Sword Lin of Douluo Continent
by The Wind Moves And The Clouds Move
About This Novel
If heaven had not given birth to my sword Haolin, my swordsmanship would be as long as the night! This is a story about traveling through the world. The first world is Douluo Continent! See how the protagonist recreates the power of swordsmanship on Douluo Continent!
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Official(139)Scraped 11d ago
Is the protagonist a silly person? Licking a dog? The licking was too obvious. Surrounded by a main character, a stupid heroine spins around like a dog.
Although I like the plot very much, it has some flaws. Destroy the scenery
The scumbag retreats! ! ! Just Hu Liena is not worthy of the protagonist at all, okay? No matter how you say it, Ning Rongrong has passed the top seven exams and become a god.
The male protagonist is such a scumbag and decisively abandons the story
I'm sorry because I can't accept a half-hearted male protagonist.
Co-authoring is a copy of Douluo's original text, with an extra protagonist in the middle. This writing is really convenient.
It's really poisonous. I read your book and read the original work again. It's really good. For example, when you introduce the details of the spirit fight, everyone has read the original work. I just copied the original text.
The biggest poisonous point
Compared with Douluo and Primordial Wilderness. Author, do you know how big Primordial Wilderness is? It takes tens of millions of years for a saint to travel to Primordial Wilderness. There are many forbidden places that cannot be visited by a Nascent Soul. Only Douluo Continent is level 40. What do you think? If this is the case, don't write such a big framework. It will be fine if you write in a small and stable manner. I pirated the Holy Examination Book. The saint's body is broken. Please save me, fellow Taoists.
Author's words:
I wrote this book a long time ago, and I never thought about signing a contract or anything! I just wanted to publish it for everyone to take a look at. I am currently working on a new book. I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused to everyone!
The protagonist knew the plot earlier, but why didn't he know it later?
Really, you see for yourselves, the protagonist knows the plot in the front, but doesn't know anything in the back. He doesn't know when Xiao Wu is captured, and then goes to Tiandou. It's impossible that the protagonist doesn't know that he will meet Lonely Bo (it's already been told in the first 20 chapters, so those who know the plot)
Tang San's Tang, Xiao Wu's Wu, and Jian Haolin's Lin constitute Tang Wulin.
Tang San's Tang, Xiao Wu's Wu, and Jian Haolin's Lin constitute Tang Wulin.
I don't like Ning Rongrong, she looks like a young lady. Although she changed later, I still don't like her very much.
Scumbag
Scumbag scumbag Scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag
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Official(139)Scraped 11d ago
Is the protagonist a silly person? Licking a dog? The licking was too obvious. Surrounded by a main character, a stupid heroine spins around like a dog.
Although I like the plot very much, it has some flaws. Destroy the scenery
The scumbag retreats! ! ! Just Hu Liena is not worthy of the protagonist at all, okay? No matter how you say it, Ning Rongrong has passed the top seven exams and become a god.
The male protagonist is such a scumbag and decisively abandons the story
I'm sorry because I can't accept a half-hearted male protagonist.
Co-authoring is a copy of Douluo's original text, with an extra protagonist in the middle. This writing is really convenient.
It's really poisonous. I read your book and read the original work again. It's really good. For example, when you introduce the details of the spirit fight, everyone has read the original work. I just copied the original text.
The biggest poisonous point
Compared with Douluo and Primordial Wilderness. Author, do you know how big Primordial Wilderness is? It takes tens of millions of years for a saint to travel to Primordial Wilderness. There are many forbidden places that cannot be visited by a Nascent Soul. Only Douluo Continent is level 40. What do you think? If this is the case, don't write such a big framework. It will be fine if you write in a small and stable manner. I pirated the Holy Examination Book. The saint's body is broken. Please save me, fellow Taoists.
Author's words:
I wrote this book a long time ago, and I never thought about signing a contract or anything! I just wanted to publish it for everyone to take a look at. I am currently working on a new book. I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused to everyone!
The protagonist knew the plot earlier, but why didn't he know it later?
Really, you see for yourselves, the protagonist knows the plot in the front, but doesn't know anything in the back. He doesn't know when Xiao Wu is captured, and then goes to Tiandou. It's impossible that the protagonist doesn't know that he will meet Lonely Bo (it's already been told in the first 20 chapters, so those who know the plot)
Tang San's Tang, Xiao Wu's Wu, and Jian Haolin's Lin constitute Tang Wulin.
Tang San's Tang, Xiao Wu's Wu, and Jian Haolin's Lin constitute Tang Wulin.
I don't like Ning Rongrong, she looks like a young lady. Although she changed later, I still don't like her very much.
Scumbag
Scumbag scumbag Scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag, scumbag
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