Ragnarok of Faith

Name the households in difficulty and wait and see for the rest.

Western fantasy, similar to the background of medieval Europe. The male protagonist is the heir to a baron in Pumpkin Town. His life was quite comfortable at first. His playmate Greene went to serve in the army, and the baron's father loved him very much. However, a suspicious murloc invasion ruined everything. The old baron disappears, the butler and the knight betray, leaving the protagonist alone to escape... Although Brother Ba is a new author, he is an old reader. Basically, the poisonous points that may appear in new games for newcomers have been handled well. I feel that the setting of the knight's ceremony is quite novel and self-consistent. At least the protagonist's IQ is online, especially when the male protagonist sees through the Marquis's plot in subtle ways, secretly builds up his strength, and finally kills the wandering knight hired by the Marquis. This is definitely the biggest highlight. There are no far-fetched explanations or a white-knuckle text that is easy to read. Moreover, the golden finger of the protagonist is the power of faith, trust, and persuasion that appear in the dream system. It is not difficult to figure out the title of the book. It is obvious that this is a major foreshadowing, and it may also be a hidden main line. Being able to bury the foreshadowing to this extent also shows the author's ability to coordinate the layout. There are also shortcomings. After all, this is a new work, and the writing style is still relatively immature. It is relatively lacking in psychological description and situational description, the detailed description is not enough, and the sense of picture is insufficient. The narrative rhythm is average and the sense of substitution is insufficient. I will give you [food and grass] as a general comment for the time being.

☞☞Faith in Ragnarok Trial reading date: January 17th (Test the water on February 2nd to boost) Category: Fantasy Channel Word count: 110,000 Work contract: 50%. The title and introduction of the book are okay. There is no problem with the written plot. [Editor-in-Chief Recommendation] Recommended position for works: 50% Completed work: 50% Investment Index: Four Stars Current number of investors: 49 Thoughts after reading: There is nothing wrong with the writing, and the writing is also good. The setting of Reverse Dream is interesting, the characters are three-dimensional, and although the plot is tepid, readers who can accept the first chapter will basically not lose it. However, the explanation of important settings is not clear enough, especially the setting of reverse dream. The beginning of the chapter is just a brief outline, which will cause great difficulties for readers to understand. When readers ignore this setting, the description of the two environments of dreams and otherworlds in the following chapters will feel quite disconnected.

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