The Sword of the Swordsman of the Heavens

You can give up since you came down from the mountain at the age of fifteen, and you have been suppressing the protagonist's combat power. He was so awesome and powerful in front of you, and he gave Lao Yue Chuang so many swordsmanship. He has learned Linghu Chong's Dugu Nine Swords for several years and has never won against him. Later, when facing ten underworld masters, he stretched his hips like that, and had to rely on a temporary explosion to kill them with a fused sword. After using up all the internal power of the sword, he could only wait for death. You must know that in the original Linghu Chong Yuye, when he singled out a bunch of blind men with one move, he had no internal strength and he had just learned the Dugu Nine Swords. Later, he exchanged the evil-proofing sword manual for some bullshit magical skill from Yu Canghai, and then gave Yu Canghai a month to practice it. After studying the magic skill for a month, he concluded that it was not very good and did not plan to learn it. Then he went to fight with Yu Canghai and was almost beaten to death. There are a lot of stupid plots like this.

The protagonist is a group of hypocrites who care about eating rather than fighting. They all have enemies and want to eliminate evil, but they also want to save face. This is not the first time, because this one almost overturned, but they still like to have fun.

The writing in the back is too rubbish, the protagonist is too unqualified, and the author treats other people as fools. It's just a cracking trick in a back cave, will you go crazy after reading it? A little more mature. Anyone with some experience can stabilize their mind. I don't believe that in the martial arts, no one studies the shortcomings of their own moves and will naturally find ways to make up for them. This is as funny as facing a tiger and I can use a sliding shovel to defeat him😑

Later, it started to become a transformation story. The two-stage, three-stage and four-stage transformation of the Condor always gave me a sense of familiarity with Dragon Ball. Like Sun Wukong, warm up with others first. If you can't beat him, then you can transform into one level. If you can't beat him, you can transform into two levels, three levels, and four levels. I have a saying about MMP that I don't know if I should say it right or not!

It has been said that the Wushuang Wudui Ning style sword is self-made, how could it be broken by others? The time is wrong. Moreover, in the original work, Yue Buqun didn't behave like this, it was rubbish,🌿

The previously good plot of "Going to Jinpan to Wash Hands" suddenly became stupid. That Ren Yingying keeps sending people to test you, even the *** dare not kill people? Just let people keep testing? Are you her dog? So damn poisonous

First: The author made Feng Qingyang too powerful. Feng Qingyang could only be at the level of Ren Wo Xing, but he might not be as good. In the narration in the original work, when Linghu's Dugu Nine Swords had reached a level that even Feng Qingyang could not touch, his combat power was probably equal to Ren Wo Xing's. Many people think it is Dugu Jiujianqiang, but it is actually Linghu Chongqiang. Second: Yue Buqun alone fought against more than a dozen underworld masters, which was already on the same level as Fang Zheng Chongxu. Third: The evil-fighting swordsmanship is very strong, but it will definitely not be stronger than the Hua swordsmanship in the state described by the protagonist, that is, when he beat Yu Canghai. Fourth: He kept suppressing the protagonist's combat power. It was clearly described as a thief who had practiced the Huashan swordsmanship to an unprecedented level, and he also kept strengthening the protagonist's combat power. As a result, his combat power collapsed. Jin Yong's novels must be just a world of low-level martial arts. Yang Guo becomes invincible in the world with a single palm move with artistic conception. The transformation of heaven and man in the East is probably in this state. The protagonist should have reached this level by practicing Huashan swordsmanship to achieve the so-called artistic conception.

More than 70% of the articles in each chapter are introducing past events, tmd has been introducing and writing a piece of cake

He is a big fan of Fa Luo. He created sword skills and mental skills when he was only a few years old. This is not a matter of age but lack of knowledge. Huang Shang, if you give him a Taoist book, he will not be able to create the Nine Yin Manual. It does not mean that he cannot create his own skills. Like Yang Guo, he knows many skills.

What are you writing about? The logic makes no sense. I started practicing dancing at the age of three, and started showing off at the age of eight. What happened to Huashan Eight? Cats are not like cats and dogs, so how can they succeed in ranking first with Zixia? What the hell? The whole time I was having an inner monologue introducing the fool.