Heavens, Starting from Martial Arts
by Midsummer
About This Novel
All astronomy. Martial Arts, Great Overlord, Perfection, Covering the Sky, Age of Desolation, Coiling Dragon, Devouring the Starry Sky, Eternal Life, Snow, Seeking Demon... Before I started the book, I wanted to write about many worlds, but after I started writing, I found that Zhu Tianwen was written world by world, which gave me a better look and feel. So for the time being, I'm just going to write about martial arts, and I'll talk about the rest after I finish writing about martial arts. (Wu Dong fandom is so miserable, I haven't seen the two completed volumes. I hope I can keep writing it to the end. )
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Official(22)Scraped 3d ago
Don't think that opportunities belong to others. Once you travel through time, you have to find ways to become stronger. Everything is possible before it is destined.
Yuandan House doesn't plan to fight with others? Isn't this useless? All Yuandan, no combat experience at all! Personally, I think it's a bit funny that Lin Dong was able to hang up the Yuan Dan stage of flowers like this in the greenhouse when he was in the early stage of Tianyuan Stage! What does this look like?
If the author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, then don't mess around with the harem. For single ***, either there is no heroine or 1-2 is more suitable, otherwise it will be embarrassing and the heroine has no sense of presence.
Looked at the catalog
I bet this book is absolutely eunuch. The word count of Wu Dong is so low, dozens of pages are still in Novice Village. After reading the first 2 chapters, it turned out that the word count of water is the king.
This book is real water. It has more than fifty chapters and is still at the seventh level of body tempering. Moreover, the demon crystals of the Creation Realm are given away as soon as they are given away. Moreover, the mineral veins are given away and that's enough. Abandon them. Alas.
It's too slow. The protagonist slipped away in the novice village.
Why doesn't the author just write a demon-seeking fanfic?
slow
Only one picture a day, you are raising fish. ? ? ? If you raise me like this, that's all I can do.
It feels like a newbie, and the character creation of the protagonist is very poor. It neither depicts the youthful spirit nor the means of strategizing. The protagonist is timid, but does not have the means to look forward and backward. He has a golden finger but does not use it. He is also confused about the use of resources. He only wants to specialize in martial arts, but he started out because of his top spiritual talent, which is contradictory. At worst, it is a dual cultivation of martial arts and talismans. It's okay that the plot is slow to heat up, but the mental power is still not getting warmed up even though I have the Tianyuan Kuaiyuan Dan. The martial arts is still at the sixth level of body tempering. As mentioned before, it is necessary to cultivate the mental power first so as to collect martial arts resources, but it has not started yet. Personal suggestions, for reference only
Looking forward to the follow-up plot, please support the author
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Official(22)Scraped 3d ago
Don't think that opportunities belong to others. Once you travel through time, you have to find ways to become stronger. Everything is possible before it is destined.
Yuandan House doesn't plan to fight with others? Isn't this useless? All Yuandan, no combat experience at all! Personally, I think it's a bit funny that Lin Dong was able to hang up the Yuan Dan stage of flowers like this in the greenhouse when he was in the early stage of Tianyuan Stage! What does this look like?
If the author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, then don't mess around with the harem. For single ***, either there is no heroine or 1-2 is more suitable, otherwise it will be embarrassing and the heroine has no sense of presence.
Looked at the catalog
I bet this book is absolutely eunuch. The word count of Wu Dong is so low, dozens of pages are still in Novice Village. After reading the first 2 chapters, it turned out that the word count of water is the king.
This book is real water. It has more than fifty chapters and is still at the seventh level of body tempering. Moreover, the demon crystals of the Creation Realm are given away as soon as they are given away. Moreover, the mineral veins are given away and that's enough. Abandon them. Alas.
It's too slow. The protagonist slipped away in the novice village.
Why doesn't the author just write a demon-seeking fanfic?
slow
Only one picture a day, you are raising fish. ? ? ? If you raise me like this, that's all I can do.
It feels like a newbie, and the character creation of the protagonist is very poor. It neither depicts the youthful spirit nor the means of strategizing. The protagonist is timid, but does not have the means to look forward and backward. He has a golden finger but does not use it. He is also confused about the use of resources. He only wants to specialize in martial arts, but he started out because of his top spiritual talent, which is contradictory. At worst, it is a dual cultivation of martial arts and talismans. It's okay that the plot is slow to heat up, but the mental power is still not getting warmed up even though I have the Tianyuan Kuaiyuan Dan. The martial arts is still at the sixth level of body tempering. As mentioned before, it is necessary to cultivate the mental power first so as to collect martial arts resources, but it has not started yet. Personal suggestions, for reference only
Looking forward to the follow-up plot, please support the author
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