Linghai Immortal Clan
by Hard-working Little Pig's Hooves
About This Novel
Cultivation! What is it that you are cultivating, whether it is to live forever in the way of heaven, or to be heartless and desireless, then it doesn't matter if this immortal doesn't cultivate it. Next, let me take you into the world of immortality, and learn about a young man's journey from being weak to being powerful, and about the process of a newly established family slowly becoming stronger.
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Official(29)Scraped 21d ago
How many days will I update?
Damn, there are still people chasing me.
Write a rough script
The early stage is about mediocre cultivation, with occasional opportunities, the middle stage is full of battles, the later stage is conspiracy, and the later stage is an interface war. As for ascending to the upper realm, we'll talk about it at that time.
It's pretty good, although there are typos in the front. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
It's pretty good, although there are typos in the front. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
I wish you better and better, and I advise you to start writing a new novel. This novel is unreasonable.
To be honest, your book is not good. You can get opportunities as soon as you go out. You can cultivate immortality without anyone's guidance. You should also listen to the novel by yourself. Please give it a listen. You can delete this comment soon. I just watched you write, and you didn't go to bed until after 4 o'clock. I just came to tell you. You are still tired despite the joy and hardship.
It's very well written, don't give up, I will keep reading, keep up the good work
After reading the first three chapters, give a critical review
First of all, there is too much nonsense. Many paragraphs can be deleted. Secondly, the plot is too bland Cultivation into immortality is not a trivial matter, and there is no suspense or grand scenes in the first three chapters, which cannot attract readers' interest in reading. In addition, it's ridiculous how Tiger got the chance.
It's too imprecise, too outrageous
An eight-year-old boy didn't even know what cultivation was or where to practice, so he went out to sea to find immortals, not to mention that his parents had told him that there were monsters that ate people. I prepared some food, but I really couldn't imagine how he would survive in danger. What's outrageous is that when I go out, I encounter a tiger demon who gives me an opportunity. I can't stand it
come on
It's already pretty good, keep up the hard work, because after all, this subject matter is not particularly popular.
There are too many typos, which already affects reading, and the plot develops too fast.
There are so many typos that I can't watch anymore. The plot develops really fast. In just a few dozen chapters, the protagonist develops his family from a child to a golden elixir
Rating
Community(0)
Official(29)Scraped 21d ago
How many days will I update?
Damn, there are still people chasing me.
Write a rough script
The early stage is about mediocre cultivation, with occasional opportunities, the middle stage is full of battles, the later stage is conspiracy, and the later stage is an interface war. As for ascending to the upper realm, we'll talk about it at that time.
It's pretty good, although there are typos in the front. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
It's pretty good, although there are typos in the front. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
I wish you better and better, and I advise you to start writing a new novel. This novel is unreasonable.
To be honest, your book is not good. You can get opportunities as soon as you go out. You can cultivate immortality without anyone's guidance. You should also listen to the novel by yourself. Please give it a listen. You can delete this comment soon. I just watched you write, and you didn't go to bed until after 4 o'clock. I just came to tell you. You are still tired despite the joy and hardship.
It's very well written, don't give up, I will keep reading, keep up the good work
After reading the first three chapters, give a critical review
First of all, there is too much nonsense. Many paragraphs can be deleted. Secondly, the plot is too bland Cultivation into immortality is not a trivial matter, and there is no suspense or grand scenes in the first three chapters, which cannot attract readers' interest in reading. In addition, it's ridiculous how Tiger got the chance.
It's too imprecise, too outrageous
An eight-year-old boy didn't even know what cultivation was or where to practice, so he went out to sea to find immortals, not to mention that his parents had told him that there were monsters that ate people. I prepared some food, but I really couldn't imagine how he would survive in danger. What's outrageous is that when I go out, I encounter a tiger demon who gives me an opportunity. I can't stand it
come on
It's already pretty good, keep up the hard work, because after all, this subject matter is not particularly popular.
There are too many typos, which already affects reading, and the plot develops too fast.
There are so many typos that I can't watch anymore. The plot develops really fast. In just a few dozen chapters, the protagonist develops his family from a child to a golden elixir
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