The God of Ice and Fire at Hogwarts

I feel like the heroine's character is a bit bad and very childish. She is not worthy of the male protagonist at all, and the appearance and personality of the female protagonist do not match at all. I feel that the female protagonist is the failure of the entire novel. From the beginning, I felt that the novel was okay. After the heroine appeared, I felt that the whole novel instantly made me want to stop reading.

I created a time traveler female protagonist. In the beginning, the female protagonist is the nanny of the three little ones, and the male protagonist is the nanny of the female protagonist.

The author's writing style is actually not that good, but I quite enjoyed reading the protagonist's character and plot development. This is one of the rare Harry fanfics that I read in its entirety without skipping a beat. There are two main characters, a male and female protagonist, and their complementary styles and talents perfectly satisfied my fantasy of that world. This book may be different from the original work in many places and details, but I don't really care about this because I don't like the original work that much. What I like is the magical world and setting inside. As for the original characters and plot, they are somewhat childish for me as an adult. Moreover, the characters of the three little ones in the original work are quite extreme, reckless and stubborn. I loved it as a kid, but now I prefer the sane protagonist. Secondly, many fanfics either ignore the main plot at all, or are like nannies, or replace Harry as the savior. I don't really like those, mainly because most readers of the plot know it, that is, there is a God's perspective, so why should I read the plot that I already know. Even if the protagonist is changed, the known things must be written in detail. I feel so bored. This is a book in which the protagonist uses known information and is more master-oriented. He can write about the main plot, but he doesn't have much pen and ink. It's more in line with my reading style. Of course, I can't say that this book is perfect. In fact, the various complementary settings and love stories of the two protagonists are actually written like fairy tales. However, I don't think it affects the viewing. I think it is quite interesting. This kind of destined protagonist is rare, and suddenly I thought it was okay. At least the author's writing is not greasy. As for the various magical knowledge, I guess it's just a casual look. I haven't studied the issues in detail, but the logic is definitely not that rigorous. And basically most of the perspectives are on the two protagonists, and not much is said about other characters, so I feel that it is not suitable for readers who like most of the characters in the original work. I like to watch it, really because I really like the setting of Harry's magical world. I would fantasize about how great it would be if I could go to Hogwarts, so the two protagonists should make me feel immersed in it. Moreover, the male and female protagonists have two identities, no matter what kind of life they like, they can be substituted for each other. Then the two people have always been invisible in the layout, allowing the main line to proceed according to their ideas, as well as the strong strength and the integration of the magical world and the ordinary world, which are things that I am very optimistic about. When I was watching the movie, I kept thinking that it would be fun to combine magic with ordinary people's lives. Of course, I just thought about it casually. Overall, I quite liked it after reading it, and I recommend it, but it's definitely not a perfect recommendation. Just a personal preference. Moreover, the author's writing style is indeed average. By the time I got to the end of the book, I actually felt that the author had forgotten what he was writing. For example, the two protagonists established an organization and used an unforgettable contract to prevent betrayal. Subsequently, this organization recruited nearly ten people, and then disappeared. In the end, the name of this organization and its purpose were not mentioned. At first it was said that it was to pay off Voldemort, but in fact the protagonist also formed the D. A Army (the student version of Dumbledore's Army) in the college and led this group to defeat Voldemort. The protagonist's organization was recruited by Zeyou from among these people. Moreover, when the oath was taken, there was some foreshadowing that it was not all formed to deal with Voldemort, but in the end this organization was not mentioned, and it felt like the author forgot about it or couldn't continue writing it. I always thought that the protagonist would use these people to do something in the follow-up, but the ending was not mentioned, and the two of them just got married and it ended. So, I quite like it and recommend it. But not everyone likes to watch it. 😶

The early plot is average, but the middle plot is subpar. Before meeting the heroine, the male protagonist was still a little aloof. After meeting the heroine, who is also a time traveler, he became a loser. It seems to be two protagonists, but in fact the two protagonists have the same personality. Whether it is the female protagonist who plays with ice or the male protagonist who plays with fire, they have a strong atmosphere of middle school and high school students, and it is impossible to tell that they have gone to college.

Writing a diary is as disgusting as shit

The male protagonist is a transparent person

I keep saying that Merlin's socks turn from black to white and then to lace. Can you post a picture? It's very appetizing.

To avoid stepping into the trap again. So give it five stars after all. Among all the men, God knows how many book friends are above me. Just give it five stars and flip it. Highly recommended. Some are easier to find. This thing stopped me at chapter 187.

Isn't it why so many authors who are not good at writing still like to challenge themselves? After the double penetration in the second semester, I couldn't watch it at all.

Author, there are too few chapters about the protagonist. I keep writing about the plot of Irina and the three little ones, which is too far away.