Lingxiao Immortal Gate
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﹝Slow pace, online IQ, steady flow. The first order is 300, and the highest order is over 10,000. The more you write, the more exciting it becomes. It is a masterpiece. Please feel free to read it﹞ "The bright moon is old at the end of the world, the weathered knife of time." In this declining sect and the turbulent world of immortality, geniuses compete, powerful players compete, and there are mountains of bones on the road to immortality. Some people are born with Taoism, and some are blessed with luck, but Ye Yang, who fell into a broken sect, only awakened a seemingly ordinary destiny - [Perseverance]. "Cultivation as an immortal is not about fighting and killing, but about being human and understanding the world." He doesn't have any heaven-defying aptitude, but he is master of swordsmanship and can make every move step by step; He is not a child of luck, but he has taken advantage of the situation and taken advantage of it; When others rely on talent to crush him, he relies on fate to endure and fight steadily-- "Do you have unparalleled magical powers? I will consume you until your life span is exhausted!" "You have a great background? I will destroy your sect!" From a handyman disciple to the Fourteen States with Frost Frost, from a mortal ant to killing people in time for five thousand years... Ye Yang uses the most ordinary fate to take the most stable path and kill the craziest enemies! "Those who accomplished great things in ancient times not only had extraordinary talents, but also had perseverance." --In this life, he will use his mortal body to kill all the immortals and prove immortality! The group number is 622388176. You can enter if you have more than 100 followers.
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I haven't read a lot of it, but judging from Goldfinger, it's best for the protagonist to be a character novel like Han Paopao, which is meaningful. As long as you persevere, you will gain something, so the protagonist must be able to survive and endure loneliness. But at the beginning, the senior brother has to be appreciated by his elders and was born into a lower sect. Not only is he not enough, but he also owes a huge debt of karma. Immortality novels pay great attention to karma. If the protagonist does not pay back later, these protagonists will be too ruthless. If he does, it will be like walking with a sect on his back. If he runs away, the monk cannot run away from the temple. Therefore, the protagonist is always walking a tightrope on the stage. One wrong step may lead to disaster. Although it is possible to have both sides, it is a bit aggrieved. So as expected, there are many noble people along the way, which is also a cause and effect. The author wants to bring reality. If you write a novel about cultivating immortals, write an urban novel, which is more educational. Cultivation of immortality is the concentration of great power in one body, and respecting the strong is the truth. Readers are trapped in reality. They read a novel and are taught how to be human, but it has no reference value at all. After all, it is a Darwinian social reality. If one set does not work, the winner takes all. He is also reasonable and peaceful. If he doesn't kill you because he is upset, it means he has a bad conscience. The protagonist's rise is to violate the vested interests. He expects the other party to abide by the rules. Do you know that big fists are the rules? Don't bring anything out. If everyone practices immortality like this, the world will be ruined. Immortal practitioners don't care about this. Don't strive for the best in everything.
The beginning was too bland
Author, your beginning is too bland. Even if it is martial arts, you should have some ups and downs at the beginning. Even if the protagonist is weak, you can just write a story about watching big events happen and then pick up some treasures. Everyone comes to watch the protagonist drink from a big bowl, eat a lot of meat, and fight the strongest enemy. Instead of letting you be humane and sophisticated, there is another word for it, called dog licking.
The plot content is not attractive. If the protagonist wants to keep quiet, doesn't he have to show off less? ? I think the protagonist stole the show. First of all, he was carrying a machete and the sword was taller than the owner of Zhangtang... He always said he was low-key and showed his extraordinaryness everywhere.
A few notes on the situation
1. The limited exemption of this book is a bit unexpected. Many book friends have limited the exemption just after subscribing, and the author also feels uncomfortable. Let me tell you here that comrades who subscribe can join the group. We have previously promised you free exam guidance, career planning within the system, inspections, political review, and interview help. All are still valid. Here I would like to express my most sincere thanks and gratitude to every book friend who has spent money to subscribe. I feel really guilty and honored to see you spending money to read my books. I hope I can do my best to contribute to everyone. 2. Regarding updates, I will update a chapter of 4,000 words every day for a few days, and I will update more after the exemption. 3. If it is still possible, I hope that friends who have come to the book can try their best to give me a subscription. After all, the performance of this book is indeed average. Thanks to the dime subscriptions of people who have loved it all the way, it has persisted to more than one million words. 4. Sore throat, will be updated at noon tomorrow.
Everything else about this book is pretty good. The only problem is that the author could stop writing about the interactions between the male and female protagonists. If you really don't know how to write, just write less. It's just that description every time. It's really embarrassing to watch. If you don't know how to write, I recommend you to read some of Ji Cha's books and see how they write.
One thing I'm more confused about is, did the protagonist ignore the strange woman in the forest after suffering it? For example, if you don't report it to the sect to deal with it, what if a member of the sect or a disciple is also harmed? Or should you wait until you become stronger and then kill him?
Ancestor of the side sect: Starting from the powerful method of the Elephant Demon
I recommended a book from a friend. I found it by accident. It's very good. You can read it.
Don't like the protagonist being in the limelight and being targeted
Is this a system flow? I don't understand, please let me know
What type is the protagonist?
Is the protagonist living a romantic life in the world, or is he trapped in the mountains? Although there are a lot of spiritual White Lotus going on, the former category is still the one that more people watch for a long time. And is Wang Dong the second generation that the author met in his life?
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Official(78)Scraped 2d ago
I haven't read a lot of it, but judging from Goldfinger, it's best for the protagonist to be a character novel like Han Paopao, which is meaningful. As long as you persevere, you will gain something, so the protagonist must be able to survive and endure loneliness. But at the beginning, the senior brother has to be appreciated by his elders and was born into a lower sect. Not only is he not enough, but he also owes a huge debt of karma. Immortality novels pay great attention to karma. If the protagonist does not pay back later, these protagonists will be too ruthless. If he does, it will be like walking with a sect on his back. If he runs away, the monk cannot run away from the temple. Therefore, the protagonist is always walking a tightrope on the stage. One wrong step may lead to disaster. Although it is possible to have both sides, it is a bit aggrieved. So as expected, there are many noble people along the way, which is also a cause and effect. The author wants to bring reality. If you write a novel about cultivating immortals, write an urban novel, which is more educational. Cultivation of immortality is the concentration of great power in one body, and respecting the strong is the truth. Readers are trapped in reality. They read a novel and are taught how to be human, but it has no reference value at all. After all, it is a Darwinian social reality. If one set does not work, the winner takes all. He is also reasonable and peaceful. If he doesn't kill you because he is upset, it means he has a bad conscience. The protagonist's rise is to violate the vested interests. He expects the other party to abide by the rules. Do you know that big fists are the rules? Don't bring anything out. If everyone practices immortality like this, the world will be ruined. Immortal practitioners don't care about this. Don't strive for the best in everything.
The beginning was too bland
Author, your beginning is too bland. Even if it is martial arts, you should have some ups and downs at the beginning. Even if the protagonist is weak, you can just write a story about watching big events happen and then pick up some treasures. Everyone comes to watch the protagonist drink from a big bowl, eat a lot of meat, and fight the strongest enemy. Instead of letting you be humane and sophisticated, there is another word for it, called dog licking.
The plot content is not attractive. If the protagonist wants to keep quiet, doesn't he have to show off less? ? I think the protagonist stole the show. First of all, he was carrying a machete and the sword was taller than the owner of Zhangtang... He always said he was low-key and showed his extraordinaryness everywhere.
A few notes on the situation
1. The limited exemption of this book is a bit unexpected. Many book friends have limited the exemption just after subscribing, and the author also feels uncomfortable. Let me tell you here that comrades who subscribe can join the group. We have previously promised you free exam guidance, career planning within the system, inspections, political review, and interview help. All are still valid. Here I would like to express my most sincere thanks and gratitude to every book friend who has spent money to subscribe. I feel really guilty and honored to see you spending money to read my books. I hope I can do my best to contribute to everyone. 2. Regarding updates, I will update a chapter of 4,000 words every day for a few days, and I will update more after the exemption. 3. If it is still possible, I hope that friends who have come to the book can try their best to give me a subscription. After all, the performance of this book is indeed average. Thanks to the dime subscriptions of people who have loved it all the way, it has persisted to more than one million words. 4. Sore throat, will be updated at noon tomorrow.
Everything else about this book is pretty good. The only problem is that the author could stop writing about the interactions between the male and female protagonists. If you really don't know how to write, just write less. It's just that description every time. It's really embarrassing to watch. If you don't know how to write, I recommend you to read some of Ji Cha's books and see how they write.
One thing I'm more confused about is, did the protagonist ignore the strange woman in the forest after suffering it? For example, if you don't report it to the sect to deal with it, what if a member of the sect or a disciple is also harmed? Or should you wait until you become stronger and then kill him?
Ancestor of the side sect: Starting from the powerful method of the Elephant Demon
I recommended a book from a friend. I found it by accident. It's very good. You can read it.
Don't like the protagonist being in the limelight and being targeted
Is this a system flow? I don't understand, please let me know
What type is the protagonist?
Is the protagonist living a romantic life in the world, or is he trapped in the mountains? Although there are a lot of spiritual White Lotus going on, the former category is still the one that more people watch for a long time. And is Wang Dong the second generation that the author met in his life?
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Sophisticated and humane, IQ is online. The author's writing style is first-rate. He himself has been a personnel cadre in the system for many years. What he writes has a unique flavor. It is a rare good book.
Ye Yang awakened to the destiny of [Perseverance], persisted in perseverance, and practiced diligently. He has an above-the-line IQ, has both sides of the fence, is crazy about swords and swords, and takes one step at a time, eventually becoming an immortal and his ancestor. Then, the swords came out together, and from then on, one sword frosted the fourteen states, killing people for five thousand years.
The last term was free. I read 300 pictures and thought they were good. It's a good book. I recommend them.
It's quite interesting and creative. After reading it in one sitting, I can express my mood with just one word of "Happiness". I want to reach the sky, and my happiness is boundless, and I rejoice in it.
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