four-set fan fiction? When Lao Deng was interviewing Trelawney, she made a prediction in front of Lao Deng at the Pig's Head Bar, and thus got the position of professor of divination.
About the protagonist Sorting into Hufflepuff
I really don't see how the protagonist has the qualities of a Hufflepuff. Although the Sorting Hat listens to his opinion, you can't just go wherever you want. Harry could refuse to go to Slytherin and go to Gryffindor because he has the qualities of a Gryffindor. You can't just go to that house if you want to go to that house. Otherwise, things will get messed up.
Give the author some advice
Personality considerations for each branch's characters: Gryffindor: Passionate, brave, kind, reckless, easily incited (on the house with the most rumors) Slytherin: cold, keen, arrogant, ambitious, and unscrupulous in doing things (on the most action-oriented college) Ravenloud: Wisdom, curiosity, greed, and arrogance. Unless they have extraordinary wisdom, they are a very exclusive and proud group (on Luna's campus bullying) Hufflepuff: humble, gentle, friendly, not opinionated, has bottom lines but no principles, likes to be friendly (unless the bottom line is touched, otherwise he is a nice and transparent person)
Think too much, do too little
I started watching it at the starting point, then moved here, and a reviewer there said it well, the protagonist is putting the cart before the horse. Regardless of whether you are doing research or being a scholar, the first thing you need to do is to strengthen yourself, otherwise everything will be empty talk. For example, there is a point in the article where the protagonist is a little wizard in the first or second grade. What is the upper limit of the strength of a legendary wizard, whether gods exist, etc., Are too far away, just like a primary school student seriously discussing high-tech manufacturing. This is the time to lay the foundation. It is meaningless to discuss too many top-level concepts. At least until the protagonist has the ability to protect himself, right? It was even said that it would be too late to discuss and study these things until the protagonist has the strength of Dumbledore. Moreover, the protagonist has a bit of a persecution paranoia. He feels that everyone is paying attention to him and is afraid that he will be seen somewhere. But to be honest, what if the protagonist shows genius? No one cares about ordinary geniuses at all. For example, Cedric at the same time, the Weasley twins, and Charlie Weasley and Bill Weasley who are a few levels above can all be said to be talented. Do you think anyone cares? The protagonist thinks too highly of himself, and he always comments on the original characters in a condescending way, the most typical one being Cedric. The characters are really divided at times. On the one hand, he wants to be unknown and cautious, even daring to show off as a genius, for fear of someone harming him. On the other hand, he is eating first-grade food and worrying about the principal, trying to help this one and save that one. Moreover, the plot is sometimes really watery. Many of the ideas put forward by the protagonist rely on reasoning and guessing, because he currently does not have the strength to verify it. In this case, there are still long descriptions. If you want to complete your own world view, you can take your time through various events. This is because the author is not strong enough. Last but not least, the plot is too bland and uninteresting. It's not that the protagonist's experience is bland, but that the author describes the plot very blandly. Really, there are reasons for poor grades
personal evaluation
I can't stand it. The protagonist doesn't want to interfere with the main plot, so he joins Hufflepuff, and he wants to save the lives of those he wants to save. What does he think? Don't you know the butterfly effect? Is there such a thing as wanting to have everything in my own hands, but not taking any risks?
I don't want to see Hufflepuff when I see it
I don't want to see Hufflepuff when I see it
I highly doubt that this author understands what ordinary writing is. Daily writing can be cliche or plain, but it cannot be boring. What is the author's daily routine? And what is that self-created magic theory? Do you want people to follow it or something?
True magic reform
This magic modification makes me sick. Basically, all the settings have been changed. The magic settings and the magic environment are guessed to be replaced by Eastern cultivation. Also, I have been studying this and that for a long time, but my strength has not improved much. It is all theoretical knowledge that I have deduced. Gan
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Official(22)Scraped 23d ago
Dumbledore and Grindelwald's wedding vows
Grindelwald: Someone once asked me if I would choose my original path again if I had a choice. My answer at that time was no, I would rather be an ordinary wizard. But then someone asked me this question again, and that time, I answered yes. Because if I had not chosen that path, I would not have met you, fallen in love with you, or stood here begging you to let me continue to love you. I give this ring to you as a symbol of love and fidelity, and when I put it on your finger, I commit to you my whole heart and soul, and I ask you to wear this ring, which bears witness to the vows we have made today, on our wedding day. Dumbledore: Gellert, when I look into your eyes, what I see is my soulmate, a person who seems destined to bring two lives together. You are the most handsome, loyal and honest person I have ever met. I will I will give myself and my whole heart to you. You will accompany me with your love, humor and endless patience. You will unconditionally accept the real me and bring me warmth and security. In this life, I will be by your side as your partner. Albus, I am sure, it is us who are sure, thinking of you, no matter what happens, I will be by your side. Today, on our wedding, I promise you, I promise to be your partner in life. Helga's Marriage Speech: Then I will be honored to announce that according to the glory of the deep sea, in the name of the founder of Hogwarts and the living gods, I send you my blessings. The two of you have become a couple, sealed with a kiss.
The settings are all buggy. I suspect that the second, third, and fourth settings are the original works.
About Lao Deng knowing the prophecy, this is obviously a very important plot. Seven books revolve around this prophecy. The fifth book is about fighting for the prophecy, and the sixth book reveals the prophecy and Voldemort's weaknesses. Such an important plot can be forgotten. The protagonist's setting is an in-depth study of the HP world. Is he studying other people's two-set, three-set, and four-set fan fiction? When Lao Deng was interviewing Trelawney, she made a prediction in front of Lao Deng at the Pig's Head Bar, and thus got the position of professor of divination.
About the protagonist Sorting into Hufflepuff
I really don't see how the protagonist has the qualities of a Hufflepuff. Although the Sorting Hat listens to his opinion, you can't just go wherever you want. Harry could refuse to go to Slytherin and go to Gryffindor because he has the qualities of a Gryffindor. You can't just go to that house if you want to go to that house. Otherwise, things will get messed up.
Give the author some advice
Personality considerations for each branch's characters: Gryffindor: Passionate, brave, kind, reckless, easily incited (on the house with the most rumors) Slytherin: cold, keen, arrogant, ambitious, and unscrupulous in doing things (on the most action-oriented college) Ravenloud: Wisdom, curiosity, greed, and arrogance. Unless they have extraordinary wisdom, they are a very exclusive and proud group (on Luna's campus bullying) Hufflepuff: humble, gentle, friendly, not opinionated, has bottom lines but no principles, likes to be friendly (unless the bottom line is touched, otherwise he is a nice and transparent person)
Think too much, do too little
I started watching it at the starting point, then moved here, and a reviewer there said it well, the protagonist is putting the cart before the horse. Regardless of whether you are doing research or being a scholar, the first thing you need to do is to strengthen yourself, otherwise everything will be empty talk. For example, there is a point in the article where the protagonist is a little wizard in the first or second grade. What is the upper limit of the strength of a legendary wizard, whether gods exist, etc., Are too far away, just like a primary school student seriously discussing high-tech manufacturing. This is the time to lay the foundation. It is meaningless to discuss too many top-level concepts. At least until the protagonist has the ability to protect himself, right? It was even said that it would be too late to discuss and study these things until the protagonist has the strength of Dumbledore. Moreover, the protagonist has a bit of a persecution paranoia. He feels that everyone is paying attention to him and is afraid that he will be seen somewhere. But to be honest, what if the protagonist shows genius? No one cares about ordinary geniuses at all. For example, Cedric at the same time, the Weasley twins, and Charlie Weasley and Bill Weasley who are a few levels above can all be said to be talented. Do you think anyone cares? The protagonist thinks too highly of himself, and he always comments on the original characters in a condescending way, the most typical one being Cedric. The characters are really divided at times. On the one hand, he wants to be unknown and cautious, even daring to show off as a genius, for fear of someone harming him. On the other hand, he is eating first-grade food and worrying about the principal, trying to help this one and save that one. Moreover, the plot is sometimes really watery. Many of the ideas put forward by the protagonist rely on reasoning and guessing, because he currently does not have the strength to verify it. In this case, there are still long descriptions. If you want to complete your own world view, you can take your time through various events. This is because the author is not strong enough. Last but not least, the plot is too bland and uninteresting. It's not that the protagonist's experience is bland, but that the author describes the plot very blandly. Really, there are reasons for poor grades
personal evaluation
I can't stand it. The protagonist doesn't want to interfere with the main plot, so he joins Hufflepuff, and he wants to save the lives of those he wants to save. What does he think? Don't you know the butterfly effect? Is there such a thing as wanting to have everything in my own hands, but not taking any risks?
I don't want to see Hufflepuff when I see it
I don't want to see Hufflepuff when I see it
I highly doubt that this author understands what ordinary writing is. Daily writing can be cliche or plain, but it cannot be boring. What is the author's daily routine? And what is that self-created magic theory? Do you want people to follow it or something?
True magic reform
This magic modification makes me sick. Basically, all the settings have been changed. The magic settings and the magic environment are guessed to be replaced by Eastern cultivation. Also, I have been studying this and that for a long time, but my strength has not improved much. It is all theoretical knowledge that I have deduced. Gan






















