The Secret of the Mage

The name in the first chapter is Wilson Merlin, a typical Western name, but his sister is called Mei Xue, a half-sister. According to the most basic Western names, shouldn't Merlin be the surname? The male protagonist's name should be Wilson, right? His maid should also be called Master Wilson, right?

I would like to ask the author if you also regard the people around you as tools? Is your wife just the object of your sexual desire? Are you so indifferent to your family? After reading novels for more than ten years, no matter what type of novel the protagonist is, he always has feelings. The feelings I am talking about include family affection, love, and friendship! But the main character of this book really left me speechless. I haven't finished this book and have given up. I will check to see if your other books are like this. If so, the comments will not be so reserved and I will just start criticizing!

After having the medicine and cultivation level, I didn't care about the death of my woman and children, let them live and die, and abandoned them.

This novel is a bit novel, a Western fantasy novel. The early plot is very good, but the writing is not good throughout the whole book. The teacher dies first and then the father. I really want to know why all the protagonists in the novel have to die except the heroine? Isn't it good to develop peacefully? Let's talk about the heroine problem: This is a rather deceptive story about a monk. The protagonist married two wives for no apparent reason. After the protagonist came back from another dimension, one wife died of old age and died. The other was gray-haired. The male protagonist smiled and shook hands with the gray-haired old heroine to say goodbye. Are you sure she is your wife? It's not like there are no female mages in the article. I don't know what the author was thinking about. The protagonist also had two assistants who collapsed and died. Let's talk about the male protagonist: Needless to say, if you read the whole book, you can tell in the first few dozen chapters that the protagonist is a bit demented and stupid. The description of the duel scenes is extremely poor. After every battle, he is exhausted and unable to wait for others to save him. Anyone related to the male protagonist will die. The master, biological father, and his mother died in the first chapter. There are too many assistants... The protagonist's sister disappeared in the later stages. That's it, it's up to you to read this novel. Anyway, I've finished the review. No need to say if you're unhappy with it, you can write it. I am just a reader, I can write, but I am too lazy to write. Moreover, the author makes money by writing novels, but I do not.

Personal opinion: After reading more than a hundred chapters, the words comparing the protagonist's strength across levels appear frequently in the article. The description in the article is: the protagonist has just become Fa Ye, and when fighting in other countries, he also describes that his magic is as strong as first- and second-level witchcraft. When the protagonist was an apprentice, he killed enemies whose mental power was equivalent to that of a second- or third-level wizard (Quest to Explore the Bat). When Dark Realm returned to his family, he described many times that his mental power was equivalent to that of a second-level wizard at the apprentice level. There are many more such descriptions. I've seen The Sorcerer, The Wizarding World, Mystery Journey, The Wizard's Path, and more. These wizards or wizards have strict hierarchies. Level 1 is level 1, and killing people across levels is your ability. However, it is not okay to constantly use your non-class cultivation as a metaphor for the mental strength, or even spell strength, of levels 2 and 3. This shows that your hierarchy is not strict at all. In addition, originally the logic of this book was not strong, and it was barely readable. If the level was messed up, it would still be worth watching the game. I have read this book carefully. If I didn't like it, I would have left a bad review earlier and wouldn't have typed so many words. I'd give it an okay rating. Ignoring some of the bad points, I can still continue watching it. It's really not easy to find a good book. Especially for those who have read the novel for a few years. This is purely a personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

While reading this novel, he suddenly hugged me from behind and said that I was much more charming than before and that I felt younger and younger. I used to have the habit of staying up late and had some dark spots on my face. Peas didn't get close to me. My mother-in-law was still there and my husband still held me. How shameless! ! Fortunately, my father-in-law (brilliant wisdom) taught me how to clean myself better. Now my husband talks so disgustingly that I can't stand it...

The character of the protagonist is very immature. He cares about food but not fights. He doesn't know how to hide his clumsiness at all. He is like a child who always wants to show off when he gets something. Then he is suddenly attacked and fucked violently without any scheming. To say it sounds good is to be honest, but to say it sounds bad is a bit stupid. If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, he would have been killed by others.

What a shame, the monthly subscription service is now charging a fee. Is this a slap in the face? I don't want to read the rest. I'll just charge you.

Can you write rubbish? What the hell are you writing about?

In addition to having power, what else does the protagonist have? ? All the loved ones are dead, or the protagonist has never loved at all and only thinks about powerful power! What's the meaning?