My Magic Era

It feels like I had someone ghostwrite me from the beginning of the second chapter, and the standard dropped a lot, and the male protagonist's IQ directly became a negative number. Every time a woman appears, she has to be raped. There are more and more women around her. Even the heroine's maids have to arrange an affair, and all the female characters are arranged to have a secret crush on the hero. It's still the simplest harem manga routine, save one and fall in love with him the other. Moreover, the male protagonist's IQ is really low. He has almost no secrets and tells everyone else. I have to sigh that all the good people in the other world are good. Moreover, the male protagonist was forced to add a scene, including a section to save Su. The male protagonist followed Anne all the way, and then secretly tied the ropes of the two priests tighter. It felt that the male protagonist was extremely intelligent, and Anne was stupid and could not tie people up. When you see a woman in the room, tell her everything and ask someone to help her. You can confirm her identity a little bit, just in case she is a prostitute. Or should I say that all beautiful women are good people. The male protagonist's fights are full of dangers and are indeed exciting. But why are you surrounded by dangers every time? You go up confidently, and then you find that you are no match. You are surrounded by dangers, eternal routines, and eternal embarrassment. The first volume is really good, but the rest is really embarrassing.

As expected of a master, his wonderful pen brings forth flowers, his pen brings forth flowers, and his pen brings forth brilliance. It is completed in one go, every word is precious, and every word is precious. It is truly a masterpiece. Only this book and (Exorcist Ghost Master) can read it. I read it heartily and vividly. It must be praised with five stars. [Emot=default,01/]

Are there any book friends who have read for 10,000+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations

Are there any book friends who have read for 8500+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations

The nonsense in it just to make up the words is really unbearable. You are not writing a script. You have to describe everything. You can describe a trivial matter in a long time, and you can describe a scene in two pages. I think you worked hard to write it, but I think it is just a bunch of nonsense and words. No wonder no one likes the book you wrote. You describe a supporting character from the beginning, and you are still describing her when I can't see it anymore. How much do you like to describe a person's appearance and expression? You even described the protagonist's bedroom countless times. Do you really think that what you are writing is a script? You are just writing a novel. You don't need to describe the scene again and again, nor the expression of the supporting character again and again. You like to describe the feeling of the expression. It feels so outrageous that even every pore has to be put under a microscope. I read books so that I can imagine the plot of the story while reading. It does not make me feel the same as watching TV. When you write a novel that is the same as a script, there will be nothing to watch. This is my personal opinion.

The author's description is very detailed, which is both a shortcoming and an advantage. Sometimes details are bright spots, but all the details are just water. It's 80 chapters, just the people in the caravan. The pace is ridiculously slow. The protagonist is still 7 years old. It's almost 100 chapters. The protagonist is still doing a branch line in Novice Village. For an adult who time travels to a 7-year-old protagonist, it's okay to behave childishly on the surface. The psychological activities are too childish. Overall, the impression is not good. I haven't read it yet.

When I read it for the first time, I thought it was okay. The author wrote it very carefully. Then as I read on, I felt something was wrong. How could I write several chapters about a trivial matter? It would be better to include whether the flowers were dewy or whether the flowers were broken. I don't know if it's because the author's skills are limited or because the code is easy to make money. I feel like the author has to write a volume for what others write at the end of 1-2 hundred chapters. Except for the first 100 or so pictures, I read them very carefully. From then on, I just had to read the plot at a glance. It was too long-winded. Today is the third day of reading. I no longer want to read it. If I keep writing like this, hundreds of millions of words and tens of millions of chapters won't be a problem. I think the author should give full play to his own characteristics and keep up his efforts. Your characteristic is that you write carefully, then carry forward this characteristic and write in detail. As fine as you want. The characters' dialogues, frowns, facial expressions, what they had for breakfast, and what they were thinking about while walking were all written carefully. This can save a few million words. Make money properly

The brother of the Seventh Brother, a close confidant of the Great Chief of the Beast Tribe, was brutally beaten in his own city, and no one came to take care of it? The leader of an adventure group really dared to block the door of the Orc chief at the Orc base camp. Only Kurtz and Mr. Kulu were the only two people in the city who came to rescue him. After rescuing him, he was left alone and could even be kidnapped without anyone looking for him. The leader of an adventure group can even sneak attack me in my base camp. I wonder how the orcs haven't been wiped out yet with their little fighting power. The death of Sister Guo and Brother Qiang was outrageous, and there was no foreshadowing for the sudden appearance of the magician at the end. Don't just say that the protagonist felt someone was staring at him, and that he would have been stared at earlier and would not have taken action? I had to forcefully write the two people to death and run away in a sensational way to change the scene. It was written in such detail before. I was still wondering why the rating was so low because it was so well written. Now I understand.

It's just that the ending was rushed and the pace of the whole book was too slow.

I can't stand it anymore. I've read more than 300 chapters written by Xin Liugu and it's really poisoning me.