
My Magic Industry
About This Novel
What is industry? What is the magic industry? The symbol of the first industrial revolution was the steam engine. I thought it would be fine if I built the whole magic engine first. Charlene Carr thinks so
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Official(4)Scraped 6d ago
Your novel is good at everything, and the protagonist is all-powerful, but it's just this strength that's a poisonous point. If you're assassinated, you'll be dead. If you're kidnapped, you'll be kidnapped. If your plot hadn't been too slow, the eldest prince would have kidnapped and assassinated you, so there are more than 100 of them. Let's improve your strength! Without strength, nothing can be done. Please note that this is an extraordinary world.
Why does it feel like everything the protagonist does is making wedding clothes for others?
What is the protagonist going to do?
The author didn't write the main plot well. Is the protagonist's goal a king or something?
Has the protagonist been a soldier? So versatile
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Official(4)Scraped 6d ago
Your novel is good at everything, and the protagonist is all-powerful, but it's just this strength that's a poisonous point. If you're assassinated, you'll be dead. If you're kidnapped, you'll be kidnapped. If your plot hadn't been too slow, the eldest prince would have kidnapped and assassinated you, so there are more than 100 of them. Let's improve your strength! Without strength, nothing can be done. Please note that this is an extraordinary world.
Why does it feel like everything the protagonist does is making wedding clothes for others?
What is the protagonist going to do?
The author didn't write the main plot well. Is the protagonist's goal a king or something?
Has the protagonist been a soldier? So versatile












