I Stiffened Accidentally

Hello, I have read all of your books, and they are all very good. The one by Mr. Yin Yang is, as they say, the pinnacle. But now I feel that this book is not very good. So far, I feel that this book contains elements similar to the time-travel system and detective reasoning, etc., But it just feels too complicated. This book is not what I expected when I first read your follow-up. I have no idea of ​​reading this book so far. I hope Brother Jiu will work hard! ! !

Extra (21) Xiao Junzi Li Changan's strength was far beyond Lin Fan's expectations. Li Changan's magic power collided with Lin Fan's Donghuang Bell, causing ripples. Many monks standing nearby were injured by the aftermath. Everyone couldn't help but marvel at the saint's powerful magic power. At this time, many people recognized that one of them was the peerless prince of Yan State. "It is said that the Unparalleled Prince is very strategic, but I didn't expect him to be so powerful." Many people sighed at this time. Although they are from Qi State, they have also heard many legends from Yan State. And Lin Fan is definitely a legend. But at this moment, Lin Fan had been knocked several meters away by Li Changan. Waves of sword energy and mana surrounded them. "Li Changan, are you crazy?" Lin Fan shouted. "Don't stop me, I'm going to kill them all." Li Changan yelled. "As long as I'm here, don't even think about it." Lin Fan stopped Li Changan. Li Changan's whole body was filled with murderous intent. It makes him look like an ancient demon. "Okay, it's time to get serious." Li Changan said. "Come on!" Lin Fan said. Lin Fan sacrificed his Immortal Killing Sword

Along the way, I have read all of Jiu Ge's books. The writing style has improved from supernatural to non-supernatural to now supernatural. Let's not mention the content for the moment, but the richness and details of the story really make me feel more interesting the more I read it. In fact, the constant changes in content and style are not only the constant changes in writing restrictions and the requirements of the website where I am located, but also a bold attempt by Jiu Ge to satisfy different readers and improve his own literary level. As the worldview of this story becomes more and more rich and full, the author's ability to perfect the story also increases. Among the Thirty-Six Heavens, there are several heavens that can be discovered in each book. So I am very curious about what the story will be after the Thirty-Six Heavens are finally completed... Maybe another author will have to change the story at that time 2333333

Is it too hasty for the general to order this talisman? I have read all your books. I am a fan of your books, but since the beginning of Ghost Art, I have felt that your writing has become worse and worse. Various settings are a bit sloppy, and this book is a bit difficult to follow. It's not like the attraction before the last Mr. Yin Yang. And the foreigner's name. . Oh my God, it makes me dance just looking at it

I don't know what to say, so let's recite a section of the Sword Control Technique: The sword is made of ordinary iron. It communicates with spirits by holding it, moves by the heart, lives by blood, and dies by non-thoughts. The art of sword control lies in regulating the breath, holding the Yuan and maintaining oneness, so that the sword and the five spirits become one, and the cycle goes back and forth, endlessly.

I started reading Mr. Yin-Yang. Mr. Yin-Yang had not been finished at that time. I thought it was very interesting and liked the characters in it. Later, I followed the last Mr. Yin-Yang, "Hundred Ghosts Night Parade", which I thought was very interesting. Then "Onmyoji", this book is really the pinnacle, although there are many pitfalls, it is also very good. Then "Urban Onmyoji", this book felt too watery, the articles, the characters in the book have no brains, how can they deceive the readers? But I still reluctantly read the second half. After all, all the previous characters were in it, and then came this new book. It really disgusted me. The messy names and fancy plots. After so many years of writing, the writing is getting worse? It's a sloppy article, it's slow to update, and the extras in the public account actually ask for money? Are you too poor to eat? I really laughed at the fact that you spent money on a welfare article. You really disgusted me. From a loyal old reader to a person who feels disgusted even thinking about you, you should reflect on it.

Now I basically update once or twice a day. There are rarely three updates. There was no mention of making up for it. And there's so much waste. Everywhere you go. A few hundred words can be said about local architecture. Here are two more local stories and legends. One chapter is gone. Summary: The more you write, the more you write.

The ending of the last book was inexplicable, and this one was delayed in various ways. Think about it, how many chapters are you owed? At first, I said I would make up for it next time, but now I no longer believe it. I update it once or twice a day, and occasionally intermittently. Brother, you do this full-time. If you can't write every day, don't do this. There is also an extra story. I thought it was a benefit for book friends to fill in the trap, but it turned out to be a mess again, and then one chapter was actually ten times more expensive than the original? (Ten book coins for one chapter in QQ Reading are just ten cents) If you don't have money, just find a class. Stop writing when you have exhausted your talents.

Demons, ghosts, and zombies. The abandoned factory is a big bug in this book (there is a corpse king and a big demon in it). The female protagonist has not yet appeared, but I think it should be the female ghost next to the male protagonist (the attribute is deducted). Recommended~

The author writes the protagonist as if he is an idiot. His family owes 180,000 yuan and he is still poor. He can sell songs for money but still pretends not to buy them. He writes it like a loser.