I Became an Immortal in the Mountains

It's okay, but not much. For example, pig's trotters must be weaker than others in cultivation. Fighting depends on that mountain. That's okay. I often win with great difficulty. The enemy runs away several times. It's so disgusting. Although pig's trotters, a war god from Shilipo, must be in trouble in various ways. The free chapters are already like this. It's even harder to imagine later. Even if it advances the plot, it still feels very aggrieved. A It's the pig's feet that just want to develop quietly but all kinds of nonsense have to be found in the pig's feet. One is that the pig's feet are definitely weaker than the enemy, and then they use the pig's feet to support them and finally win the battle. The enemy runs away, and then the enemy develops and comes to trouble the pig's feet. He runs away again, and the cycle can be watered for n chapters. Adding one block between the two makes it even more frustrating. The pig's feet character design is okay, no matter what extraneous things, it's pretty good, forget about the rest.

The heavenly beings were very rare in the past, but a trashy heavenly being from the Phantom Sect became very popular. I thought the heavenly beings were so awesome. After killing the Sanyang Sect, they were all heavenly beings. So they are considered trash from the Phantom Spirit Sect? And what kind of sect is that at the beginning? It's not from the spiritual world? Now that the Sanyang Sect is so awesome, can this person be the leader of a heavenly being in the world of cultivation? I don't know how you determined this level. I just wanted to write about Sanyang Sect as awesome, and then as a water level, and then as a level realm. I felt a little bit happy at the beginning, but now it's no longer interesting. I don't have the urge to wait for the update and read it right away. Hey

Every time I was beaten to the point of being unable to fight back, I developed new abilities. I was always at a lower level than the enemy. I was even almost raped to death by someone from outside the world in the mountains. Isn't this aggrieved to me, the author? ? ?

The protagonist is in the True Martial Realm, and Li Miaoxuan is already a Grandmaster. The protagonist is a Grandmaster, and she has risen to the Dao Fire Realm. I don't know if she can catch up with her from behind. Anyway, the protagonist was crushed in front of me.

The plot is average, the main character looks like a retard

MD, why do you write this Lingxu Sect in such a disgusting way? It's like I can kill you, but you can't fight back. It means you have bad conduct and bad intentions, and you are a scourge. Yeah, this makes me so angry

The main plug-in has no intelligence and is completely an auxiliary tool for cultivating immortals. It does not directly provide skills, cultivation, or treasures. Everything depends on the protagonist obtaining it through plug-ins. The protagonist has a different personality. He will not offend others unless he offends others. His character is in line with the ordinary. He seizes the opportunity to cultivate immortality and does not waste time. He basically does not leave the fairyland to wander.

The plot arrangement is logically inconsistent, and the data in the upper and lower sections of a chapter do not match up. The score of 7.5 Is the upper limit, and this score is artificially high.

You made a demon sword master look like the protagonist. He couldn't kill him even though he was distracted several times. It was annoying to watch.

It's very interesting. The so-called "Become an Immortal on the Spot" is also the title of the book. The protagonist's cultivation level is always lower than others, and it depends on the mountain to beat people. It would be better to remove the main character and just see the mountain as a spirit. . .