To the Last Lonely Person

This book is not good, the characterization feels bad. I don't like any of those characters, including the protagonist, and I can even say I hate them. As a novice author, the author's basic writing style is still good, but the plot and characters are not. Like the male protagonist, he is indecisive. Now that he has fallen into darkness, he keeps talking about the power of the devil. I just laughed, you have already used this power, what qualifications do you have to pretend to be righteous? Can you be firmer? It's my mother-in-law's fault for suffering so much, what's the problem with hesitating for so long? Can't you be stronger after you have made a decision? The way he behaves is extremely childish! The characters are all designed to be annoying! You don't know what society is like? How can such naive ideals come from! I don't understand this book. What story does the author want to tell? Can you create some stories and characters that make people feel deeply? Sorry, maybe my words were too emotional and too indignant. But to be honest, I became more and more disgusted with this book as I read it, and I wanted to curse every character to death. However, it is not easy for the author. He is a new author, his grades are not good, and there is a picky and sarcastic reader like me. I am afraid the author also feels very bad. I'm sorry about that. But I have also written novels myself, so I know it's not easy for you. But I also have a piece of advice for you. Since you want to write seriously, then think about the story and create the characters carefully. Following trends and popular literature may easily attract popularity, but good works will never lack appreciative readers. Perhaps it only takes the accumulation of time and the precipitation of words, and stories that are enough to touch people's hearts will never become outdated. Come on, work hard. I look forward to your new book.

This book...; How can I say it well? The plot is relatively innovative, but the language and character creation are a bit poor. The first few chapters seem a bit confusing, but the later chapters are better. Keep up the good work, author!