
Pirate's Evolution Fruit
About This Novel
The protagonist Roland was reborn in the world of One Piece and ate the fruit of evolution. In order to complete the adventure around the world, he met the crew of the Straw Hat Pirates along the way. After entering the Grand Line, Roland became a crew member of the Straw Hat Pirates and completed the adventure of the Grand Line together.
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Official(29)Scraped 6d ago
No wonder so few people watch it
The character of the protagonist is as neurotic as Luffy, has a soft heart, and wants to be let go even if he is an enemy. He also knows that his time traveler is still useless. The character of the protagonist is soft-hearted, a holy mother, lazy, has a weak brain, has no sense of independence, and has no passion.
Not killing people is the biggest flaw of this book
It doesn't look good, it's too naive, it's better to just watch the original work
It's not unreasonable for this book to have poor results.
Some places are really hard to describe. The protagonist didn't show anything, and the opponent knew that she was an evolution fruit user. The Man of Steel evolved in front. If you hit someone from behind, it will be like nothing. Uncomfortable. Kill time
Is the protagonist a virgin bitch?
Are you miserably following the boat again? Follow the trend and wear new.
have a suggestion
That is, the evolutionary fruit should not have the weakness of being restrained by water because it evolves itself.
The protagonist's personality is too good, right?
I obviously like Nami, but in Alabasta I secretly watched Nami wash with others.
Uh-huh, no way, there's a person on the Black Cat Pirates' ship who looks very similar to Captain Crowe and he doesn't make any noise at all? It stands to reason that it should have been gossiped about a long time ago, or is it because they usually find it difficult to simply be the captain, so when they see him, they just think he is the captain, and no one will ask the real Crowe?
It's a good pirate fanfic, but the ending is a bit rushed.
Too many words
It's not easy to score 5 points with these words of yours. It's bland and unremarkable.
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Community(0)
Official(29)Scraped 6d ago
No wonder so few people watch it
The character of the protagonist is as neurotic as Luffy, has a soft heart, and wants to be let go even if he is an enemy. He also knows that his time traveler is still useless. The character of the protagonist is soft-hearted, a holy mother, lazy, has a weak brain, has no sense of independence, and has no passion.
Not killing people is the biggest flaw of this book
It doesn't look good, it's too naive, it's better to just watch the original work
It's not unreasonable for this book to have poor results.
Some places are really hard to describe. The protagonist didn't show anything, and the opponent knew that she was an evolution fruit user. The Man of Steel evolved in front. If you hit someone from behind, it will be like nothing. Uncomfortable. Kill time
Is the protagonist a virgin bitch?
Are you miserably following the boat again? Follow the trend and wear new.
have a suggestion
That is, the evolutionary fruit should not have the weakness of being restrained by water because it evolves itself.
The protagonist's personality is too good, right?
I obviously like Nami, but in Alabasta I secretly watched Nami wash with others.
Uh-huh, no way, there's a person on the Black Cat Pirates' ship who looks very similar to Captain Crowe and he doesn't make any noise at all? It stands to reason that it should have been gossiped about a long time ago, or is it because they usually find it difficult to simply be the captain, so when they see him, they just think he is the captain, and no one will ask the real Crowe?
It's a good pirate fanfic, but the ending is a bit rushed.
Too many words
It's not easy to score 5 points with these words of yours. It's bland and unremarkable.










