Elden: the Ring of Disaster

1. Since Soul-based works have always been known for their fragmented narratives, and the story in this article begins in the heyday of the Golden Dynasty when there is an extreme lack of information in the game. Therefore, in terms of historical line setting, the author based on his own research and understanding, adopted a large number of original works for the purpose of artistry. Due to the limitations of the author's personal level, there is a high possibility that there will be settings that cannot convince the public. Therefore, I hope that everyone will only regard this book as a fan novel based on the world view of the Fahuan, and not as an orthodox study of the Huanology. 2. Regarding the plot, some readers have mentioned that they have seen it somewhere before, hahaha. This is because the author has previously written a novel on the theme of the French Ring on an external site. However, due to various reasons, he applied for completion after hundreds of thousands of words, and then came to this site to open a new book. Since it is a story written by one person with one theme, there may be a small amount of convergence in the treatment of similar plots. This is difficult to avoid even if the author has deleted the previous manuscript in the computer and completely re-created it. However, readers who are following from other sites or not can rest assured that this is a new book that the author has written after a long period of preparation, and the subsequent plot development will be completely different from the previous one. 3. Regarding the subsequent development of this book, although the Fahuan fandom has not been very prosperous at the beginning, the author will ensure that the book will be completed. At the same time, the writing of this book follows the dark epic style of the Ring of Law, but it firmly adheres to the principle of never using a knife in the character endings and emotional lines. It will try its best to give each character an ending that is more in line with the expectations of players and readers without being OOC.

From all the Elden fans so far, this book deserves to be ranked first. Others are in the third sequence. Only this book is in the first sequence. The second sequence in the middle can be said to be a gap. But this book has a very regrettable point - it was published too early, and was stabbed too hard in the back by Hidetaka Miyazaki. For example: 1. The major demigod B-blocks created in this book undoubtedly fit the Elden Ring itself, but after the DLC was released, many of the demigod B-blocks in the original game were completely eliminated. 2. Dragon Feast Ceremony. In this article, although there are blood differences between the flying dragons and the ancient dragons, they are undoubtedly loyal to the ancient dragon dynasty. Especially the climax of the plot where the veterans of the three thousand flying dragon army burn their blood and follow the new king of the ancient dragon Lucia Sanks in the last dance. It really ignited. As a result, the dlc backstabbed, and the mad dragon Baylor attacked his own king Platon Sang. Kes, the ancient dragon king in his heyday, was actually bitten off two heads by him. Then the ancient dragon cursed the Baylor clan and his descendants to become "flying dragons" and seduced the creatures in the border areas to perform a dragon feast ceremony. In other words, the low status of "flying dragons" is not only due to blood, but also because the ancestors of the flying dragons betrayed the ancient dragon dynasty. This is tantamount to stabbing this fan in the back. 3. The conflict between Michaela's Pure Gold Law and the Golden Law. Who could have imagined that Michaela, a "god-man" who is said to be the most suitable to inherit the Golden Law and become the new god of the junction (Godwin is not a god-man, but a demigod), would be called a "betrayal" just for improving the Golden Law (Latarn and many characters The Golden Tree does not seem to support any changes. It only needs to run the program unchanged, continue to harvest runes for the Supreme Will, and let the dead return to the tree. This seems to be the reason why Michaela later turned her back on Torena, the incarnation of love, and immersed herself in the so-called laughing law of the Infinite Tsukuyomi? 4. This article is a guess about the birth of Melina and Mersemer. Melina is the male half of the Queen of Night Eyes (the dancer of the Faith of Death and Birds) and Marika (who hates the Horned People, joined the Forge Hundreds Faith to deceive Nights' trust and betrayed the Furnace Hundreds). Born to the witches of the dynasty (the so-called lesbian children), Mersemer is the child of Malika and the snake god, who is the real first second-generation demigod. The story of these two (imprisoning and abandoning the kind, loyal and powerful eldest son, makes The daughter burns a tree as firewood) is all a satire on Malika's "maternal love", including but not limited to the real twin kings of blessings (Mengote and Mongge's complete furnace Baixiang are the purest and most perfect blessings in the junction) being thrown into the sewer and being exploited Godwin and Michaela were deliberately killed through calculation (Messemer's lines can prove that Marika calculated all the demigods and paved the way for the faded ones, although in the end A'Dian did not follow the path left by Marika, but left a lot of mess for A'Dai), etc. 5. This article has not yet written about the climax of the plot of the Ge family demigods. The Ge family is full of loyalty. The DLC plot supplement also perfectly interprets Martin's classic grand world view with a bloody family ethics drama. The other demigods are not thinking about having brothers and mothers, so the Ge family demigods will defend to the death. Needless to say, he defended the glory of the king, Mongert, who single-handedly challenged the demigod rebels and stepped on Latarn. Even if he was abandoned by his people and his mother, he still defended the glory of the king and angrily criticized the ministers. I thought I was a fool in Nantong, but in the DLC, the actual situation was that I was facing a siege by rebels. In order to share the pressure with my brother, I went around and killed Mikaela alone, forcing Mikaela to use the most powerful illusion charm in the border area, which is considered bug-level. With bug-level skills, he completed the seal on Mikaela, and then forced Malenia to come back for help, alienating the demigod alliance. War King Godfrey conquered the borderland to help Marika become a god. However, after being ruthlessly abandoned and losing his blessing, he returned as the guardian of Glory who was still fearless of death.

Good news, the book is very good, the writing is also great, and the plot arrangement is also very good. Bad news, the author's updates are extremely unstable and the subject matter is too niche.

Is the future harem or solo? If it was a harem, it would be best to take Mikayla in as well.

One chapter and ten days off. This is too outrageous

Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly! ! !

It's hard to understand that a dragon actually focuses on swordsmanship.

It's great, but the combat power increases very quickly, and I feel that there is a chance that the combat power will collapse in the later stage. The villains created by the author are worthy of praise. Aylan and Keronissa have their own characters and taste. It can be seen that the author has an in-depth understanding of the characters of the ancient dragons. At first I thought that Keronissa was Pua's son ww, but I didn't expect that he really loved his son. I started to worry that these two dragons would be beaten to death by the protagonist. The characters of Caeronissa and Alan can be seen to be similar to the loyalty of Foer and Lance Sanks, loyal to their race, family and friends. They are not simply evil people, but have their own standards of good and evil and sincere feelings. This way of shaping villains breaks through the black and white stereotypes. Each character has his own lifestyle and values, which is very praiseworthy for a fan work.

The author's graduation defense has ended, and he is revising the final draft of the thesis and design drawings in the past two days. It is expected to be completed before June 12, and updates will resume from June 13.

Updates have been very slow recently, but don't worry, it won't reduce the quality if you don't know how to cut it. I will try to mention 3-5 chapters a week after a while, and then I may have to maintain this speed for a long time, and I can't mention it for the time being... The author also has to face the external gods in life. I hope everyone will not be anxious while waiting for the update. It doesn't matter if you scold me. Stay healthy and happy, both physically and mentally. Everything is fine!