
Life as Bait
by Diao Bamboo
About This Novel
The Day of Disaster is the name given to the evil force devouring life by the creatures in the mainland. There is an evil and unstoppable force stationed in the endless dark forest. On the Day of Disaster, the sky will be covered with darkness, and the evil force will appear to devour the living beings.
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Official(1)Scraped 6d ago
come on
Try to write more. You can write weapons and character introductions in the chapters where the characters will appear. It would be a bit boring to write directly about weapons and characters. Weapons can be used to lay the groundwork for what follows. For example: I heard that this weapon is one of the ten most deadly weapons in ancient times, and its name is: XXX. This weapon still has spiritual energy. He who possesses it.... In short, this is just my opinion, and I made nonsense of the example (you don't have to read it). Anyway, your idea is very clever. Come on!
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Official(1)Scraped 6d ago
come on
Try to write more. You can write weapons and character introductions in the chapters where the characters will appear. It would be a bit boring to write directly about weapons and characters. Weapons can be used to lay the groundwork for what follows. For example: I heard that this weapon is one of the ten most deadly weapons in ancient times, and its name is: XXX. This weapon still has spiritual energy. He who possesses it.... In short, this is just my opinion, and I made nonsense of the example (you don't have to read it). Anyway, your idea is very clever. Come on!









