The Lord of the Abyss Who Entered the Soul with One Shot
About This Novel
A hundred years ago, the Blue Star world fell into the endless abyss, and the era of abyss lords for all people began. Become the lord of the abyss, expand your territory, and resist the invasion of the abyss. The lord is hope, and the lord is destiny! A hundred years later, a young man gets the talent of entering the soul, a treasure box, a resource crystal, and a summoning scroll. If he draws ten consecutive shots, he will get the perfect one? A hundred consecutive draws will lead to a legend? What are you waiting for? When Wu Feng, who became the will of the abyss, was interviewed: "I really just didn't want to lose my identity as a lord, you believe me!" When you stare into the abyss, I am the abyss! ------------The new book "My Bond Is Above You" has been launched seamlessly, with hundreds of updates on the shelves, you deserve it. Readership: 892119197.
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Official(75)Scraped 21d ago
He is really good at writing. In five days, he wrote more than 200 stories with 500,000 words. He has not passed the 7-day novice period. Are you planning to write a 100 million-word article?
Maybe your price is not worthy of your writing style?
If the price is just an ordinary membership book, it will undoubtedly be of high quality and low price, but as far as the current situation is concerned, your price obviously does not match your writing style. To put it simply, Ice Cream Assassin! ! !
There is only one beautiful woman that the protagonist clearly recommends so far. It is simply a eunuch novel.
In one chapter, the data chapter takes up two pages, the list takes up two pages, and the complaints take up one page. They are all repeated by you. One hundred chapters advance the plot and are not as useful as ten chapters in other novels. I suppressed writing.
It's very watery, but I can't bear to give it up. All kinds of numerical values have collapsed, attributes, territory points, etc. What a pity. It should be written more rigorously
Not good-looking
After withdrawing, the eunuch protagonist is still written as a succubus to irritate people. I can't write, please don't write, I feel bad after reading it, I'm going to criticize you, you're in a bad mood.
When can I become a member?
Failure to write female characters well is a huge demerit, so many authors rarely write female characters. If you cannot write them well, you can just skip them.
One word "water"
It's all data with a limited number of words. The expression of one word has to be reduced to a sentence, and the data is repeated crazily.
Recommended epic lord skills
I recommend an epic lord skill that is mutually exclusive with the protagonist's skills and can be assigned to a powerful villain. Skill name: Gladiator Skill Quality: Epic Skill effect: 1. The upper limit of the number of each unit under the lord is permanently fixed at 1. 2. Before the battle begins, it is mandatory to randomly select a soldier from each of the enemy's arms to compete with the designated arm under his command. 3. If the gladiatorial battle is won, all corresponding enemy units will be destroyed. 4. If the gladiatorial battle fails, your own unit will die and you will lose the right to recruit again.
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Official(75)Scraped 21d ago
He is really good at writing. In five days, he wrote more than 200 stories with 500,000 words. He has not passed the 7-day novice period. Are you planning to write a 100 million-word article?
Maybe your price is not worthy of your writing style?
If the price is just an ordinary membership book, it will undoubtedly be of high quality and low price, but as far as the current situation is concerned, your price obviously does not match your writing style. To put it simply, Ice Cream Assassin! ! !
There is only one beautiful woman that the protagonist clearly recommends so far. It is simply a eunuch novel.
In one chapter, the data chapter takes up two pages, the list takes up two pages, and the complaints take up one page. They are all repeated by you. One hundred chapters advance the plot and are not as useful as ten chapters in other novels. I suppressed writing.
It's very watery, but I can't bear to give it up. All kinds of numerical values have collapsed, attributes, territory points, etc. What a pity. It should be written more rigorously
Not good-looking
After withdrawing, the eunuch protagonist is still written as a succubus to irritate people. I can't write, please don't write, I feel bad after reading it, I'm going to criticize you, you're in a bad mood.
When can I become a member?
Failure to write female characters well is a huge demerit, so many authors rarely write female characters. If you cannot write them well, you can just skip them.
One word "water"
It's all data with a limited number of words. The expression of one word has to be reduced to a sentence, and the data is repeated crazily.
Recommended epic lord skills
I recommend an epic lord skill that is mutually exclusive with the protagonist's skills and can be assigned to a powerful villain. Skill name: Gladiator Skill Quality: Epic Skill effect: 1. The upper limit of the number of each unit under the lord is permanently fixed at 1. 2. Before the battle begins, it is mandatory to randomly select a soldier from each of the enemy's arms to compete with the designated arm under his command. 3. If the gladiatorial battle is won, all corresponding enemy units will be destroyed. 4. If the gladiatorial battle fails, your own unit will die and you will lose the right to recruit again.
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[Lord Group] [Features]: The whole world has fallen into the abyss, turn on the power of the protagonist and transform into an abyss lord to show off. [Current combat power]: 55 [Visual potential]: 75 Welcome to like and dislike to place your bets
I've read about 350 chapters, so let me tell you my opinion. There is nothing wrong with the plot. This is what a game-oriented lord story is. It has a normal snowball development and the plot is okay. There is no poisonous point that can immediately dissuade the reader at a glance. But one thing is that the data expansion is very serious, especially after the blood pool building, there are really a lot of epic heroes, legendary heroes are everywhere, and the orange heroes are not as good as dogs. Then the author might as well make it a little more difficult to obtain these heroes from the beginning. This is still a situation where the protagonist only monopolizes a few areas. If the overlords and lords monopolize a few heavens and one layer, wouldn't they have hundreds of mythical heroes? Another point is that there are no people engaged in production in the territory? Even if people are taken out, they still have to feed themselves. This is not a game, and there is no farming content at all. A lord supports hundreds of thousands or millions of people, but in the end he doesn't even have anyone to farm and harvest food. Do they all rely on eating game? Also, the plot is a bit delayed, with 350 chapters and nearly 2 million words. There is not even a unified kingdom, let alone a kingdom of heaven or several levels of hell. Summary: The plot is okay, but the data bloat is serious, the plot is dragging, and the problems with basic supplies can be ignored. After all, this book can be considered a good read. It's just food, after all, the above shortcomings don't affect the reading experience.
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