
Yun Yin Jingtian
About This Novel
A young man from Dongzhou entered Taoism by fate. He believed that all things in the world have spirits, and that all immortals and ordinary people are equal. However, the immortal way is also evil. He practiced the Tao devoutly all the way, experienced hardships and hardships, and almost died many times! However, despite all the difficulties in heaven, there is still a glimmer of hope. He has experienced love, hate, and hatred in the human world, and he also fights with all races in the spiritual world. Along the way, he insisted that his heart was not fettered by external things, and finally set foot in the immortal world to achieve the position of immortal. [The book club group has been opened, group number: 927131982, all book friends, please join the group and give more suggestions on this book!
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After reading more than twenty chapters, I feel that I can only watch it. The protagonist in Qi Training 4 has no magic weapon and can actually kill a seriously injured monster in the Qi Training Consummation or even the Foundation Establishment Stage. It feels unrealistic. Later, in Breakthrough Qi Training 5, the spiritual energy in the monster's cave is not much absorbed. How did that monster cultivate there before? Also, the spiritual energy in the protagonist's body dropped by two levels after being sucked by the magic weapon. Is this realm made of paper? There are also some errors in the sentences.
Your exclamation mark really makes my head hurt when I see it. It's the kind that persuades you to quit. To give you a few examples, this river flows through such and such a place. This river is called Yulong River! Yulong River rarely floods! The book looks a little worn out from being read for a long time! I really didn't understand. It's obviously a declarative sentence, why do you have to add an exclamation mark? Isn't it awkward?
Yun Yin Jingtian
Just two reviews for this book? Was my previous comment deleted?
Everyone is equal, you should practice Buddhism!
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Official(4)Scraped 4d ago
feel
After reading more than twenty chapters, I feel that I can only watch it. The protagonist in Qi Training 4 has no magic weapon and can actually kill a seriously injured monster in the Qi Training Consummation or even the Foundation Establishment Stage. It feels unrealistic. Later, in Breakthrough Qi Training 5, the spiritual energy in the monster's cave is not much absorbed. How did that monster cultivate there before? Also, the spiritual energy in the protagonist's body dropped by two levels after being sucked by the magic weapon. Is this realm made of paper? There are also some errors in the sentences.
Your exclamation mark really makes my head hurt when I see it. It's the kind that persuades you to quit. To give you a few examples, this river flows through such and such a place. This river is called Yulong River! Yulong River rarely floods! The book looks a little worn out from being read for a long time! I really didn't understand. It's obviously a declarative sentence, why do you have to add an exclamation mark? Isn't it awkward?
Yun Yin Jingtian
Just two reviews for this book? Was my previous comment deleted?
Everyone is equal, you should practice Buddhism!









