
Slapping in the Face Starts with Dou Po
About This Novel
The time travel begins with Dou Po, crushing her all the way, showing off to no end, this girl is mine! The land is mine too! If you don't care about life and death, do it if you don't accept it! Ps: I heard that the novels of men with weak introductions are all good!
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Official(198)Scraped 22d ago
Your name is Slap in the Face, and it started from Fighting to Break the Sky, but where is the Slap in the Face? Ah? Where is it? You also said that a novel without a resume is good-looking. Ha, is this what you call good-looking? He kills people inexplicably, and he kneels down and licks the protagonist. And if you really say that, you are the protagonist of this book, really.
You are all saying that this book is not well written, and the author must read it.
First of all, let's analyze Doupo. Xiao Yan traveled through time and developed a lolita from a young age. After all, he was an otaku in his previous life, but it is undeniable that Xiao Yan is a genius (only talent, not skills). Although he is a prostitute, Xiao Yan is dedicated. He has only expressed love to Gu Xun'er, not even the queen. Besides, the author also wants to write well, but if he writes too badly, he will be criticized. After all, not every book will be popular. Finally, here is some advice: the protagonist can be bad, but don't kill. The protagonist can have a harem, but don't be a stallion. It's best for the protagonist to be able to judge calmly, but take action when it's time to take action.
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Brother is so kind! Brother, what is that? Brother, I want candy Brother, take me to kindergarten Brother, I made a friend today Brother, the teacher praised me today Brother, I left the candies given out in the kindergarten to my brother. Brother, I fell down while playing today. It hurts so much. Oooh. Brother, will I still go to elementary school with my kindergarten friends? Brother, look, does my new schoolbag look good? Brother, I learned a lot today Brother, let me recite poetry to you Brother, the boys in the class always bully me Brother, remember to pick me up after school Brother, take me out to play Brother, I want to eat too Brother, so cunning Brother, I am in second grade now. Brother, the breakfast you made for me is the most delicious. Brother, hurry up, you're going to be late Brother, teach me how to do my homework Brother, let's take a shower together Brother, your back is so wide Brother, you can't go there until I fall asleep Brother, let's play games together As for me, I like my brother the most. I want to marry him when I grow up. You idiot brother, don't touch my head. Brother, we have an extra English class Brother, the boys in the class bullied me again Brother, I ranked first in the class in physical education class. Brother, I got first place in the exam. Brother, will you reward me with a trip to the amusement park? Brother, I want to sit on that one Brother, I want to eat ice cream Brother, would you like to go play that? Woo hoo, brother is so bad, take me to the haunted house to play Brother, so tall Brother, I'm tired, carry me home Brother, what dinner did you cook today? Brother, tell me a story Brother, you can't go anywhere until I fall asleep Brother, the high school entrance examination is tomorrow Brother, I will definitely pass the exam and go to my old brother's school. Brother, congratulations! I passed the exam. Brother, I like you the most. Buy me new clothes. Brother, does it look good? Does it look good? Stupid brother! I can't even praise anyone, huh? Brother, there are many more courses in middle school. Brother, there are many students from other places in the school. Brother, I have made many new friends Brother, many people asked me for their contact information today. Brother, someone confessed their love to me at school today Brother, what's your expression like? Brother, I'm not going anywhere Brother, I'm going to a party next week. Brother, they always laugh at me and say that I can only talk about my brother and brother. Why can't we take a shower together? Brother: Brother, you...
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The author seems to be a newcomer at first glance. He doesn't know anything about hydrology or fragmentation. Moreover, he writes recklessly in many places. He forgot to foreshadow the previous work. Come on, as for licking the dog to reduce inflammation, please read it. I didn't really want to read it when I saw your comments. , But I still endured reading it. After all, there are people who mess up the rhythm of every book. Generally speaking, this book is okay and you can read it. I hope the author can take more opinions and everyone should support it. After all, it is not easy for the author. If it were easy, who wouldn't want to be a great master?
Cultivation to the ninth level of fighting spirit in one day.
Then you can keep growing and cultivating. Still showing off. In a world where strength is respected, the main goal is of course to improve strength.
Somewhat good. But there is a drawback.
The protagonist should not kill those heroines. Very unpleasant. And there is no female protagonist. Is the protagonist gay?
Xiao Xun'er
Many people like Xiao Xun'er, but I don't think there's anything good about her
Abandon the book decisively
Two of my favorites were killed. I couldn't stand it anymore and decided to give up the book.
A fight in the face? Sorry, I didn't see it. What's the point of not slapping Xiao Yan in the face? Licking the dog will lead to nothing.
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Official(198)Scraped 22d ago
Your name is Slap in the Face, and it started from Fighting to Break the Sky, but where is the Slap in the Face? Ah? Where is it? You also said that a novel without a resume is good-looking. Ha, is this what you call good-looking? He kills people inexplicably, and he kneels down and licks the protagonist. And if you really say that, you are the protagonist of this book, really.
You are all saying that this book is not well written, and the author must read it.
First of all, let's analyze Doupo. Xiao Yan traveled through time and developed a lolita from a young age. After all, he was an otaku in his previous life, but it is undeniable that Xiao Yan is a genius (only talent, not skills). Although he is a prostitute, Xiao Yan is dedicated. He has only expressed love to Gu Xun'er, not even the queen. Besides, the author also wants to write well, but if he writes too badly, he will be criticized. After all, not every book will be popular. Finally, here is some advice: the protagonist can be bad, but don't kill. The protagonist can have a harem, but don't be a stallion. It's best for the protagonist to be able to judge calmly, but take action when it's time to take action.
嘤嘤嘤
Brother is so kind! Brother, what is that? Brother, I want candy Brother, take me to kindergarten Brother, I made a friend today Brother, the teacher praised me today Brother, I left the candies given out in the kindergarten to my brother. Brother, I fell down while playing today. It hurts so much. Oooh. Brother, will I still go to elementary school with my kindergarten friends? Brother, look, does my new schoolbag look good? Brother, I learned a lot today Brother, let me recite poetry to you Brother, the boys in the class always bully me Brother, remember to pick me up after school Brother, take me out to play Brother, I want to eat too Brother, so cunning Brother, I am in second grade now. Brother, the breakfast you made for me is the most delicious. Brother, hurry up, you're going to be late Brother, teach me how to do my homework Brother, let's take a shower together Brother, your back is so wide Brother, you can't go there until I fall asleep Brother, let's play games together As for me, I like my brother the most. I want to marry him when I grow up. You idiot brother, don't touch my head. Brother, we have an extra English class Brother, the boys in the class bullied me again Brother, I ranked first in the class in physical education class. Brother, I got first place in the exam. Brother, will you reward me with a trip to the amusement park? Brother, I want to sit on that one Brother, I want to eat ice cream Brother, would you like to go play that? Woo hoo, brother is so bad, take me to the haunted house to play Brother, so tall Brother, I'm tired, carry me home Brother, what dinner did you cook today? Brother, tell me a story Brother, you can't go anywhere until I fall asleep Brother, the high school entrance examination is tomorrow Brother, I will definitely pass the exam and go to my old brother's school. Brother, congratulations! I passed the exam. Brother, I like you the most. Buy me new clothes. Brother, does it look good? Does it look good? Stupid brother! I can't even praise anyone, huh? Brother, there are many more courses in middle school. Brother, there are many students from other places in the school. Brother, I have made many new friends Brother, many people asked me for their contact information today. Brother, someone confessed their love to me at school today Brother, what's your expression like? Brother, I'm not going anywhere Brother, I'm going to a party next week. Brother, they always laugh at me and say that I can only talk about my brother and brother. Why can't we take a shower together? Brother: Brother, you...
Just give it a try
The author seems to be a newcomer at first glance. He doesn't know anything about hydrology or fragmentation. Moreover, he writes recklessly in many places. He forgot to foreshadow the previous work. Come on, as for licking the dog to reduce inflammation, please read it. I didn't really want to read it when I saw your comments. , But I still endured reading it. After all, there are people who mess up the rhythm of every book. Generally speaking, this book is okay and you can read it. I hope the author can take more opinions and everyone should support it. After all, it is not easy for the author. If it were easy, who wouldn't want to be a great master?
Cultivation to the ninth level of fighting spirit in one day.
Then you can keep growing and cultivating. Still showing off. In a world where strength is respected, the main goal is of course to improve strength.
Somewhat good. But there is a drawback.
The protagonist should not kill those heroines. Very unpleasant. And there is no female protagonist. Is the protagonist gay?
Xiao Xun'er
Many people like Xiao Xun'er, but I don't think there's anything good about her
Abandon the book decisively
Two of my favorites were killed. I couldn't stand it anymore and decided to give up the book.
A fight in the face? Sorry, I didn't see it. What's the point of not slapping Xiao Yan in the face? Licking the dog will lead to nothing.












