I Have a Doomsday City

Tetris tells us that mistakes will accumulate and successes will disappear; Super Mario tells us that success does not depend on how high you jump, but on how far you run; Contra tells us that what stops you from moving forward is often not the enemy in front, but the black gun behind you; Snake tells us that what defeats ourselves is not sugar-coated bullets, but our ever-expanding self; defeat yourself and you will have no enemies; Angry Birds tells us that there are always a few pigs laughing when you fail; Life tells us not to give up, work hard, friends, fight for a better tomorrow ヽ(•̀ω•́ )ゝ

In fact, there is no need for the author to write the protagonist purely to add laughter. The author started by writing that the protagonist was an ordinary person, with fears, timidity, etc., But then gradually transformed into a pretty good and quite real character. But in the theme of doomsday, the lonely environment can better cultivate the cold-blooded and lonely character of the protagonist. In comparison, I also like this kind of character better. I hope the author can write the transformation process better, such as experiencing a certain blow or the death of a companion. Then I hope that the author can add more elements and supporting characters. The "one person" plot is too calm and without waves after all. Moreover, the number of words is a bit tight, making it seem lengthy and redundant. Come on＾0＾~Support

I have been chasing the book until now, and the content is pretty good. I don't understand why so many people criticize this book. If you think you are better than the author, write it yourself. Write and tell me, I will definitely bring many brothers to "support"

But the little girl at the back appeared, "Save me, help me, there were zombies chasing me, and then the protagonist went to help in a very poisonous manner, and then consumed the few supplies, and then was targeted by the girl, and then promised again, and then took the girl with me, I was drunk, the apocalypse is so poisonous, really persuade me to quit, extremely poisonous, the Virgin bitch, not the Virgin

I don't know why there were so many people, but I just met a little girl and grabbed her and wouldn't let go. It's not the little girl who is poisonous, it's you who are poisonous! ! ! I also saw a few people who have long said that little girls are poisonous, but now they are being criticized. It is really necessary! ! ! ! ! Lift me up! ! ! !

It was going well in the past, but suddenly it turned into an online game. There was a big foreshadowing in the past. It felt like a full-time sword fairy suddenly became a sword wielder. There is also this health value setting. A boss is 680 in the early stage. After more than 100 pictures, the normal mobs have 800 health after the first maintenance of the game. . . I didn't mention why I couldn't switch to other professions before. Also, why is the little girl gone? Such a big person, how many plots in the early stage, and opened a bar, and that gambling slot machine, so cheating things, the invisible sword energy has been sorted out for you, what the hell is that? Gone? Missing, not mentioned at all, the theme is good, it is a post-apocalyptic virtual online game, the main character has severe amnesia, and the transformation is so fast. I have seen more than 200 pictures, I think it is not too little. Really, there are so many foreshadowings in the front, I think the main character is going to lose his mind. The disadvantage is that he became a swordsman, suddenly became a sword wielder, the little girl disappeared, and no one was seen in more than 200 pictures. Brushing dungeons, and the first level 10 to level 15, and then level 13 to level 20. Why bother? Isn't it good for you to upgrade the protagonist? It must be such an over-the-top challenge. It is really poisonous. I feel that the author was thinking and writing at the same time without any preparation. He wrote whatever came to mind and forgot what he wrote before. . . . . Save some face, two stars instead of one. It's too bad. It was fine at first, but the more I watched it, the more uncomfortable I became. I watched more than 200 pictures and decided to quit. Don't say that I commented before I finished reading. You eat by yourself. If one bite doesn't taste good, do you still have to hold on after finishing it before commenting?

After reading more than 90 chapters, I couldn't hold on anymore. I felt that the main character's IQ was so low that he was like a fool. He raised a huge disgusting tree and fought for equipment with the main character. He spent so much material and once returned to before liberation, he couldn't even reach level 10. After killing so many bosses, he got a blueprint and two blue suits. The other ones were taken by the tree. The key tree was eaten and it was useless, so he abandoned it.

Please give me a thumbs up and give me a thumbs up. Let the author know how speechless his book is.

You can still make do with it in the front, but what the hell is happening in the back! The Book of the Abyss is gone, and various skills are merged into one skill. The protagonist suddenly becomes a big squishy. After casting Ten Thousand Swords Technique, he can only wait for the skill to cool down and wait for the next Ten Thousand Swords Technique. Especially that sword gallbladder, I was so dumbfounded that I didn't think it was possible to draw a particularly awesome skill. I don't want to say anything about changing to Broken Divine Kingdom. So many points are exchanged for things that are useless for an egg.

The character of this kind of apocalyptic novel must be well shaped. ***'S character is not suitable for the apocalypse. Can it be written logically? This kind of writing is suitable for newbies, but old bookworms won't be able to read it at all!