Legend of Chiba of Konoha

I don't have much impression, but I am a Naruto fan, and I feel like you made a mistake in writing it. How could he learn the power? Even if he learns strange power, he must at least learn chakra storage. The prerequisite for knowing strange power is to learn one of Tsunade's forbidden techniques, and if he learns this forbidden technique, he will not be short of mana.

This book is extremely poisonous. The front part is really good. If you can see the story of Naruto's birth, you can stop. Why, it's because the author has changed his style. The second male lead is dead, the third and fourth male lead is dead, and the female lead is dead. The main plot characters all died as long as they had a good relationship with the male protagonist in the early stage, and then the protagonist left, left the Hokage Village, and then started the Shippuden plot. The protagonist watched Naruto grow up until now, so if you want to see it, you can see it if you see my explanation. I have roughly explained how the poison is, and the rest is up to you. If you are not a low-IQ person, I feel that I can't stand it. The author should have changed, and now he is a ghostwriter. Everyone, please take care of yourself. I was poisoned and I am still disgusting.

In Naruto, the ultimate evolution of the Sharingan is the Rinnegan, but this evolution process is really difficult, because everyone knows that although the Sharingan is very powerful, even if it is a member of the Uchiha clan, if the talent is not up to standard, Maybe even one Magatama Sharingan cannot be opened. The average Uchiha tribesman can open three Magatama, which is already an elite ninja. But if you want to evolve to the level of Mangekyo Sharingan, you must experience the death of a relative or friend. Under normal circumstances, the evolution of Sasuke's Sharingan eye has basically reached its peak. Unless he also imitates Uchiha Madara and bites Naruto, then it is possible for Sasuke to open the Rinnegan eye in his later years, but this possibility is almost impossible. However, in the Fourth Ninja World War, Sasuke accepted the Yin power of the Six Paths Sage. His left eye opened the Samsara Eye, which ultimately changed the direction of the war. Sasuke and Naruto sealed the final boss Kaguya Otsutsuki and became heroes in the ninja world. Today we analyze the two differences between Sasuke and Uchiha Madara's Samsara Eye. It's not just as simple as having a few more magatama! Note that the difference mentioned here is not the difference between the two techniques of the Samsara Eye! Everyone knows that Uchiha Madara's Samsara Eye is naturally opened. When Madara bit Hashirama, he got Hashirama's cells. After decades of cultivation, Madara finally opened the real Samsara Eye when he was old. Madara can control the opening and closing of the Samsara Eye at any time, and Sasuke is During the Great Ninja World War, when he was dying frequently, he received a gift from the Sage of Six Paths, which opened the Samsara Eye. However, because it was not opened naturally, Sasuke's Samsara Eye could not be closed after it was opened. Later, Sasuke had to change his hairstyle and usually use his hair to block the Samsara Eye. It was very inconvenient to say this, and Sasuke had to go out and wander. As Xiang Lian once said, as long as the reincarnation eye is still in Sasuke, there will be forces coveting this power, and Konoha will fall into disputes. And if Sasuke's Rinnegan can be opened and closed like Uchiha Madara, then Sasuke can at least be at home with his wife and children. As the saying goes, a common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of carrying a jade. This is the truth. When Uchiha Madara is fighting the Five Shadows, when he wants to use the illusion ability of the original Sharingan, he must first switch back to the Mangekyo Sharingan. From this, we can know that although Madara's Rinnegan can be easily opened and closed, its function is independent, which means that the Sharingan's The function must be used by the Sharingan. Of course, the Rinnegan must be switched to the Rinnegan. In the first animated picture, when absorbing Naruto's Senjutsu Rasengan Shuriken, it is switched to the Rinnegan. When using the illusion in the picture above, it must be switched back to the Mangekyo Sharingan. But Sasuke's is different. He can also use Amaterasu in the state of Rinnegan. From this, we know that Sasuke's Six Magatama Rinnegan is the fusion of Sharingan and Rinnegan. He can use the abilities of Sharingan and Rinnegan at the same time without switching. Miaomiao believes that it is the existence of those magatama that can achieve this effect.

Most authors will write the Yondaime and Kushina to death here, but I really look forward to a different story.

The author is very dedicated in writing this Naruto fanfic. I dare not say more, but I have read the novel for about seven years. You have written the Naruto fanfic with an emotional flavor. You made me feel a little bit out of Naruto when I read it. It made me feel like you have written about another world. , And it is different from most fanfics. I think other fanfics have a protagonist who only spends time as Naruto from the perspective of God. Yours truly allows the protagonist to enter the world of Naruto. I don't know if you understand this, but your writing is really good. Come on! The author is great.

Author, you are so tired. You actually wrote one hundred and forty chapters for one battle. Do you see how tired I am?

If the "Shisui" who knocked Chiba unconscious was "Uchiha Shisui", in the original book, Shisui is Obito's younger brother. Obito is not yet twelve years old at this time. How could Shisui be under Minato? He must be no more than five years old at this time, right?

The author can be said to be meticulous in his descriptions, the protagonist's inner monologue, battles, and thinking. Basically, each battle requires ten to more than twenty chapters. Can I make a request? The opposite of simplicity, simplification, shortening, and meticulousness is complexity, which can easily lead to visual fatigue and cause irritability and anxiety.

When I look at other people and then read the author's fan fiction, I feel that there is only one word in the other person's novel, "reckless". . Analyzing the first 300 chapters of the author's novel, the plot accounts for 50% and 30% of the protagonist's friendship. 20% Practice. In addition, the author describes the characters very well. I just read the author's novel. Your novel is a bit complicated and I have to read it again occasionally. Even with the author's explanation, I still don't quite understand the process. All in all, The author's novels are not the kind of mindless and refreshing novels that are cautious and emotional. It's a good fan fiction. Although this is currently the case. No more talking, I'm going to go read liver novels. Come on, author. 👍👍👍

Oh, what kind of fate, what fate, it's so damn uncomfortable, and the emotional intelligence is set so low that others can see it at a glance, yourself? It's really uncomfortable to watch. Don't write this all as a conspiracy. Although some children are a little more relaxed, it's still very depressing. And Hirohiko's brother, he said that he might be more awesome than Madara. It's too exaggerated, and it's not like Eternal Kaleidoscope. Why is the setting so awesome? I always feel that it will be very depressing after that, Kushina, the 4th generation or something will probably die, don't talk so much about fate, and the one who heard that he may be destroyed, what will he do? When I saw that, I knew that the protagonist was very naughty in the later stage, and everyone was probably dead. It was a bit boring, so I just let it go. Still watching the time, Xuena felt that there was a 70% chance that he would die again, but he was hanging on to his life. Otherwise, why would he want to destroy the world? When he saw it, his mentality exploded. It would be better to change the destruction of the world or there is this possibility. Jiraiya said that the possibility is certain, of course, as the protagonist, he will definitely not destroy the world, right? So the general trend cannot be changed, but the small trend can be changed. Anyway, we have to enter the plot in the end, otherwise would Naruto still be considered Naruto? Also, ambiguity is king. Your protagonist has such low emotional intelligence and lacks passion. When the protagonist saw Xue Nai before, he felt beautiful and thought the author would write it ambiguously, but what did I see? Oh my God! The protagonist is so pitiful and rejected. You must have watched soap operas in time travel. Hinata blushes because she likes the protagonist Naruto. After all, she knows the plot, so why can't the protagonist remember it at all? Isn't Yukina very similar to Hinata in this way? You can write shame into anger. I am also convinced. Once again, you are a naughty author. Write more ambiguous plots and more warm descriptions. The way you write about the destruction of the world is still a bit abrupt, okay? Without love, there is no hatred. Only when it is warm can you give it a serious blow. Also, don't write Xue Nai to death or write her to death so early. If you die, you can use the reincarnation eye to resurrect her. The writing is difficult and rugged. More warm memories. You wrote the protagonist in such a bad way, how can we readers be sad and moved to tears. Also, since you've written so many chapters and haven't reached the main plot yet, does that mean you'll be able to write ten thousand chapters by the time the book is finished? To be honest, there are so many fights and conspiracies that I am a bit tired of watching it. In the end, I hope the author will not make it too depressing. Depressed people will become even more depressed after reading this. I have written more than 700 words. Who can give a thumbs up?