Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Beast Control in the Desert
About This Novel
In order to save people, he unfortunately passed away, but he didn't want to travel through time because of it, and became a child of the Chiyansi family of the Foundation-building Immortal Clan, and has since embarked on the path of cultivation. This is a story about growing up under the protection of a family and then giving back to the family.
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Official(18)Scraped 6d ago
Several Qi practitioners surround two foundation-building monsters to fight. What kind of brain are you writing about? Your ancestor has only built a foundation and can kill the foundation-building ancestor with just a few Qi exercises. Or is it true that you are surrounded and surrounded? Why don't you kill the hostile foundation-building ancestor if you are so capable?
Are you ready to share Goldfinger too? Dashan, please prepare the next book.
The protagonist can have his inner demons for an unfamiliar person~ This way he can become a fairy, and he can kidnap anyone when he visits the market.
After reading around Chapter 100, I saw Pigfoot taking out his biggest golden finger and sharing it. Doesn't it feel good about the world of cultivating immortals?
The protagonist is now working as a dog for the Miaoyin Sect. Not only does he use dream simulation for people in his sect for free, but does he not need to pay for it? He also revealed all the information about the spirit body to them. It feels like the protagonist will lick the female cultivator of the Miaoyin Sect from the perspective of a dog licking later.
Licking the dog until there is nothing left.
This kind of licking dog can easily be killed by Miaoying people.
Decrease wisdom
What does it have to do with the desert? ! ! ! ! This software is also rubbish
The protagonist shares everything, as long as others make an oath of heaven. If this continues, he will be discovered soon. At that time, there will only be two choices, either to be a tool of the big forces, or to die. How should you continue writing like this?
The most annoying thing is that the male protagonist has a clan brother with better qualifications than him, and then all the resources are given to the clan brother and the male protagonist doesn't care. In other words, you are the protagonist, otherwise it will be a blockage.
The first two to three hundred chapters are quite well written, but the plot in the following chapters is bland and has no highlights at all. The family monks and the sect are too deeply involved.
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Community(0)
Official(18)Scraped 6d ago
Several Qi practitioners surround two foundation-building monsters to fight. What kind of brain are you writing about? Your ancestor has only built a foundation and can kill the foundation-building ancestor with just a few Qi exercises. Or is it true that you are surrounded and surrounded? Why don't you kill the hostile foundation-building ancestor if you are so capable?
Are you ready to share Goldfinger too? Dashan, please prepare the next book.
The protagonist can have his inner demons for an unfamiliar person~ This way he can become a fairy, and he can kidnap anyone when he visits the market.
After reading around Chapter 100, I saw Pigfoot taking out his biggest golden finger and sharing it. Doesn't it feel good about the world of cultivating immortals?
The protagonist is now working as a dog for the Miaoyin Sect. Not only does he use dream simulation for people in his sect for free, but does he not need to pay for it? He also revealed all the information about the spirit body to them. It feels like the protagonist will lick the female cultivator of the Miaoyin Sect from the perspective of a dog licking later.
Licking the dog until there is nothing left.
This kind of licking dog can easily be killed by Miaoying people.
Decrease wisdom
What does it have to do with the desert? ! ! ! ! This software is also rubbish
The protagonist shares everything, as long as others make an oath of heaven. If this continues, he will be discovered soon. At that time, there will only be two choices, either to be a tool of the big forces, or to die. How should you continue writing like this?
The most annoying thing is that the male protagonist has a clan brother with better qualifications than him, and then all the resources are given to the clan brother and the male protagonist doesn't care. In other words, you are the protagonist, otherwise it will be a blockage.
The first two to three hundred chapters are quite well written, but the plot in the following chapters is bland and has no highlights at all. The family monks and the sect are too deeply involved.
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