Lord of Rot

The writing is okay, but I have a bit of a complaint. The preserved eggs are made from lime. There is no quicklime in nature, it is calcium carbonate. How did that kid make preserved eggs directly using calcium carbonate?

The main line is clear. Although the plot is old, the writing is good. The management aspect is a bit poor. There is too little infrastructure. As the four major elements that are easiest to imagine and collide with each other in novels about different worlds and the present world, culture, products, creatures, and infrastructure! War is inevitable, but using too much ink can easily make people bored. Nine out of ten novels are about war, but none of them can write well about the development and construction of culture.

I read a few of these later and it crashed. I guess that will be the case later on, so I deleted them.

It was a masterpiece of farming in the early stage, but in the middle stage, I felt that it had taken too much progress. A territory did not develop clearly and then started to blindly expand the territory. In fact, there is still a lot to be written about the Porcupine Territory, but I don't know if I was worried that some of the plots were too cliche. In short, it was a bit too fun for me to write. In the later stage, I started to replenish the world view, and the focus has moved away from farming. However, the adventure is not like adventure and hegemony, and it is not like fighting for hegemony. In addition, the presence of Goldfinger is low, and the dungeon in the crypt is relatively sloppy. It is considered as food for now.

It feels very boring to make guns and cannons in a magical world. Writing about technological weapons in a world where the power belongs to oneself and fighting is all about fists and swords is very disgusting and uncomfortable.

It felt good before it was put on the shelves, but there was too much farming water, which can be dealt with in one stroke. After it was put on the shelves, I had to write a few awesome chapters about ice cream and ice cubes. Then there were a few pictures of the assembly line, and 10 chapters of water life created half a chapter of the main story. A golden finger with a life limit and the ability to move the crypt would be very useful? I just want to add some money. The undead plug-in is already available. You can learn skills through resurrection. There are multiple undead troops. In the later stage, you can magically resurrect so that others can become magicians so that they will not be targeted. The result is that it keeps pressing and pressing. It is already very powerful. I still have to climb the musket, so I guess readers will like it more directly.

The author has his own ideas and settings, but... Can't fantasy novels be more courageous? It would be really hard to weaken the force. Then you might as well completely throw away the fantasy setting and simply write a lord farming novel. After watching so many Lord Farming movies, for any Lord Farming game that adds magical settings, you really want to weaken the magic while adding high-looking magical settings. The setting also says it is due to the magic tide, so we can figure out why it was weak in the early stage. But when I saw the back part, it really felt like scientific farming, not magical farming. Having said that, all the magicians should give up. There is some farming

The formula is quite old, but this is an era when novels are worse than others. This one is at least more readable.

Before it was put on the shelves, I thought I had found a treasure. After it was put on the shelves, after reading a few chapters, I felt that the author's level was just that. It's understandable that you want to attract money, but don't treat readers as fools. You're not a fool. It's okay to attract money from readers. But if you write novels that treat readers as fools, that's too much.

I've read more than 40 chapters, and it's not bad, but there are too few extraordinary things. I feel like there's nothing else to enjoy except the resurrection of the dead. Maybe it's a slow-burn novel, but it's quite interesting.