Cataclysm Card King

I haven't read this book, but that doesn't stop me from showing off my big penguin. Do you guys have any book saints? Let's see if there are any top bosses.

I don't know if this author has never been praised in his daily life. He arranges a supporting character in each chapter and uses the supporting character's psychological activities or the dialogue between the supporting characters to describe the protagonist as "crazy" or "paranoid". Once or twice is fine, but what do you mean by chapter by chapter? The key is that in some places, it is very deliberate for you to ask the supporting characters to praise the protagonist's "crazy" points (reasons) (normal people [most people] would not think like this at all). Then why did you do this deliberately, to create a character image in which the protagonist is "crazy"? If it is to create the image of the protagonist, then this chapter-based approach is completely wrong. The image of a character is reflected in the dialogue between characters and the things the character does. If you use the psychological activities of the supporting character to create it, it will not make me think that the protagonist is "crazy", it will only make me think about whether you are sick. And the purpose of your psychological description in Chinese is to directly express the character's thoughts and feelings, express the character's quality, and promote the development of the plot. You really don't know what your purpose is. To create a supporting character, you will only think that the protagonist is awesome? Although I don't know what your purpose is for doing this, no matter what your purpose is, this is a failure, which directly leads to your failure in shaping the characters of these supporting characters. I have read about 100 chapters, and I can't remember the name of a single supporting character. And some foreshadowings appear very suddenly, such as the letters in the book and the protagonist's reply. I feel that the protagonist's character will not be able to return, and there is a very strong sense of fragmentation. It was very painful to watch, so I decided to have a prefrontal lobotomy surgery before looking at it again.

When I traveled back in time and didn't understand anything, I just took things for granted and reasoned. I felt that the levels were designed to be passed by people, and I kept guessing right. So if I design a level where someone shoots you in the head, and if you survive, you either pass it or you fail it, do you think there is a way to pass it? Is it enough to say "I bet your gun has no bullets in it"? Wrong, this depends on whether your head is strong enough. I designed the level so that normal people can't pass it. However, I didn't expect that some people are not human, but I still let them pass it. So is my level designed for people to pass it? Am I unable to pass this level?

The settings are not clear. Forcibly applying the poker card setting, 54 epic source cards are too many, and after reading hundreds of chapters, I still can't figure out the difference between epic cards and legendary cards (for example, why there is a ghost of the devil behind it). Moreover, only the advancement of the protagonist is written. What about the advancement of other sequences? When writing for others, I only introduce the sequences, but you have 52 sequences, which is too complicated, and there is no advanced route. I feel that the sequence 9 to 0 of the Lord of Mysteries is very good. All in all, write about careers in a concise way and write about advanced directions in more detail. Otherwise, after reading hundreds of chapters, I would be a little confused about the combat power settings in this world, and feel that the protagonist wins inexplicably. Because after reading Lord of Mysteries, I feel that your writing is quite average .

Thinking about it carefully, the book friend is indeed right. This book is not a gimmick, just full of bells and whistles. The handsome reader is right, The author of "Ugly" is in trouble. Stand at attention and take a beating.

To be honest, it's really well written! Especially the part about Miss Yu, the fighting and plot aspects are also good, overall it's very good! However, the yellow part is a bit too much. If the full score is 5 points, it can be scored as 4 points. One point is lost on the color. The above only represents my personal thoughts. If you don't like it, don't like it

The man surnamed Cao had only seen the protagonist wearing a mask once in the secret realm. He did not know the name, appearance, and birthday of the protagonist, nor did he have the hair or body fluids on the protagonist's body. Then a fortune teller under the surname Cao divined the protagonist out of the vast sea of ​​people. Good guy, I'm just good guy Is this divination so unnatural? Divination out of thin air? Don't need a medium? There is also a man named Cao who has found the protagonist, but he did not find reinforcements and blocked the street, allowing the protagonist to escape. And after the protagonist ran away, he came back This plot is too poisonous

I gave it five stars because I was really upset when I watched Song Yu's part, Real Sword Man

After reading the novel, you will find that there is a routine from beginning to end. The dungeon that the protagonist enters will always change. It will always make others lose and benefit yourself. It will always be introduced at the last moment. How dangerous and dangerous, and then the protagonist will rush forward like a paranoid and like Jianzi. Can't you change the routine?

Poisonous, run away quickly, trick people into killing them? The front is fine, but the further back it gets, the more poisonous it becomes, and I can't bear the nausea.