
Mortals and Fairies, Please Stay!
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Traveling through "The Legend of Mortals Cultivation of Immortality", he became Qin Hao, a descendant of the Qin family in Qinye Mountains. He held the clan's Immortal Promotion Order and worshiped in the Yellow Maple Valley, and obtained the [Doing one good deed a day, cultivating immortality system]! In the world of immortality, what does it mean to do one good deed every day? Is it: saving lives and healing the wounded, treating illnesses and saving lives? Is it: murder, arson, destroying corpses and destroying traces? ... Millions of years later, the Lord of the Immortal Realm: the Great Merciful, Great Mighty and Virtuous, the Supreme Haotian Emperor! Also known as [Do one good deed a day, fairy, please stay, I will help you practice]
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Official(19)Scraped 24d ago
As expected, author! ! ! Why!
Recently, a lot of mortal fan fiction likes to use things based on the immortality system, but they are all written blindly and randomly, and few of them understand how to use them. Sure enough, it is still the same in this article. Another secondary setting of the Great Acacia Jutsu has appeared. I have seen this one in other fanfics before. The difference is that it is one of the three thousand avenues of the secondary setting (it is also a random spelling. The Acacia Jubilee belongs to the same way of yin and yang, and it already conflicts with the Great Onmyoji). This one is born out of the Great Onmyoji, but you have to write it clearly. To be precise, it is the supreme supernatural power. Moreover, each of the three thousand avenues in the eternal life system is all-encompassing, reaching directly to the level of the Heavenly King, and includes countless secret techniques, exercises, alchemy talisman arrays and other cultivation arts. But not many people know that this is the problem of randomly writing random fan stories! Secondly, when I saw the great acacia technique in this second design, I had already guessed Xin Ruyin's solution later. As expected, it didn't hit the point at all. It's really ridiculous. According to you, the Great Acacia Technique is the study of various male and female physiques, various dual cultivation secret techniques, and efficiency. Moreover, after so many years of development of the immortality system, will there be a situation where a boy has a female body, or a girl has a male body? So, I can't even use my brain. You only know how to use Yin Qi to maintain balance. If you try this technique, will you die? Is it possible that the Great Acacia Technique studies the supreme supernatural powers of men and women? How much do you despise eternal life? Just write something random? There is also the one-horned viper in front of you soaked in gallbladder wine. . . . To be honest, it's really funny. Let's just say that in reality, soaking snake gall in wine has the effects of expelling evil spirits and removing dampness, relieving coughs and asthma, and improving eyesight. Yongsheng Zhongben proposed that this snake gall can be swallowed directly, which can provide the human body with the essence needed for daily practice, and can effectively strengthen the body. Otherwise, what did the poor Fang Han in the original novel use to prepare this snake gallbladder and take it? Although people used this reason to deal with Fang Qingxue. As a result, when it comes to you, the good guy has directly turned into a mana filling bottle. 6666, It is indeed a great idea. Really 6. The last last. You have already used the Great Acacia Technique. Haven't you practiced the eternal architecture yet? The foundation has been laid and it has been time. Once the immortality system breaks through the realm of magical powers, its combat power can directly compete with the formation of pills. Don't you know which one is more serious? ? ? ? ? ? Taken together, this is another YY novel!
It's really not worthwhile to play with gunpowder in the world of cultivating immortals. Gunpowder may not even be as good as fireball. If you get a lot of it, a fire attribute spell will explode. It is very difficult to use. And the more you get, the harder it is to carry it with you. And if you make bombs in the world of cultivating immortals, you are really speechless.
When will Wei Lichen die?
Wei Lichen himself only had an uncle in the late Yuanying stage as his backer, so he wanted to use Nangong Wan, a disciple in the late Yuanying stage, as his concubine? What rubbish novel! The bones of the great elder of the Hidden Moon Sect you wrote are too soft.
Can the author see it?
The writing is too cowardly. The great elder of the Hidden Moon Sect was promoted to the late stage of Nascent Soul, but was seriously injured. He was bullied at his door and his subordinates refused to accept it. What the hell did you write? When will the old demon Hehuan and Master Zhiyang die? When will the revenge of the interception and killing by the old demon Yunlu be avenged? When Wei Lichen robs Nangong Wan, don't you teach him a lesson! If the author is not short of money, just pretend I didn't say it. Writing online articles is not to fulfill your literary dream, but to make money. Who would pay for it if your writing is so popular?
plot collapse
The old demon Hehuan and Master Zhiyang teamed up to kill the elder of the Hidden Moon Sect, which is completely different from the original plot. Even if it is to contain the great elder of the Hidden Moon Sect, what will happen after the Mulan people invade? Do you still want to join forces with them? Will the old demon Yunlu kill them? Do they want to kill the old demon Hehuan and Master Zhiyang? Otherwise they are too cowardly and can poison many people away. What will happen to the plot after killing him?
I hope the protagonist will not have a clone
The protagonist doesn't know any skills.
Pornographic books, the kind that involve ethics, have not been blocked. How did you do that?
In the mortal world, only mortals are cultivating immortality. When they see eternal life, they act like a fool. It's fake.
Why does Mo Fengwu have to be included in every book?
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Official(19)Scraped 24d ago
As expected, author! ! ! Why!
Recently, a lot of mortal fan fiction likes to use things based on the immortality system, but they are all written blindly and randomly, and few of them understand how to use them. Sure enough, it is still the same in this article. Another secondary setting of the Great Acacia Jutsu has appeared. I have seen this one in other fanfics before. The difference is that it is one of the three thousand avenues of the secondary setting (it is also a random spelling. The Acacia Jubilee belongs to the same way of yin and yang, and it already conflicts with the Great Onmyoji). This one is born out of the Great Onmyoji, but you have to write it clearly. To be precise, it is the supreme supernatural power. Moreover, each of the three thousand avenues in the eternal life system is all-encompassing, reaching directly to the level of the Heavenly King, and includes countless secret techniques, exercises, alchemy talisman arrays and other cultivation arts. But not many people know that this is the problem of randomly writing random fan stories! Secondly, when I saw the great acacia technique in this second design, I had already guessed Xin Ruyin's solution later. As expected, it didn't hit the point at all. It's really ridiculous. According to you, the Great Acacia Technique is the study of various male and female physiques, various dual cultivation secret techniques, and efficiency. Moreover, after so many years of development of the immortality system, will there be a situation where a boy has a female body, or a girl has a male body? So, I can't even use my brain. You only know how to use Yin Qi to maintain balance. If you try this technique, will you die? Is it possible that the Great Acacia Technique studies the supreme supernatural powers of men and women? How much do you despise eternal life? Just write something random? There is also the one-horned viper in front of you soaked in gallbladder wine. . . . To be honest, it's really funny. Let's just say that in reality, soaking snake gall in wine has the effects of expelling evil spirits and removing dampness, relieving coughs and asthma, and improving eyesight. Yongsheng Zhongben proposed that this snake gall can be swallowed directly, which can provide the human body with the essence needed for daily practice, and can effectively strengthen the body. Otherwise, what did the poor Fang Han in the original novel use to prepare this snake gallbladder and take it? Although people used this reason to deal with Fang Qingxue. As a result, when it comes to you, the good guy has directly turned into a mana filling bottle. 6666, It is indeed a great idea. Really 6. The last last. You have already used the Great Acacia Technique. Haven't you practiced the eternal architecture yet? The foundation has been laid and it has been time. Once the immortality system breaks through the realm of magical powers, its combat power can directly compete with the formation of pills. Don't you know which one is more serious? ? ? ? ? ? Taken together, this is another YY novel!
It's really not worthwhile to play with gunpowder in the world of cultivating immortals. Gunpowder may not even be as good as fireball. If you get a lot of it, a fire attribute spell will explode. It is very difficult to use. And the more you get, the harder it is to carry it with you. And if you make bombs in the world of cultivating immortals, you are really speechless.
When will Wei Lichen die?
Wei Lichen himself only had an uncle in the late Yuanying stage as his backer, so he wanted to use Nangong Wan, a disciple in the late Yuanying stage, as his concubine? What rubbish novel! The bones of the great elder of the Hidden Moon Sect you wrote are too soft.
Can the author see it?
The writing is too cowardly. The great elder of the Hidden Moon Sect was promoted to the late stage of Nascent Soul, but was seriously injured. He was bullied at his door and his subordinates refused to accept it. What the hell did you write? When will the old demon Hehuan and Master Zhiyang die? When will the revenge of the interception and killing by the old demon Yunlu be avenged? When Wei Lichen robs Nangong Wan, don't you teach him a lesson! If the author is not short of money, just pretend I didn't say it. Writing online articles is not to fulfill your literary dream, but to make money. Who would pay for it if your writing is so popular?
plot collapse
The old demon Hehuan and Master Zhiyang teamed up to kill the elder of the Hidden Moon Sect, which is completely different from the original plot. Even if it is to contain the great elder of the Hidden Moon Sect, what will happen after the Mulan people invade? Do you still want to join forces with them? Will the old demon Yunlu kill them? Do they want to kill the old demon Hehuan and Master Zhiyang? Otherwise they are too cowardly and can poison many people away. What will happen to the plot after killing him?
I hope the protagonist will not have a clone
The protagonist doesn't know any skills.
Pornographic books, the kind that involve ethics, have not been blocked. How did you do that?
In the mortal world, only mortals are cultivating immortality. When they see eternal life, they act like a fool. It's fake.
Why does Mo Fengwu have to be included in every book?









