
Dharma God System
About This Novel
Lin Bai was reborn in the Age of Ending Law with the God of Magic System, vowing to make the entire Starry Sky Continent recall the fear of being dominated by ancient magic!
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Official(17)Scraped 1d ago
Come on. .
Your novel makes me feel awkward and boring
In fact, when I first started reading your novel, I wanted to give you a thumbs up~~ But after seeing your real-life article, it changed a bit. It was very boring to read. It's just a pig's foot pretense, but what I saw is that all the characters in the article are pretentious. What is the situation? It seems that all the characters are stamped with the same seal and have the same personality. It's just that the characters are different, so based on your idea, if this novel develops, it feels like no one will read it except the three or two big cats and kittens that suit my taste. It's just too boring. Everyone has their own personality and temperament, they can't all be pig's feet!
The protagonist is a fool
Being betrayed again and again, I still can't see through people's hearts
The concept is okay, and you can see from some of the details that the author is still very careful. You shouldn't give up lightly, you can still make some changes!
The story is often felt in place
On the bookshelf that month
Woo woo woo woo
The protagonist is so miserable, I feel sad~
I want to say that if you think the author's writing is not good, you don't have to read it. If you have nothing to do and you can't find anything to do, you can belittle the author. If you are asked to write, can you write it?
Highly recommended
The update is a bit slow. I hope the author will work harder to update it. I also hope to write more battle scenes for the protagonist. I won't be stingy with the recommendation votes. . .
It's too complicated to write. It would be a good book if it were simpler.
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Official(17)Scraped 1d ago
Come on. .
Your novel makes me feel awkward and boring
In fact, when I first started reading your novel, I wanted to give you a thumbs up~~ But after seeing your real-life article, it changed a bit. It was very boring to read. It's just a pig's foot pretense, but what I saw is that all the characters in the article are pretentious. What is the situation? It seems that all the characters are stamped with the same seal and have the same personality. It's just that the characters are different, so based on your idea, if this novel develops, it feels like no one will read it except the three or two big cats and kittens that suit my taste. It's just too boring. Everyone has their own personality and temperament, they can't all be pig's feet!
The protagonist is a fool
Being betrayed again and again, I still can't see through people's hearts
The concept is okay, and you can see from some of the details that the author is still very careful. You shouldn't give up lightly, you can still make some changes!
The story is often felt in place
On the bookshelf that month
Woo woo woo woo
The protagonist is so miserable, I feel sad~
I want to say that if you think the author's writing is not good, you don't have to read it. If you have nothing to do and you can't find anything to do, you can belittle the author. If you are asked to write, can you write it?
Highly recommended
The update is a bit slow. I hope the author will work harder to update it. I also hope to write more battle scenes for the protagonist. I won't be stingy with the recommendation votes. . .
It's too complicated to write. It would be a good book if it were simpler.









