Journey of the Magic Knight from Another World

The following are all my personal opinions. Don't criticize me, and don't say that you have the ability to write it yourself. After all, everyone has their own opinions. I feel that the author's current protagonist has no ambition, and the golden finger is of little use. How to say it? If you can't do it with words, you can't do it with force. The protagonist is not very strong, but the golden finger is not very useful. So I think the author should learn how to write Panlong, or just look at natural disasters. Both books are very good, so the author can learn from them. Don't spray if you don't like it! ! !

I'll give it a read tonight, otherwise I'll update it again. It would be nice to see some recommendation votes or book reviews.

I really like some of the settings in your book. But we hope to improve the details. We don't pursue clever writing, but many dialogues and characters that have nothing to do with the storyline should be left out as much as possible. What a great author! It's almost 50 chapters. Lin Tian hasn't left Novice Village yet? There is also a protagonist named Lin Tian, ​​and then there is also a protagonist named Wu Hao? These names are more oriental, but there are names like Merry and Green in the book, which feels a bit contradictory. You want to write it by combining Chinese and Western elements. From my perspective, the storyline seems to be roughly along the Western route, and magic is a thing of the Western world. So I still hope that the author will unswervingly follow the Western route. , It is recommended to think carefully about the names inside. Well, one more thing, I hope the author will give the protagonist two companions, remember that! If you want to have a distinct personality, you can write him as a cold-blooded killer, or a romantic young man, or a simple and honest big guy is also good. Just don't write it as the protagonist again. Too perfect to be true. Not easy to impress. The settings of Meili and Wu Hao are both pretty good, and they are the highlights of the article. The conversation between the protagonist and Wu Hao is also interesting, not as awkward as his conversation with Uncle Green. If the village and Green and the protagonist's mother have little effect. Please let them get their lunch boxes and stop dragging their feet!

This is my first time reading a magic novel, and I think this one is super good!

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It's very stylish and not rigid. It's a very interesting book.

Well written in big letters! I simply can't get enough, so I'll add more and more!

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The author is tired, so I will update temporarily today and tomorrow, take a rest, and resume later.

Okay thank you everyone ok thank you everyone