Travel Through the Game World of Japan's Warring States Period
About This Novel
A company manager in Japan had no choice but to stay in Japan due to the epidemic. He had nothing to do but play the Japanese Sengoku game to pass the time. As a result, he played all night and fell asleep. When he woke up, he found that he had traveled through time in this Sengoku game and became the protagonist of the game he chose, Satake Yishige...
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Official(11)Scraped 4d ago
Writing skills need to be improved
When I should write in detail, I write very quickly. When I shouldn't write in detail, like the part about doing business, why write it in such detail? What we want to see is when the protagonist can dominate the world. I wrote at least more than a hundred chapters about doing business.
Can you stop drinking water?
You don't need to write about those game settings and strategies. These things make the novel look watery. It's better to just write about the real things. It's best not to write about these things that you don't want to worry about. It's unnecessary. Moreover, when reading this kind of novel, the main point of reading this kind of novel is to kill enemies on the battlefield in the same area as the protagonist. The greater the reputation of the protagonist.
The author is probably a novice. He has read several chapters and has not seen the official beginning of the plot. The whole chapter is laying out the plot, which makes people very impatient. It feels like eating a sponge and it is full of water. Please make it clear that readers are here to read the story, not your collection of settings. There is no continuity or connection. What are you writing about?
Is there any explanation for the sudden disappearance?
Was it because I was too busy a year ago, or because I have cultivated myself, or simply stopped writing and took a break.
The sea, you are all water
The first seven chapters talk about the history of game development. Chapters 8 to 10 are about game settings! In a word, the sea, you are all water!
I asked if I would accept Ashi, Ningning, and Maeda Matsu. It would be great to marry Ashi and give him two dowries, but he wouldn't give me a daughter, right? Ashi Thirteen has one year left to marry.
The author went to the palace to sleep with the Queen Mother (ఠൠఠ)ﾉ
Why didn't it update suddenly?
What's going on? Why did you suddenly stop updating? Was it because you were sick or just didn't want to write anymore?
What's going on? Is this a eunuch? ! ?
The writing is good and the story is good, but what's going on now? What was agreed upon?
The pace is too slow
Yes, but the pace is too slow. 550,000 Words have passed and Hitachi has not yet been unified... So how long will it take you to defeat Mutsu with 1.7 Million koku, and how long will it take to add Deyu and Shimono to Hokkaido...
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Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 4d ago
Writing skills need to be improved
When I should write in detail, I write very quickly. When I shouldn't write in detail, like the part about doing business, why write it in such detail? What we want to see is when the protagonist can dominate the world. I wrote at least more than a hundred chapters about doing business.
Can you stop drinking water?
You don't need to write about those game settings and strategies. These things make the novel look watery. It's better to just write about the real things. It's best not to write about these things that you don't want to worry about. It's unnecessary. Moreover, when reading this kind of novel, the main point of reading this kind of novel is to kill enemies on the battlefield in the same area as the protagonist. The greater the reputation of the protagonist.
The author is probably a novice. He has read several chapters and has not seen the official beginning of the plot. The whole chapter is laying out the plot, which makes people very impatient. It feels like eating a sponge and it is full of water. Please make it clear that readers are here to read the story, not your collection of settings. There is no continuity or connection. What are you writing about?
Is there any explanation for the sudden disappearance?
Was it because I was too busy a year ago, or because I have cultivated myself, or simply stopped writing and took a break.
The sea, you are all water
The first seven chapters talk about the history of game development. Chapters 8 to 10 are about game settings! In a word, the sea, you are all water!
I asked if I would accept Ashi, Ningning, and Maeda Matsu. It would be great to marry Ashi and give him two dowries, but he wouldn't give me a daughter, right? Ashi Thirteen has one year left to marry.
The author went to the palace to sleep with the Queen Mother (ఠൠఠ)ﾉ
Why didn't it update suddenly?
What's going on? Why did you suddenly stop updating? Was it because you were sick or just didn't want to write anymore?
What's going on? Is this a eunuch? ! ?
The writing is good and the story is good, but what's going on now? What was agreed upon?
The pace is too slow
Yes, but the pace is too slow. 550,000 Words have passed and Hitachi has not yet been unified... So how long will it take you to defeat Mutsu with 1.7 Million koku, and how long will it take to add Deyu and Shimono to Hokkaido...
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