Death Racer

Mo Yan's "Don't Be Knocked Down by the Strong Wind" really touched me a lot, especially "the more difficult the situation, the more literary works can burst out the power that directly touches the soul." The "Dead Race" in front of you may not be considered a qualified online article, but if it can let you experience a special fantasy journey, its existence should be worth it!

The worldview is broken and confusing, like a hodgepodge, which makes people feel dizzy when reading it. If it is not mixed with messy elements, such as One Piece, Transformers, etc., It will be a good book. In my personal opinion, if you follow the normal development route, it is survival and development. This is the main foundation of a novel. Elements such as One Piece and Transformers are equivalent to branches on the main trunk, and the branches are almost as thick as the main trunk. Finally, they are forcibly merged back into the main trunk, making it confusing and uncomfortable to read, which greatly affects the reading experience. A subject with great potential was strangled to death in its seedling stage. Can the author understand? Originality is the use of ingredients to highlight and sublimate the main ingredients. It does not mean that just putting all the ingredients in a pot and simmering them is called originality. Creation means transforming imagination and fantasy into something that readers can understand. It does not mean that the author fabricates a complex world view so that readers can understand it all. If the author's writing skills are not high, then he should try his best to simplify and simplify the text, get rid of the dross and take the essence. It is better not to have extraneous things than to affect the core. Make it so that readers can understand it. The more complicated the thing, the more complicated the logical relationship will be, and the more it will test the author's level. It is not just a simple explanation of the settings in the article that will allow the reader to fully understand it. The more I read this book, the more disappointing it becomes. I hope the author will take this as a warning, learn from his experience, and continue to create new works.

In fact, I feel that this book is still salvageable, but I still look forward to the author's next book. Come on😊

Monthly tickets are definitely the greatest support. If you increase the number of fans, you will be motivated to write!

Why was this book blocked? Is it convenient to disclose it? A lot of new books have been blocked recently... It's very inexplicable

The beginning of a new book is another journey. Purebred tombs are painted with immortality. It is not easy to write a book. If you like it, collect it. If you don't like it, please turn around and buy another one. Please be merciful!

I read four chapters and it was about a mess. Nothing was explained clearly at the beginning. How big is the elephant chariot? What the hell is this? They always say that the warehouse is not heavy enough. How big is the warehouse? How big is the thing you want to install? You just said that the Holy Spirit is too big to be installed, but you can describe it carefully. The specific attributes of the things in the land of disaster are also unclear. If you don't have that skill, don't find new ways to use this obscure writing method. Isn't it good to follow the step-by-step narrative? The beginning is not attractive, how can you keep watching later?

It's a mess, here and there. If you like One Piece so much, why don't you write a fanfic? Your subject matter is completely incompatible with your content.

Yo Dou didn't expect to receive the reward, it was quite unexpected, thank you!

I really can't stand it anymore. The book is a good book and the plot is a good plot. The only flaw is the protagonist. It's a pity that the protagonist forgot to bring his brain with him when he went out, so he was confused and said that he was a stupid person or he was looked down upon. Not suitable for me to watch, bye.